Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2020 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 82. Morning Masturbation

Man, the world has gone crazy since I last reviewed. Guess I will be online more often now. Haha!

Back to this chapter: I forgot that Katie and Max were still inside Selina. There wasn’t much mentioning Selina in the last chapter so I kind assumed that they were already out and you forgot to say that. Lol.

Ok, that masturbation scene early on was amazing. Also, very creative again! Having half of Katie in Selina’s ass while her top half is in her pussy is incredible. I bet it looked awesome for Max from his view!

I still desire a scene where Selina plays with Max in a similar way that she played with Kate. I mean, that was hot! Selina was planning on keeping Max in both of her holes and then going to anal vore him. That’s crazy!

Then near the end, we have Selina rushing to get ready for her appointment and she decides to keep Max held tight to her body! I hope she chooses extra tight panties! Also, maybe Max might grow to a few inches tall so Selina could handle him a bit easier. Half a cheerio seems very small. Lol.

Maybe the doctor will accidentally push Max inside Selina’s pussy. Or maybe Max helps with the physical examination. Hmm.

Overall, this is one of your best chapters despite being on of the shorter ones. Heck, I didn’t even realize it was short since it was such a vivid chapter!

Author's Response:

Yeah it really has. I hope you stay safe!

I guess I didn't really mention much of Selina's insides during that chapter lol

Thank you, I try to keep things different and interesting to read so I am glad you enjoyed it!

Most of my readers seem to like Max being small enough for Katie to have her fun with him, so it could be a few chapters before Selina gets the chance to use him like that. 

You'll just have to wait and find out soon lol

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2020 12:50 AM Title: 1: The Beginning

Awww...that was a very sweet chapter.  I love these two together. 

They are genuinely she and unsure about themselves even though they are massive perverts. 

I hope to see more on their relationship.  And some cute cuddly time for the two at normal size.

Great chapter man.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope I was able to capture their loving/affectionate side that is usually hiden behind their pervertedness.

I'll make sure add a cuddling scene somewhere in the near future.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2020 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 72. Micro Dream of Hair

Seems like your patrons got some good taste. I also like the Witcher and Star Wars: the clone wars, so it’s interesting to see what other things people enjoy besides these giantess stories.

Back to this chapter. Ever since Selina brought Katie and Max back home, I have been really enjoying the chapters, not much from the content itself, but more from the anticipation that Selina will have her way with Max soon. Looks like it’s going to be the next chapter now.

As much as I wanted it to be a one on one moment with Selina and Max, I guess a super tiny Katie won’t make that much of a difference. But wow, Selina is making me excited. Love how she calls Max a dildo.

That last scene was great! We all know Selina is aware of Max, but her playful banter of pretending that he isn’t there is downright sexy! I could only imagine the view he had of Selina’s ass hovering above him!

This next chapter has the potential to be my favorite all time chapter in this story. So far, my favorite is still the chapter when Dianne tricks Max into keeping him tucked in her panties and she slides him in a little sewn pocket and hides him down there. The way she manipulated Max into being forced to please her was one of the hottest things I have read on this website.

While I know Selina is more of the playful type and not as dominant as Dianne, maybe Selina could make a playful threat of keeping Max inside the front of her panties all day. I bet she would probably savor that idea after using Max as a dildo. I don’t expect Selina to actually put Max in her panties all day, but the mere suggestion of it would be pretty awesome. And maybe Katie would be the one to find an alternative idea before Max agrees to Selina’s suggestion. Haha!

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments and I'm glad you are enjoying the content! 

Hopefully you like the 2 most recent chapters with Selina. 

As always, glad to hear your feedback.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2019 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 66. Some Ass for the Fitness Class

I like the rhyme in the chapter title.

I forgot to post a review last chapter, but I figured I should post one for this chapter before I forget.

I like how Selina is taking Max to class with her, but I feel like Katie is ruining the moments. I can see that she is needed to move Max around, but I think Selina’s exercises are enough to jostle Max from place to place.

I love how Selina is still thinking of Max as the “dildo sized boyfriend”. That’s hot. I think she could also mention what she will do when she gets her hands on him next time.

I’m anxious for Max to grow back to dildo size or at least a few inches tall so he can be handled easily by Selina. Oh and I can’t forget Selina’s sexual comments toward Max. I can’t wait for that too.

