Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2017 6:37 PM Title: 18: Zoey

This chapter wasn't that bad as I thought. I just blocked out all detail of her age and imagined her as a sexy workout girl and it worked.

Hmm. A tear. I was wondering how Max would be free and also have Dianne not notice. Her pussy was ready to eat anything and that ball of thread was an interesting susbstitute.

That's so hot. Doing the splits, with all her weight focused on her pussy and that is all pressing Max into her. Not to mention that Max was facing her that time which makes it super sexy.

I like the frequent uploads. It helps me believe that Max's reunion with Dianne is closer than I think. Hopefully going to be sooner than 2 weeks.

Yeah, Zoey seems like a fun girl. Not sure how sexual her, but so far it's interesting.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you aren't hating the story with the switch of characters! I thought the way Max slips out was quite clever and I'm glad you liked the splits scene, I added that and him turning around just for you! I was pretty busy the last few days but I managed to get another chapter in today. Hopefully this chapter is pretty decent and I hope you continue supporting the story :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2017 11:53 PM Title: 17: Off to Work

Wow. Where did all these reviews come from? And why is everyone into the 12 year old? I had to check if people didn't have alternate accounts just to make sure.

My pick would be to stay with Dianne becuase all the other choices have a word or two that are turn offs for me.

First girl is 12. Second mom is a "bigger" lady. 3rd woman is buff. The teacher has "big librarian glasses". The next girl sounds like a bully. The last girl was shy.

Most of these descriptions seemed kinda negative and for the 12 year old, you included "tight bright clothing" which makes us think of those sexy gym girls and then the "kind innocent smile" which gives me a schoolgirl vibe. I think that's why people chose her.

If Dianne wasn't a choice, I would go with the teacher, but why is her name Mrs. Little. If the name was sexier, that could've helped.

I was expecting some tempting choices and would have juggle the Dianne option, but this time it was clear to choose Diane.
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The dialogue was 11/10! I loved it. The way Dianne was teasing Max and wishing she could keep him forever was perfect! Also the way she asked about his sleep was great! It sounded like she was going to put him in there for future sleep sessions.

I'm glad she kept the restraints on him and also placed him in her yoga pants. At first, I was kinda disappointed about the lack of panties. I thought panties would make it a more snug fit, but I guess the yoga pants are tight enough and since he was tied to it, it was good.

"Nope, you're going to stay with me". I love the authority Dianne has. So sexy.

The one thing that I would've changed if I was writing it was to make Max face her crotch instead of facing her yoga pants. That way he is forced into those lucious lips of hers and his face would be kissed all day by them. In addition, he would never be able to see these other women so that would have been a bonus, haha! If I was Dianne, I would make Max think only of me and not of the other girls.

("Comfortable? This is going to be fun. You're like a tasty treat dangling in front of my hungry pussy. You fit perfectly, all cozy and snug up against my lips. Mhmm I just want to keep you there forever.” Dianne said while checking herself out.) This was my favorite sequence in the entire chapter. Loved that first line about being tasty for her hungry pussy. Dianne, you are naughty and I like that.

Max must have a nice view of her toned legs from that angle. When Dianne is driving, I bet she loves the vibration of the engine while Max is vibrating within her lips. Probably why he got wedged up in there too. I agree, I would give up my life to be in Max's position too. Dianne is such a goddess. I would love to be her sex toy forever.

My pick is still Dianne. Since I think we all know what the next chapter or two will be about, I guess I can't wait for the chapter after that. Darn, 3 weeks to wait. Well, maybe the 12 year old won't be so bad.

I can't wait for the next chapter (with Dianne!)

Author's Response:

Lol I guess I have many readers just none that actively comments (besides yourself). But I have to keep in mind that there are many readers that I want to write for. I will go back to Dianne and I know you are a big fan of her so I'm planning on keeping her as a big part of the story. However, I need to explore and introduce new characters and new obstacles for Max.

I purposely added negative traits for each one because I dont want to have a perfect character and I wanted to see what the readers were into. Apparently its young girls, but thats okay. I'll write to this and try to make it good. I apologize in advance if its not your thing, I'll try to write it quicker so I can get you back to Dianne. But also remember Amy hasn't seen her brother in a couple days so eventually something will have to happen... Thats what the whole story was about until Dianne lol

I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter and liked Dianne's dialogue so much! I will try to keep that up with her. The young girl may not say stuff like that but I'll make it up to you in later chapters with stuff like my last chapter!

Thanks for the review and I hope you continue enjoying the story! 

