Reviews For The Big Boss
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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2017 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice story. Love Miss Sasha. You describe her and the bumbling little worker very well.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: amazonianniall Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2017 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really well done!

As said before, the formatting just needs corrected but the story itself is very good and the writing is great too.

Would love it if you continued this story. I'm just a huge fan of unaware butt stuff, expecially with bbw's!

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2017 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

A pretty decent start.  My only critisism would be the line spacing.  What ever format you are using to write it the short lines of text make it a bit difficult to read.  Other than that it's a fun sounding story.  The guy in the cage lost in her clevage is a great idea; makes you wonder what other cages she may be wearing in the hidden places of her body.

Keep writing this!

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