Hmm. A poll for Selina to seduce a student. Will the student shrink? I mean, Max and Katie already have, but if there was a way that Brad could shrink in Selina’s hands, then I think it would be awesome for Selina to have her own sex toy.

While I really want Max to be Selina’a toy, if Brad could shrink I wouldn’t mind some chapters of Selina seducing and then shrinking him. Selina having fun with either of these guys would be fun. (As long as they are both shrunken.)

If Brad shrinks, then yes, I would love to see Selina seduce a student which seems to be Brad. If he doesn’t shrink, then I guess Selina could still seduce him. She could give him detention and only him so after school it’s just Brad with Selina.

Example:

Selina waves goodbye to her students as they leave the classroom. She turns around and sees Brad still seated looking frightened at her. It was Brad’s first time in detention. He actually did nothing wrong. Selina just gave him detention for simply interrupting her private moment earlier today. He didn’t need to know the details. Brad heard rumors of Selina’s detention and it scared him. Everyone told him different ideas so Brad had no idea what to expect. Selina closed the door to her classroom and was tempted to lock it, but decided not to in fear of scaring Brad out of the classroom. After all, it is the only exit.

Selina walked back toward her desk, her heels clicking with each step. She watched as Brad’s eyes followed her until she sat down in her seat. He then looked away and began working on some homework. Selina wanted to toy with Brad, but she need to wait for a time when he was not expecting it. Right now, she sensed that Brad was anticipating something, so she would wait until he settled in a bit.

After some time grading papers, Selina looks out to the classroom and smiles remembering it’s just her and Brad. Brad is reading a book like a good student, but Selina has other ideas. She takes a pen and drops it at the front of her desk causing Brad to look up in surprise. Selina then gets up from her chair and walks around her desk to the front of her desk and then takes a step toward Brad revealing her cleavage toward him and asks “Is something wrong Brad?” she said startling him. Shocked, Brad shakes his head no rapidly, quickly changing his gaze from her chest to her face. Selina winks back at him and turns around to pick up her pen. She slowly bends over, sticking her ass out toward Brad who is starting to feel a little stiff in his pants. Her skirt left nothing to the imagination as Brad can trace Selina’s ass in his mind.

Selina picks up the pen and turns around to face Brad again. She taps the pen on her chin and lets it go. Brad watches as the pen falls down and lands on her chest, slipping into her cleavage with just the tip of the pen visible. Selina decides to play clueless. “Oh dear. Where did my pen go? I swear I just had it. Brad, do you know where my pen is?” She shrugs her shoulders waiting for Brads response. Brad begins to fumble with his words. “It’s ...um.. in...your...um....that” Selina puts her hand near her ear pretending she didn’t hear him. “Sorry, Brad. I couldn’t hear you. what did you say?” Selina then walks all the way up to Brad’s desk and bends forward revealing her cleavage once again to Brad. Brad instantly recoils in his chair, intimidated by the proximity of his teacher. He watched as the pen slowly disappears between Selina’s boobs. Brad has a loss for words, so he just points to Selina’s cleavage.

Selina looked down at her chest and back at Brad. “You naughty boy. Those are my breasts. I’m asking if you know where my pen is” said Selina, keeping up with her act. This time Brad stayed quiet. Selina decided to make a move. She lowered her face and whispered into Brad’s ear. “I know where the pen is, but I want you to get it for me.” Selina then stood back up. “Can you do that for me Brad?” Brad quickly nodded, almost looking like he had a seizure. Selina smiled and walked back to her desk. She stopped and looked over her shoulder at Brad still seated at his desk. She made the “come hither” gesture at Brad and he followed his teacher to her desk. He followed her around her desk until they reached her chair.

She turns around and sees Brad waiting nervously with his head level with her chest. Selina smiles and asks him “Do you see my pen?” Brad shakes his head no. “Well let me give you a closer look”. She hugs Brad forcing his head into her boobs and holds him there as Brad struggles to get free. She then rubs his face until her boobs spread apart, freeing the pen trapped in her cleavage. Selina watches the pen bounce off Brad’s head and falls onto her desk. She lets go of Brad and watches him stagger backwards, his face completely red with embarrassment and glistening with sweat.

“Let’s try again, shall we?” Selina then takes the pen from her desk and holds it as high as she can and Brad sees the pen out of arms reach. “Use that big brain of yours Brad. I know you can figure it out.” Selina watches as Brad climbs onto her chair. He slowly stands up on it and places one hand on Selina to steady himself and with his other hand began wrestling with Selina’s hand that has the pen in it. “I got it!” Brad shouted. “Not yet” Selina replied back. She felt impressed at Brad’s creativity but didn’t want it to be that easy for him.

