this is good

Wow! The title name was relevant! Steph swallowed Max’s cum! I wonder if Steph even noticed. So far, only Max knew it was there. How lucky he must be to see his mark on Katie’s butt and then get swallowed by Steph. Amazing!

I forgot how twisted Laura is. Also, how old is she again? 12? Doesn’t she have the internet to see sex? Or did Dianne not get Laura a phone yet? Or she could watch her mom have fun with... oh wait, that already happened, and Laura isn’t satisfied. Haha!

I can’t believe Katie was relieved that she isn’t with Dianne anymore. That means that the teacher that had Katie probably was a pretty nice giantess. If Katie thought Dianne was cruel, she is nothing compared to Laura. At least what Diane did was sexy. Laura is basically a child and is more likely to kill them. Dianne knows how to keep a tiny safe and since she lost a tiny previously, I doubt she will be that careless again.

That previous tiny is Dallas, right? I can only imagine what he went though with Dianne before he was gone. Maybe he was a sex toy too. Or maybe Dianne used to be cruel and that for him killed. Who knows.

As for the poll about Katie, first I just want to thank you for posting the poll announcement here so I can see what you are sort of planning for this stoey’s future. Even though I can’t vote, it’s nice to see what people are deciding on.

I know you probably won’t read this until after it concludes, but I kinda don’t know what to do with her. I know my vote doesn’t count anyway, but her is my prediction: Katie is kept by Laura since Katie is more rebellious than Max which makes Laura like her more. Laura gets bored of Max and Dianne is asking for her tinies back, so Max gets retuned to her. That way Dianne gets her favorite sex toy back and everyone is satisfied.

I don’t mind if she dies or not, but I would like her to be out of the picture for a while. I think Max is getting distracted by this tiny sexy girl. Then Katie could show up in the story once in a while. That’s my pick/prediction. Hopefully the other viewers have a similar perspective.

Lastly, there is one loose end going on here. Dianne went to take a shower and is probably done soon. I wonder what her reaction will be when she finds her tinies missing.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment! So far the votes have been towards keeping Katie and Max together. Steph is going to have some fun with them and then ill add more polls to determine what happens next.

great chapter! love how Dianne makes tiny max bust a nut against the inside of her giant asshole. that rarely happens in gts ass scenarios, a tiny tiny male, trapped within a giantess huge bubble butt asshole, caked in shit and forced to blow his load by the giantess!

First off, there are 2 chapter 29s and you can’t click “next” when going from chapter 28 to 30.

Second, Max was thinking for about half the chapter. Max’s thoughts revolved around escaping and starting a new family with Katie. Lol. I found this funny. But I think I’m more interested in Dianne’s thoughts in this situation. Perhaps, her plans for both tinies and what she could try in the future. Or she can think of risky ways to punish them but not actually do them. I just love how you portray Dianne, but I want more of her thoughts instead of Max’s.

Besides that, I kind of enjoyed this chapter.

The descriptions about Katie and Max’s positions was fantastic. I like the Morse code idea, but if I was Max, I would just enjoy the experience rather than try to communicate with Katie. Now that Dianne is sleeping, it might be cool to use Morse. But during the action? He could be enjoying it.

I also love how long Dianne wants to keep her tinies inside her. Most stories seem to have their giantess’s stay inside for only moments, but Dianne is creating this system to keep them with her at all time which I approve of greatly. I would hope in the next chapter or 2, she keeps them all day as well.

I think I’m more interested in the next chapter: Pantie ride. You said I might enjoy this chapter and judging by the title, it does bring me excitement.

We got a little taste of it during the “All mine” chapter where Dianne placed Max in a little pocket in her panties. The pocket is nice, but I keep picturing a blanket wrapped tightly around him. However, the concept of Dianne keeping Max in the inside front of her panties is completely sexy. I could see Dianne trying Max in a spread eagle position as if he is tied up on a bed, but instead it’s panties that hugs her pussy all day.

