I logged in just so i can review your story and how its going so far. Honestly,  I feel as though you deserve a lot more reviews than what you have. Your writing skills are top notch and you have a high quality story here. It's been a minute since a story on gts has caught my attention this much. I guess reviews are slow on here, but you do have a something freat here. I love the character developmemt and how you can see the changes as she develops her power. I say keep it up. I do want to know what happens as the story progresses. 

Hi, Diana:

This is one of the most interesting stories I have read recently. I have read these five chapters all at once, not having seen the earlier ones before. Simply stated, I am delighted with your story, and how well it is written.

I generally am not into fight discussions, and I rarely use fighting in my own writing. But I appreciate well written use of these sports, to provide a good base for a story, especially martial arts. I look forward to future chapters, and if I can find anything in your writing that I can help you with, be sure that I will. Please continue your oh-so-fastenating story.