Selina then lifted her knee and nudged it against Brad’s groin causing him to fall back into the chair. Brad tried to get up, but Selina then placed her foot onto his bulge, forcing him to stay seated. Brad quickly grabbed her high heel and tried to get it off. “Nuh uh uh. Those are my new heels Brad. You wouldn’t want to damage my new shoes, don’t you Brad?” Brad released his grip and sat back defeated as he watched Selina increase the pressure on his genitals making him wince.

Selina smiled as she saw Brad’s discomfort. She rubbed her foot a little more, taking notice of Brad’s bulge growing as she felt his dick expand. “Oh my, I think someone is enjoying this,” Selina giggled. Brad’s face turned bright red and tried to shift around to get his dick out from under her foot. Selina responded by withdrawing her shoe and placed it back on the floor. “Are you attracted to me Brad? Does this turn you on?” Selina then took each of her boobs in each hand and began squeezing them together. “I want you to pull your pants down, Brad”. Brad shook his head no. Selina leaned in closer. “Don’t you want to feel them again? All I need is for you to pull down your pants. I want to see what package you have for me.” Brad hesitated but still shook his head no.

This was all Selina needed to see. She had him. She took her arms and placed them on the sides of the chair, preventing any escape. She then stuck out her chest and moved forward towards Brad who couldn’t retreat like last time since she held the chair down. Soon, she heard the sound of a zipper and looked down to see Brad taking off his pants. She backed up and watched the horny teenager finally break down and obey her. Once they were down to his ankles, Selina took the pants off completely and threw them under her desk. “We don’t need those anymore.” She smiles and looks down at his boxes, the only thing concealing his dick to her.

Suddenly, there’s a knock on the door and Selina panics remembering that she chose not to lock the door earlier. She has to hide Brad since he has no pants on, but there is no time for him to find a hiding spot. Selina has only one option. She turns her ass toward Brad and sits on him, covering him up completely. His legs are under her, her butt is planted on his groin and his upper body is covered by her back. As the door opens, Brad tries to speak, but Selina leans back muffling Brad with her back.

The door opens and in walks the principal. The principal was a good looking woman in her fifties. Despite her age, she was still considered good looking and admired by her peers. While she takes care of herself and knows she looks good, she often envies the younger teachers and all the attention they receive from their students. Selina was no exception. The principal felt rivaled to Selina and tried to find any excuse to make her suffer.

“Did I hear some noise in here Selina?” she asked, looking around the classroom. “It must have been me. I tend to be clumsy at times.” Selina nervously responded. “Mmhmm, which makes me wonder why I even let you teach at this school.” The principal was at the back of the classroom and made her way to Selina’s desk. “You know Selina, I have heard complaints from several students, that you can be quite the distraction in class, so to speak. Especially with a revealing outfit such as that.” The principal gestured to Selina’s cleavage on full display. She had no time to hide it, but it wasn’t as important as hiding Brad. Now it was Selina’s turn to be embarrassed. “I’m deeply sorry. I was just letting some air in while grading papers. I would never do this in front of my students.” Selina politely countered.

“Don’t mistake me for a fool Selina. I know you tease your students. I know you jiggle your tits and wiggle your ass to get them to like you. I could only imagine what happens during detention. Well, I’m glad no one has to deal with that right now.” Selina bit her lip and wiggled her ass slightly. She felt Brad’s member grow under her, responding to her movements.

“Anyway...” The principal paused. There were suddenly a few voices shouting using vulgar language outside the classroom. The principal headed to the classroom exit. “I will be right back”. With that, the principal opened the door and closed it behind her. Selina and Brad could both hear her scolding the students in the hallway. Selina quickly got off Brad, handed him his pants and told him to leave immediately. Brad tried to get up, but his legs were numb. “I can’t feel my legs” he said. Selina sighed. Her ass was too strong, she couldn’t help herself. Selina picked up Brad and looked around the room.

