Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 10:08 PM Title: 10: Ride of a Lifetime

Dianne must absolutely keep Max to herself.

How can she let Max go after being the best sex toy she ever had? I'm sure Dianne expected Max to be decent at pleasuring her and will grant his freedom as a reward, but now that she realizes how useful Max is as a sex toy, she doesn't know when she can get him again.

Also, I'm glad you made this woman attractive and desirable as a giantess. Most giantess stories have a younger girl have the tiny and when they are at the girl's house, she says that her parents are not home, etc. And that kinda bothers me.

However, you embraced Dianne and made the best giantess in the story in my opinion. She oozes sexiness and I love how well she plays the dominant naughty milf in this role.

This chapter was amazingly sexy. Dianne using the dildo to push Max further inside her was fantastic. With such a large dildo, Dianne has quite the large vagina, which literally swallowed up Max and he almost got trapped in her cervix. Hot.

I also like how Max is becoming to fear being stuck against her pussy. Her hips are so wide and her vagina is so strong that it overpowers Max to the point where it intimidates him. If Dianne does end up keeping him, I hope she keeps him as a pleasure toy as well.

Max thought pleasing a pussy was easy. He thought that while he was with the girls. Now he is with a true woman, whose body has already consumed another shrunken boy before. Max has met his match with Dianne and I would love to see her teach him all her tricks.

Dianne said the last boy disappeared. I don't think she wants Max to disappear either. I hope she keeps him and does things to Max that she has been longing for since her time with the other boy. We know Dianne wants more and Max might fight back, but next time I think Dianne will take more drastic measures to keep Max so he won't escape.

It makes sense that Dianne is using Max to please her vagina. She is a naughty woman and had fun when Max was in her panties the first time. I can see a future where Dianne explains how her husband doesn't satisfy her completely and that's where Max comes in to play. I mean, Max just gave Dianne the best orgasm in a long time. That alone is enough for Dianne to keep Max. Part of a happy marriage is the sex life and I think Dianne is about to improve it by keeping Max.

I enjoy seeing Dianne as the sexual, horny woman in this story. While the girls have their fun, their sexual fun is just a fraction of what Dianne knows. Dianne uses that to her advantage, teasing Max about how she wants him to pleasure her. With Max becoming fearful of his love of pussy, I wonder if Dianne has some interesting methods of forcing Max to please her while he is resisting. I hope she is thinking about keeping him with her forever. If I was Max, this would be a dream come true.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Great reply to my recent chapter! Thank you for all your great feedback, defiantly the longest I've gotten lol but you've nailed it. You've got the characters pretty figured out now, I'll have to throw in a curve ball at some point :p 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2017 1:44 PM Title: 9: Dianne's Secret

I can't believe I'm reading this story for the first time. It's so good! I think Dianne is my new favorite giantess! She is so sexy and is a total milf! She also has that control and experience that the other girls don't have. I want to see more of this woman.

The other boy disappeared? She bit her lip while mentioning that. Did she fuck him to death before she got a chance with the dildo? I would love to see a spinoff story about her and that other boy.

Another thing that I like about this woman is that she is naughty. Also horny. She has a bit of a kink in her too. Including her husband, but getting the real pleasure from Max.

Dianne might replace her dildo with Max as her new sex toy. A new alive toy that can squirm and wiggle up inside her.

I still can't believe she had another boy. Dianne will be extra careful how about not losing Max. Perhaps Dianne will keep Max in her panties all day. Front and back. Her wide hips all wrapped up by those thin panties, her scent enveloping Max as it travels from her massive vagina.

As for ideas, I'm all for more Dianne. I think she can get real kinky and use more tricks and toy than just a massive dildo. She can tie him up, floss, rubber bands, tape, and mummify him as she uses him for her pleasure. My dream would be for Dianne to trap him against the front of her panties facing her crotch. Maybe she can sew him down, a few loops of thread around his wrists and ankles tying him down as the thread is attached to her underwear. Then she can wear him all day while rubbing herself and her legs reminding Max that he is her little toy and she won't lose him like her last one.

I think I'm in love with Dianne. So confident and sexy. Part of me wishes she can keep him forever.

I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the great review! I love the feedback and I'm glad you are enjoying it. I think I'll use some of your ideas in future chapters! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Rivenscry Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2017 11:03 AM Title: 8. Running with Dianne

Great story so far, I'm enjoying the dual-perspective done right. It's a nice change for once.

 

RE: Chapter 8's question, speaking as a girl: dick please!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm excited to hear that both genders are enjoying my story. It's good to get a girls review as well. Some readers want dildo and some dick... So I'll just do both :)

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2017 5:09 PM Title: 1: The Beginning

So far it's awesome!! I LOVE the giantess butt content.. and the giantess fart was SOOOO funny! lol keep it up. Umm I'd say use a real dick for the next chapter. A giant couple and where he's struggling to get out cause he thought getting shat on was bad..he hasn't seen anything yet. .... also add more giantess booty lol 😍🍑💨😂😂😂👏🏻👏🏻... also the detail is awesome. I vote for longer chapters too lol

Author's Response:

Hahaha thank you for the great review! :) I'm glad you're enjoying it and I'll defiantly add more giantess booty in future chapters!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2017 4:26 PM Title: 8. Running with Dianne

Great story so far. The story is well written and you can really get a feel for the characters. I noticed a few spelling mistakes like from chapter 7 near the end you have "I coughed and nearly through". That is the wrong use of through. You should have used threw instead. For example I threw the ball. This would be used in the same way. ALso in the second to last paragraph you have "Dianne Finished tying her shoes and then started her run". The "F" in finished should be lowercase. If you are okay with this type of critisim I can continue, if not I will stop. As for your question I would like to see a dildo scene but as long as the chapter is well written I could handle some M/m action. It hust sometimes when either of these themes are used in a story they seemed rush and dont go into detail. I hope you continue to write and do not give up hope. Kepp up the great work.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the reply and feedback! I honestly write all my chapters just on my phone using notepad hahaha so there are bound to be at least a couple spelling or grammar mistakes in each chapter! I'm glad you caught them and I appreciate you letting me know. I agree and I'll try my best to not rush it!

P.S. "Keep* up the great work" ;)

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2017 10:29 AM Title: 1: The Beginning

Looking forward to the next chapter. Asshole entrapment by a younger bratty girl is just the best.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your response! I did just that and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!