 

Reviewer: nagini Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2017 5:13 PM Title: 1: The Beginning

I'd be perfectly happy with Max staying with Diane (forever!) but out of the new characters I guess I'd prefer the shy new girl

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2017 8:39 AM Title: 1: The Beginning

Pigtails girl! <3

Author's Response:

Pigtails girl won so expect an unaware encounter with her soon! Thanks for commenting! :)

Reviewer: Stephen1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2017 6:04 PM Title: 15: Goodnight Max

I think her job should be teacher or personal gym trainer. I love the story but I'm glad u r away from the sex

Author's Response:

Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad you love the story but its too bad the sex scenes weren't your thing... I like to have a little bit of everything in my story so there's something for everyone. My next chapter will include unbirthimg and crushing but please feel free to skip that and go to the chapter next week! But feel free to add a comment with the things you do like and add something you'd like to see more of and I'll add it :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2017 1:14 PM Title: 15: Goodnight Max

"Just kidding, I wouldn't flush my favorite sex toy down the drain".

Everything that Dianne says is sexy. I wish she talks more while she plays with Max. I think it improves every scene. Especially those scenes where you have big blocks or paragraphs, a few teasing insults by Dianne would be nice. I think that's why last chapter felt so good despite the male presence. They were talking dirty and I love it.

When Dianne calls Max a sex toy, I just think "what a lucky guy" and I would be honored to be her sex toy. What a goddess!

When Dianne wrapped Max with the floss, I was screaming with excitement! Now that was hot! Tied up and forced into her vagina! I would have preffered this happen in the morning so Dianne could take Max to work like this. Well, actually I think Dianne tying Max to the front her panties would be better for work, so she can play with him when she is stressed.

I love the diologue when Dianne was wrapping Max. "Can't have you sneaking off" and "my special prisoner tonight". So sexy! I wish she said goodnight Max a little later and maybe she says "tonight, you get a reward, you get to sleep with me." or "My husband filled my ass, and now I want you to fill my pussy." Or "mhmm, I love the way you squirm. It would useful for where you're going." Or "I know you want to escape, so I'm keeping you safe inside me". Or "the best way to even try escaping is to struggle in quick bursts" then after she inserts him, "mmhm, or that's the best way to become a human vibrator." Or "My ass had a good meal, but my vagina is still hungry" or "maybe you might like this kind of torture. After all, you admire my body". Or "This is where you belong, my favorite sex toy."

Man, even my own ideas are getting me excited.

As for her job, I was thinking about something strange since it's on a Sunday, and I thought what about a giantess film star. Dianne takes Max and they do erotic giantess photo shoots.

Or Dianne could be a yoga instructor, showing off her body wrapped up in sexy tight yoga pants.

Or Dianne could be worker at a sex toy shop and she tests several products with Max.

Or Dianne works at a massage salon and while she is working with her clients, Max is working inside her.

Or Dianne is a teacher, using authority on bad kids in detention.

Or speaking of authority, Dianne is that sexy cop who finds criminals and punishes them as her special prisoner like she did with Max.

There are many jobs that I think would be great for Dianne. I just hope that what ever her job may be, that she gets to play with Max and use him as a stress/sex toy.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your continuous and awesome replies :D I appreciate your feedback and I will try to add more dialogue in the giant paragraphs and also try to add sexy remarks or teasing with Dianne and Max ;) 

Reviewer: Stephen1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 6:48 PM Title: 1: The Beginning

I don't really like the the male in here and I hope you go back to only giantess and not giants. Still love the story a lot

Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback! I made the giant scene for my female reader so she could read a chapter with a dick part in it, but Mike will probably be leaving so you dont have to worry about him

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2017 4:47 PM Title: 14: Max and Mike

Where'swalden, you are the king at foreplay! This was just like some porn scene, but maybe even better becuase of the fact that Max was involved in this too.

I love how you used the restraints often in this chapter. Dianne and Mike fighting for dominance and to be on top.

As much as I wanted to see Dianne on top, it was entertaining to see them switch positions and embrace it. Maybe, Dianne will re-gain her dominance once she feels Max wiggling around inside her ass.

Ok, this is hot. Max is trapped in Dianne's ass. He can't move, or even speak, becuase the sperm is too sticky and acts as bondage for him. Not to mention that Dianne's ass will squeeze him again and again until she finds him.

I hope Dianne remembers about Max and not forget about him and shit him out in the toilet for someone else to find him.

Dianne really wanted to fuck Mike. Even though it seemed that she didn't mind Mike taking control, I think she would have preferred herself to take control. Now she can fuck Max and reassert her dominance.

I agree with Max. Mike is one lucky man. Dianne loves to play and she cooperates and makes each sex scene look like some porn video. While most sex scenes are dull in general and feature the same stuff, Dianne and Mike make it refreshing and I'm jealous that Mike gets to have a wife like that.