There were only the small student desks and chairs and then there was her desk. While she enjoyed sitting on Brad, she couldn’t hide him there forever. “There, crawl under my desk” she ordered. Brad complied and crawled dragging his numb legs with him. After watching Brad disappear from her view, she took a deep breath and sat back in her chair. While sitting down, she had a nice view of Brad, still in his boxers looking up at her with fear. He still couldn’t put his pants on and he looked helpless under her desk. Selina couldn’t help but smile. She spread her legs and watched Brad’s eyes lock onto her crotch, clearly visible from his angle. He could see her panties were already wet and watched her hand slowly reached down and she began touching herself.

“How does it feel Brad? You can’t go anywhere without getting us both in trouble, and you don’t want to get me in trouble, don't you?” Brad nodded his head. Selina smiled. “That’s right, you don’t. You are stuck here, underneath my desk with nothing to do but watch me pleasure myself.” Selina began rubbing herself rapidly and watched as Brad just sat there in a trance. “Mmhmm, just looking at you trapped under my desk is making my panties wet”. Selina began to moan and due to her years of experience, she learned how to control it. She took her pen and bit it to muffle her screams as she had an orgasm right in front of Brad. He watched as her panties got soaked and absorbed all her juices.

Selina glanced at the door and decided to take her panties off. She rolled her chair away from her desk and took of her heels. She then reached into her skirt and then slid her panties off her legs leaving Brad’s mouth open in shock. “Ah, perfect” Selina said as she rolled her chair right up to her desk and shoved her soiled panties into his gaping mouth. Brad instantly gagged on it, but Selina kept a hand on his mouth to keep it shut. “Taste it Brad. Clean it for me. That’s how wet you got me”. Brad continued to struggle and Selina knew she couldn’t hold him for long.

With one arm, she had a firm grip on his mouth while her other hand traveled into one of her desk drawers and she pulled out some duct tape. This caused Brad to go crazy. As soon as he saw the tape, he began swinging his arms, making noise so Selina let go of him. “Stop!” Selina whispered loudly. “I was only going to tape your mouth shut, but maybe I should tape your arms together too!” She said. Brad shook his side to side rapidly. “No? Well, you had your chance. Now turn around, arms behind your back.” She ordered. Brad looked at her with big eyes hoping to change her mind, but Selina just smiled and ripped off some tape. Fearing that piece would go on his mouth, Brad rotated facing the desk while his back was toward her.

Selina took both of his wrists in one hand while using her other hand to tape them up. After several loops, she figured it was tight enough. “Face me Brad”. Brad, on his knees, rotated back toward his teacher, still unable to speak with her panties in his mouth. “Mmhmm, I think those panties are clean now, right Brad? I’m taking them out now, but if you make one sound, I’m gagging you for the rest of the night.” Brad looked very scared and Selina cherished it. She reached into his mouth and dragged her underwear out, enjoying every second of it. “Like the taste of pussy Brad? You sucked up all my juices nicely. Maybe I don’t need to do laundry when I have you, now do I? After all, you did such a good job at cleaning my panties.” Brad stuck his tongue out in disgust.

Finally, the principals voice could be heard echoing in the hallway and Selina and Brad knew it was time. Selina held up a finger to her lips as she smiled indicating him to be quiet. Brad however was tied up and believed that if the principal sees him tied up, then she will punish Selina and not him so when Brad heard the footsteps, he made his move. “Help!” Brad yelled, and the footsteps began arriving more quickly. Before Brad could say anything more, Selina grabbed his head and forced him between her legs against her crotch. She scooter her chair all the way until her chair hit her desk and adjusted Brad’s head so his face was rammed onto her vagina silencing him.

The door opened and in walked the principal with determination. “Did I hear a student yell help? I could have sworn it came from this classroom.” Selina felt Brad writhe between her legs. “It was just from a video, that’s all”. Selina responded, keeping her hands on the back of Brad’s head to prevent his escape. “Very well then Selina. As you know, as faculty, we are responsible for the well being of every student in this school. If you know of any student that is struggling in your classroom, please let me know.” Selina looked down at her legs and thought to herself. “Well, I think I will keep this erotic struggle as a secret”. Selina looked back toward the principal and replied, “Of course.” The principal pulled out some forms and sat at one of the far back desks in the classroom. “Don’t mind me Selina, just filling out paperwork just like you”. Selina couldn’t help but smile and waited for the principal to begin working on her forms.

