Reviewer: MacroGod Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2019 9:16 PM Title: 2: Hello Steph

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Reviewer: smotherslave101 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2018 4:11 PM Title: 1: The Beginning

yay your back and first patreon :p keep up the good work (:

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Thank you for your support I really appreciate it! :) check your email for the specifics on your very own chapter! 

Reviewer: Syndrea Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2018 11:13 AM Title: 1: The Beginning

It is an amazing story over all, and as one of your female readers as you put it, thank you for the chapters with Mike^^

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Thank you for your feedback! :) I am glad you like it

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2018 5:01 PM Title: 21: Dropped Soap

Man thank god little max is back with Dianne, she really should.be more careful with her toy, next time she needs to wear her panties so little Max stay safe in her vagina

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Date: December 01 2017 8:59 PM Title: 1: The Beginning

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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2017 8:16 PM Title: 20: Sharing Soap

I wonder how Dianne realized that Max was missing. She seemed pretty satisfied with that piece of thread. Maybe it slipped out and she checked on herself.

I love how Dianne didn't want anyone to help her find Max. The earring part was funny. Clever how she played that off. In addition, by wanting no one to help her shows how determined Dianne wants Max to herself and that's the perfect thinking that I want Dianne to have. Just her and Max. Bliss.

Max getting a good laugh at Dianne. He kinda needed to have some humor once in a while. Then again, I bet he is happy that she is desperate to have him back. Shows that she has not forgetting him. Imagine thinking that a string satisfied Dianne better than you. That would make me a little mad. Max must feel good knowing that Dianne was missing out on his presence.

Great descriptions of Max trying to escape Zoey. Her tight walls making it difficult and kept him inside as long as possible.

As soon as Zoey mentioned the soap, I knew it was a classic shower scene. One thing that surprised me was how many women got to use the soap, and it's not even over for Max! There could be more women/girls next chapter! Interesting that he was embedded into the soap so they wouldn't even feel him. I wonder if they ever saw him though.

Who washes their genitals first with soap? I thought the face is first. Maybe Zoey is still learning. I bet Max was thinking "maybe I can alert Zoey at her face", but then Zoey goes straight for her pussy. Lol.

Lucky Max, got intimate with Dianne and now his sexy teacher. This guy gets so much action and I am jealous. Probably going to be used by all the ladies as soap and Dianne will use it last and find Max on it. Imagine, Dianne using the soap and when she is done, she finally realizes that Max was on the soap the whole time. Dianne might also give Max a questionable look, imagining what just went through. Well, that's how I would imagine it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Hensbabes Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2017 4:47 AM Title: 3: Truth or Dare

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Author's Response:

Thank you for your support and I hope you continue reading! :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 3:45 AM Title: 19: Unaware Traveler

Zoey seems just like all the other girls in the beginning of the story. They are all alright. Nothing spectacular like Dianne the goddess.

Zoeys age wasn't a big deal for me, but it did feel weird for Max to end up in her pussy and she doesn't even realize it lol. I thought she would be super sensitive since her hole is tight and is young so her brain responds to sensations better.

In addition, Max unloading in Zoey. Does that count toward sex, a tiny and a giantess? Well, I'm sure it counts for Max, but does it count for Zoey since Max was barely even there to her? Also, it feels kinda awkward that Max kinda got turned on by Zoey. Sure, she may be pretty, but I think if that was me, my mind would be messed up if I realized I was in a 12 yr old pussy. If this happened with Dianne, I would melt and evaporate to heaven. Such an erotic chapter, but I'm not sure if it was a good choice to have this girl get the sex scene.

Then again, I didn't pick her, so maybe the other readers may enjoy this scene. It was ok for me, I'm still excited to get back to Dianne. If I was her pet.... it would be too good to be true.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I did find the chapter a little strange but I knew the other readers wanted something like this so I added it.

Zoey is new to feelings down there so she is sensitive but also unaware to what its supposed to feel like. I haven't said she feels Max down there but she does, she just thinks its a feeling you have after masturbating. 

Also the age does bother Max but not as much as you are thinking, Max is only 4 years older, and just turned 16, so really only 3 years difference. He finds it weird and bad but not enough to turn his perverted mind away.

Hopefully the next chapter will be better! :)

Reviewer: flashbat78 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2017 8:30 PM Title: 19: Unaware Traveler

yes she seem fun

Author's Response:

Glad you like her, and thank you for your comment! 

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2017 6:23 PM Title: 1: The Beginning

I am guessing that he is going to have an arquard conversation with Zoey.

Author's Response:

I thought about doing that but decided to make it an unaware scene! Thank you for your comment and hopefully you continue following the story and writing reviews! :)