You also did a similar scene when Dianne went to yoga class but she placed Max facing away from her crotch. Sure, he could see the world, but personally, I think Dianne is the type of woman who wants to force Max to see the scary world of her pussy ready to swallow him up.

I think you know that I love Max to be facing her pussy rather than her ass, so I’m curious if I will get my wish this time. If I knew it was a pantie ride chapter one week ago, I would happy to share many examples of what I would like to see. Then again, I know this is your story so I don’t want to take over a scene or anything. But I do like to influence some sexy scenes though.

This panty experience will feature both Katie and Max. The main character is Max so the title of the chapter may refer to just him, so there is a possibility that Katie will ride on Dianne’s bra. The other option is both Katie and Max are in Dianne’s panties. Actually, there could be a third option where Katie is inserted inside of Dianne while Max is on her panties watching. Ok, there’s actually a few more possibilities, but what seems confirmed is Max riding on Dianne’s panties. Katie could be anywhere but Max is defiantly on her underwear next chapter.

Then there is the question of which side of her panties and how would he be positioned. My wish is Max is inside the front of her panties, forced to hug the pussy lips trying to kiss him and suck him inside. Bonus points if he is tied to the panties and while Dianne’s pussy is trying to pull him in, her panties hold him back and it’s a tug of war on Max all day. His head, midsection, and dick go in and out of her pussy.

I could just imagine Dianne pressing a finger or two onto her panties, forcing Max into her pussy. I could also see Dianne going to the bathroom and opening her panties to check on Max, and saying something sexy like “I’m going to keep you like this all week” and then release the waistband to seal him back up against her.

As for Katie, I don’t really mind where she goes as long as Max gets stuck to Dianne’s pussy. Katie can ride on the back of Dianne’s panties, be inside Dianne’s ass, trapped in a bra cup, or be in her shoe.

I’m so excited for next chapter! I hope I don’t hype myself up too much, otherwise, I might leave a sad review. I’m sure it will be fine. I just have to have patience. Your content is just too sexy!

Author's Response:

I fixed the chapter issue, thanks for letting me know.

I know I said this before, but Dianne flirting with Max with her seductive words is a thing of beauty. I loved how Dianne teased Max while Katie was in her panties.

I think more dialogue is a great bonus to these recent chapters. I love the promises that she makes. If one tiny escapes, then the other gets punished worse. Please tell me that Max gets punished. While Katie does seem like a girl that needs to learn her place, the chemistry between Dianne and Max is super sexy and amazing.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment and I appreciate the good feedback :)

Holy fucking hell that was hot! I loved reading that from her perspective! Especially seeing how aroused she gets by all the power she has over her tiny “slaves”… ;)

Hmmm... So this must be Miss Kenny’s slave. A tiny girl.

I still wonder what happened to Dianne’s former slave.

Well, a tiny girl from school and the teacher has her. Sounds like detention forever. I wonder if Katie is into it or not. She seems to have an attitude, I’m not so sure. Instead of asking if he was alright, she just wanted him to thank her. Hmm. Quite the character.

I’m kinda interested in Miss Kenny meeting tiny Max now. I wonder if she will treat him like the naughty student. That could be fun.

Now that Max is free, I wonder how Dianne will treat him. I hope she still gets to play with him and is still horny for him. I miss her teasing when she kept him in her underwear. I love those moments!

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

There will be a side chapter on the back story of Katie and Miss Kenny, but through the story you'll only hear parts of what tortures Katie went through.

lmao that last line tho 

What an interesting plot twist with the amnesia ;)

Hang on. What if Miss Kenny had the kid that Dianne originally had?!!! Now that would be quite the reunion!

Also, I wonder where Miss Kenny keeps her little friend. Would be nice to know how long she keeps him there too.

This would be great if Dianne and Miss Kenny exchange ideas about how to gain pleasure and use their tinies for fun.

Usually, I’m against the idea of multiple tinies, but I think this is an exception. Things are looking good.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

There is a story I have in mind for Dianne's old tiny. But that would likely be in a side chapter.