Selina looked down at Brad and she could see his eyes staring back up at her. His nose and mouth hidden from view, no doubt pressed right up against her slit. Selina felt very turned on and it was risky with the principal in the back of the room, but that fact just made it much more thrilling. She lowered her head and whispered “lick” to him. Brad tried to struggle, but Selina tightened her grip on him. She raised her legs and rested them on each of his shoulders, her ankles crossing each other. Her thighs now cover his ears, the last thing he heard was Selina commanding him to lick.

At last Selina felt Brad’s tongue stretch out and tease her clit. Selina knew there was no other choice. Brad’s arms are tied up so she is free to control him. Selina’s arms meanwhile are available to manipulate Brad however she wants. She felt Brad’s tongue worship her, but she wanted to feel more. Selina loosened her leg grip on Brad’s head and used her free hands to bring Brad’s face all the way into her and hold it there. Her legs tightened back onto Brad’s head and he was locked in between them. Brad stuck his tongue out again and this time, Selina felt everything. She felt Brad’s tongue go all over and also inside her, exploring her insides. She could even feel Brad struggling to breathe and the only air he was breathing was from inside her. Selina was on her way to another orgasm when she heard the shuffle of papers and footsteps. She couldn’t orgasm now, it could jeopardize her job. She relaxed her grip so Brad’s tongue could have some rest, but not enough to free him completely. His ears were free as well so he also could hear the principal leaving.

“My work here is done Selina. I think I found an additional assignment for you Selina. I got a call from one of your student’s parents and they want you to give him private lessons. His name is Brad.” Brad began struggling when he heard this. He cant believe this was happening. “They want you to take him to your house to continue your lessons from now on.” Now Selina was moving with excitement. She squeezed her legs in response and brought Brad’s face back into her crotch smothering him. “Have a good day Selina” and the principal left.

Selina was getting turned on not just because Brad was licking her, but also the fact that she is now able to keep Brad with her for all times now. She looked down at the head between her legs and realized that this was only the beginning. And with that she orgasmed all over Brad and he was forced to drink it up. Selina backed up and let Brad catch his breath. He was down on the floor panting as if he just ran a mile. Selina smiled. “Ready for round 2?”

(This is just some fanfiction that I couldn’t resist writing. And this is without the shrinking, so imagine adding that too.)

Author's Response:

Thank you for the reply, you are a good writer.

Max is with Katie for now but I will create a new poll for if readers want Max to be alone with Selina. 

The results from a poll that i created, determined Selina to be more nice and playful instead of dominant. I know you miss Dianne because in your version of Selina, all I could imagine was Dianne doing that. Unfortunately for your sake, most readers don't want Selina to be like that.

It would be cool if Selina could shrink people but that also breaks the story and steers away from the realism. 

Kaite had some nice comments towards Max in this chapter and I will try to incorporate more with every character.

Thanks for reading, always a pleasure to have fans :)

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2019 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 63. Spending the Night with Selina

That was amazing!

I loved how Katie just gave up and left Max on her mom’s panties. She basically let her mom use Max for the night. That’s hot.

How small is Max in this moment? I knew Katie shrunk and then Max was in her nose, so I imagine Max to be microscopic, but if there was a measurement to his size, what would it be?

Can’t wait for those vivid dreams. That should be fun. Seems like it would be similar to the one with Dianne.

Maybe Max will grow when Selina wakes up. It should be fun for Max to explain that situation. I would to hear Selina tease him again.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! 

Katie is half an inch which is 12.7mm. Max is half an inch to Katie which is 0.088mm. He is double the thickness of a single hair strand. Very very small. In order to make nose inception work, I had to make him this small. In the writting, I may increase his size just slightly to allow him to travel. 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2019 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 60. Max Meets Katie's Mom

Wow! I haven’t been this excited since Dianne decided to keep Max as her little secret.

Katie’s mom is something that I have been looking forward to for a while now. What’s impressive is how quickly you made me like her. You gave her such a horny/naughty mentality and I love it! She might be even sexier than Dianne!

I mean, she compared him to a dildo! If I was a tiny guy and my future giantess mother in-law said that, I would be in heaven. And that’s just from her words only!

Next best thing was when she handed Max back. She literally dropped him down Katie’s panties! Man, I love this woman!

You weren’t kidding about making her a horny mom. I thought no one could top Dianne, but you surprised me Whereswalden. You gave Katie’s mom an incredible first impression on me and for Max I’m sure.

Also, Selina is a great name. I’m not sure if that’s what people voted on or if it was you, but great choice! Sexy name. Reminds me of catwoman playing with a toy mouse.

