[Report This]Date: February 04 2019 4:17 PM Title: 16: Born Again
What a trippy ass dream lol
[Report This]Date: February 04 2019 4:09 PM Title: 15: Goodnight Max
What a hot way to end a chapter ;) lol
[Report This]Date: January 30 2019 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 24. Unbirthed
Hmm. Couldn’t she just have another orgasm to get Max out? Or does Dianne assume that her first orgasm didn’t make a large enough hole for him? I guess that makes sense.
I like how we got further background of Dianne’s first tiny. I really want to know what happened to him. Maybe she can tease Max with that story.
Even though the escape attempt was unsuccessful, it stil sexy to get trapped in this gorgeous milf.
While I enjoy the thought of Max being stuck inside her, part of my feels as though Dianne doesn’t have much control over him. There’s something about those early chapters where Dianne just takes Max in her hand, and sticks him on her body.
For the meantime, Max can just masturbate at the thought of being deep inside Dianne. I mean, he is quite stuck inside her which is pretty hot. Might as well enjoy it, haha.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and I hope you continue liking my story!
Date: January 27 2019 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 24. Unbirthed
Nice chapter. I'm a bit dissapointed I can't afford a patreon account, which means no bonus content for me.
Author's Response:
The bonus content can be viewed from $1 pledge but if that isn't an option, my followers can still read chapters on here for free.
Date: January 19 2019 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 23: New Mindset
Great chapter. Hope Max gets unbirthed and becomes Dianne's baby(especoally if he becomes a baby girl, male to female unbirth is my favorite), or at least remains trapped inside for a long time. Especially if Dianne has sec with a male with Max inside. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback! Unfortunately that doesn't happen in this story; however, I will write a side chapter with Dianne having sex as Max is trapped in her womb. I'll also do a male to female unbirth and post it to my Patreon, make sure to stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: January 19 2019 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 23: New Mindset
Whew! Another exciting chapter!
I love how Dianne told him to crawl down her body!
Also, great descriptions of her body position as Max was crawling between her and the bed. I can imagine her smooth stomach press him into the bed and also her hips basically humping him until he was inside her. Sexy!
The womb....hmm. That’s something that I did not expect. Well, knowing Dianne is a kinky woman, she probably shoved many things up there besides Max.
Wait a minute! What if the previous kid that Dianne kidnapped is stuck in her womb?! What if there is a skeleton inside? That would be a total mind blown for me! After all, it is dark, so I’m guessing Max still has a chance for that happening.
This chapter reminds me of that dream chapter where Dianne gave birth to Max and Max’s sister was there too. This time, Max will literally be born again as Dianne gets him out of her.
Just the thought of being stuck inside a gorgeous woman’s womb sounds hot. I can only wonder how long Dianne will keep him there. Does Dianne even know he is all the way up there? What is her reaction? I wonder if she feels him.
At the end, Max was hoping this was a dream. I’m glad it isn’t. But also, why would he wish this was a dream? He was just stating how much of an honour it was to please Dianne. Just because he is trapped, he wishes it was a dream? For me, this is erotic! I’m glad it’s not a dream. Being stuck inside a sexy woman likes this is amazing, and he went up her vagina too, the best of the 3 openings, haha.
I really enjoy it when Dianne talks to Max and teases him. I hope she tells him that she is going to keep him forever or something like that. Her verbal control as well as her body control is fantastic!
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the comment!
Date: January 17 2019 1:06 PM Title: 1: The Beginning
Amazing next chapter look forward to more (: if the size goes back to normal lovely bonus but im happy either way
Author's Response:
With the sizing, you'll have to be more specific. What is the normal size you are refering too?
[Report This]Date: January 11 2019 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 22: A Tiny Forgetful
Wow, what a sexy way chapter to start off the new year! You know, for a second, I thought you forgot about this story even thought you mentioned that you would return in 2019.
Well, this chapter was good, but also a bit shorter than I’m used to. However, I’m glad it was a sexy one.
I’m not sure how I feel about the whole amnesia situation. There was something special about him remembering of Diane as this sexy milf that all the kids would admire from a distance. Boys would stare in lust, while girls stare in jealousy.
He also knew how Diane was clever like her daughter and I loved to see him try and outsmart Diane, but in the end, Diane always wins. I loved that.
I will admit, being brainwashed by a sexy milf into thinking you are her slave is kinda hot. She can literally convince you to do anything for her and you would assume that it was normal since you can’t recall the past.
Diane could tell him that he used to live inside her pussy 24/7 and he might believe it. It’s terrifyng, but hot at the same time.
The good thing about him forgetting his past is that he would also forget Diane’s promise to return him to his sister. Now Diane can dictate his fate, and I sure hope her naughty brain can take advantage of it.
Love how she taped him to her cleavage and went to bed with him. Imagine Diane sleeping on her side. Her boob would literally be resting onto him. Amazing!
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your reply!
Every chapter is around 1200 words. And with the amnesia, brainwashed by a sexy milf is my intent for a few chapters but it won't last forever.
I am glad you still liked it and I hope you keep reading!
[Report This]Date: January 10 2019 10:46 PM Title: 14: Max and Mike
HOLY FUCK THIS IS HOT
[Report This]Date: January 09 2019 10:30 PM Title: 13: Stuck to a Hard Surface
HOT HOT HOT
[Report This]Date: January 09 2019 10:23 PM Title: 12: Soapy Mouth
Here we go... ;)
[Report This]Date: January 09 2019 10:11 PM Title: 11: All Mine
Things are about to get pretty interesting... ;)
[Report This]Date: January 09 2019 10:01 PM Title: 10: Ride of a Lifetime
Omg that was so fucking HOT!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2019 12:05 AM Title: 9: Dianne's Secret
HOLY FUCK! O.O
[Report This]Date: January 08 2019 11:57 PM Title: 8. Running with Dianne
things are about to get hot...
[Report This]Date: January 08 2019 11:46 PM Title: 7: Laura's Torture
OH NO...
[Report This]Date: January 08 2019 10:10 PM Title: 6: Finder's Keepers
Oh shit..
[Report This]Date: January 08 2019 9:59 PM Title: 5: Swallow Dental Floss
Holy shit that was close!
[Report This]Date: January 08 2019 9:27 PM Title: 3: Truth or Dare
FUCK THIS IS SO HOT!