Part of me wonders if their sex is always like that or was it just the presence of Max that made it so much better. With Max in Mike's dick, his dick was bigger. So Mike was happy even though he had no idea. Also, we know Dianne loves it becuase she gets to fuck 2 guys at once, and now she gets to keep one to herself. I don't see any reason for Dianne to give Max up. She should use him a few more times before she returns him.

Was this how the other shrunken boy died? Stuck in sperm inside Dianne's ass? If so, what a way to go. I'm sure Max will survive this becuase Dianne is not going to make the same mistake twice. She has other plans for him. :)

I like the idea of Dianne restraining someone. Maybe Dianne can use string, tape, or rubber bands to bind Max and then use him like she planned with Mike? Even her vagina fluids should be sticky enough to glue Max together, haha.

All in all, fantastic chapter, and my favorite chapter is still Dianne, and I would love to keep seeing more of her.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Haha thank you! I tried to make this scene very intimate between Dianne and Mike, struggling for dominance and I tried to include vocals too instead of just descriptive scenes. Dianne didn't quite get her way, but you are right, she enjoyed every part of it and will likely show her dominance over Max when she gets him out. I can't spoil how the last shrunken boy died because that would ruin the temptation of not knowing ;) I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much and I plan on having another scene with Dianne just because of your feedback! Thanks and enjoy the next one! Once I sit down and write it lol

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2017 4:02 PM Title: 13: Stuck to a Hard Surface

Love the mouth play that Dianne was performing, both on Max and Mike.

I like that one sentence where you described both Mike's dick and her sex toy Max right next to each other. Satisfying two men at once. Looks like they both will satisfy her next chapter.

Yes! Handcuffs! I love anything with bondage. Dianne should get 4 pairs of handcuffs. Each one tying Mike's limb to each bedpost. With just one pair, I guess she will tie both his wrists together an around the bed frame.

I think the most interesting part is that Dianne was ready for Mike to shoot his load into her pussy. Did she want Max to go very deep inside her? Is the cum going to act as glue and make Max stuck to one of Dianne's inner vaginal walls?

Dianne is trying soemthing new here. She whispered something right before intercourse and this makes me revert back to when Dianne mentioned her "other" shrunken friend. What other kinky ideas did Dianne have that might have gotten her other sex toy killed.

Speaking of sex toys, I love how you made Dianne consider Max as a slave sex toy. That's hot. Especially with a horny woman such as the milf Dianne.

I can picture her spinning those handcuffs on her finger and I just wish I was either Mike or especially Max.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter! I used to have a story outline of where the story was headed but I have been changing and adding different things so now it's mostly made up as I write and I try to base it off the readers preferences. Thanks for the support and feedback!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2017 2:01 AM Title: 12: Soapy Mouth

Haha! She used the soapy cottonball to choke Max. The soap must have been brutal, just a tiny speck on your tongue is painful. With the cottonball full of it, and it filled with soap, it could have been considered a form of water boarding. "Washed the bad behaviour out of you". Lol.

Dianne made that pocket for Max to stay in, yet he was sent from her pussy to her butt somehow. I know he freed his arm earlier, but I thought he was still stuck in that spot.

Part of me believes Dianne took Max out too fast. He bit her. Then she accusses him of being a naughty perverted boy. I was excepting a perverted boy to get an appropriate naughty punishment, but here it was just a soap ball gag.

If the punishment is the 3-way, it makes sense. It's just that she made the threesome seem like a good thing for both Max and Dianne. We know Dianne is going to enjoy it, so maybe she is just edging Max on to make him feel happy.

Looking back at the other chapters, especially the part where we voted on, I can tell what might happen next. I am curious how it's going to happen, unaware or not. We know Mike will be unaware of Max. If Mike was aware, this could get a bit too crazy. Dianne playing the secret lover card is sexy.

After this threesome is finished, can Dianne keep Max a bit longer? She is my favorite giantess in this story and I want to see more 1 on 1 time with her and Max.

Lastly, glad to see you are back!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! 

As for the pocket made for Max... In the previous chapter Max was making Dianne lose track of what she was saying by moving around and pleasuring her. To stop him, she pulled her underwear back which moved his location to her butt. I've been trying to add the odd butt stuff in because one of my readers loves it lol

I'm sorry that the soap gag wasn't quite what you were hoping for.

Dianne's mind set is something hard to predict, at times she likes to see Max in pain, it turns her on, but at the same time she wants Max to stay so she wants him to be pleasured too.

I do want to move the story forward with other characters and Max being reunited with his sister... But I may do another 1 on 1 scene because of the support you have showed!