Alright, when does Selina get Max again? Maybe Katie drops Max in her mom’s panties. I’m ready for Max to move from Katie to Selina, and I’m also ready for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment! 

I am glad you are liking Selina so much. I am quite happy with her myself. 

The chapters change slightly due to what a Patron chose while in a higher tier. But after the nose content, the content goes back to what it normally is.

Reviewer: BigJames Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2019 9:48 PM Title: 1: The Beginning

Last chapter was amazing. Writing is so good. I hope to see more with Maxx and Amy reluctantly giving into their desires. How do your comissions work. 

 

Author's Response:

Hey BigJames, thank you for your appreciation! Check out my Patreon for all my information https://www.patreon.com/TinyExperience

Basically, commissions work with a pledge of $25. You get to dictate how you want the chapter to go, anything is game. Plus you get all the other bonuses from each of the tiers, including pictures, videos, voting polls, and side chapters! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2019 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 45. Accidental Amy

Wow, not sure why the lack of reviews, but I’m glad for the recent updates.

I’m kinda excited about the next chapter relating to the mom. I miss her. I even forgot her name.

The stuff with Steph and Amy is actually very interesting. I like how Steph is becoming the teacher and sharing these experiences with Amy as well as Max and Katie.

Yeah, weird getting an update on Sunday. Still cool to read them.

I also love how Max’s realization about his fate is kinda true. He really has no choice about what happens to him. Would love to see how he ends up with the mom. (Still can’t believe I forgot her name. I will remember next chapter.)

Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Long time no review lol 

I think there is a lack because of my Patreon page but they shouldn't feel discouraged still. If anyone is reading this, I read and reply to every comment! :)

It's his own mom this time that he is stuck with, I actually haven't given her a name yet, I might not... There isn't a big part with her unless readers request one.

I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying to story! Thanks for the comment :)

 

Reviewer: SilentStep Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2019 4:20 PM Title: 1: The Beginning

I'm really loving the attention to detail in your stories. The amount of detail provided painting a clear and beautiful picture. Great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I appreciate your support :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2019 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 35. Steph and the Gummy

I can’t beleive I am saying this, but this threesome was better than the one with Dianne. I don’t know, maybe it was because it was a surprise. I like that.

I’m surprised Max was able to have so much control this time. When he was in Dianne’s ass, she clamped down on him, trapping him there for a while which was sexy. However, here Steph has no idea of Max slipping into her ass and then climbing out? It’s funny, but amazing. Then Max simply played with Steph’s pussy while Katie was already inside? Max got everything he wanted and I think I envied him a bit which is probably another reason why I enjoyed it.

I like how Katie and Max were glad that they were not in each other’s positions, and finally at the end, they end up together in the same spot.

That last scene where Katie’s vision is blurry from the juices so she reached over and grabbed his dick was hot. I can imagine Max just watching Katie as his heart was racing as her hand slowly approached his member, throbbing and almost as if it was pointing toward her hand. Katie’s hand was heading right toward him and Max knew exactly what he was doing. He wanted Katie to “accidentally” grab his dick. It’s that feeling when you are in a line, waiting for something and this pretty girl in front of you bends over to pick up something and her butt just bumps into your crotch and she acts like nothing happened. Like, you set yourself in the path of the girl and she makes the contact. That’s what I saw, and I loved it!

The description of Steph’s ass from the inside as a “warm apple pie” was perfect. You really made it convincing that Max actually did this and is telling us his story. I can picture my hands in pie. Sounds gross, but I get the idea.

In response to your last review: Yes, I love Dianne, but no need to add her in anytime soon. If you did, that would be awesome, but I’m well aware that Dianne has taken up about half of this story so far. I started rereading your story, and I realized how far Dianne got to play with Max compared to the rest of the ladies. I doubt you meant to make Dianne the main giantess, so I’m ok with other girls having time with Max and Katie. The story is still excellent and super sexy, especially this chapter. Steph probably is my second favorite giantess anyway, so I’m still enjoying this. You can bet I will continue to read this story, it wasnt just Dianne that got me into this, but what happened to Max that got me excited. Dianne was the cherry on top that made it all sweeter. The core is still Max getting sexy action and I see no shortage of that. Your writing has improved so much that I don’t need Dianne to get me amped up for your updates.

I can’t wait the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked the chapter! This next one I wrote very descriptive. Hope you like it too!

Thanks for reading!