Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 12: Slippery Soap

James should have stayed with Rose. She knew how to play with him. It was fun when she was massaging him and I love the descriptions of where her knees and crotch were in relation to her body.

I think I miss the 3 ft James. This tiny James is far too little to be involved in anything. Too small for Lee to even notice her little friend is back. I'm still hoping for Lee to sit on James when he is at that 3 ft size.

That journey to Lee's house felt awesome. He was smart to use people as transportation too.

James better grow to at least 3 inches so Lee could play with something her fingers can handle. Half a quarter seems too small for now.

Are these 2 chapters a dream? I honesttly can't tell. So far every shrink scene was a dream, but this one felt real and I can't tell.

I really hope Lee finds him and gives some growing power to James. I like it when these ladies toy with James and half an inch is a bit too small for a toy.

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Lorraine Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2017 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 6: Leaving Lee

Nooooo, I don't want to leave Lee!! :( hope she comes back soon.

Reviewer: Lorraine Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2017 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 4: Leah's Little Boy Toy

I found this chapter a bit strange but super sexy

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2017 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 11: Rose Goes Rogue

That kinda came out of no where.  Well at least James "might" be back with Leah.  An inch tall, perhaps down to half-inch tall is pretty cool for Leah to find him at, and hopefully no growing back in size {unless Leah can change James' size at her will} nor accidentally getting stepped on by Leah. 

Hopefully a long, joy filled life in her panty and constanty getting sat on like he asked Leah to do in his dream once; or perhaps she might accidentally eat James but he doesn't get digested or hurt like that girl Stacy, and she doesn't realize till she feels him squirming around inside her bowels and poops him out.

Be nice to find out Rose has been swallowing hundreds of guys over the years, if she ever comes back into the story.

Author's Response: Yeah I was worried that this chapter might seem rushed. I condensed 2 chapters in to one so that we could get back to Lee quicker.I foreshadowed the nuclear warfare a few chapters ago so that it wouodnt be a total shock. SPOILER ALERT... As for James's size, he will continue to shrink. Lee (might) notice him eventually, but not for a while. Rose will be back in the story and she will be better than ever when she returs. However, that will be some time from now. Thanks for reqding!

Reviewer: Lorraine Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2017 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lusting for Leah

A+!! I've only read the first chapter but this is absolutely superb! I kind of identify with Lee. I hope to see her dominance grow. Can't wait to see what happens between these two!!

Reviewer: SinisterDeviant Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2017 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 10: Let Down By Leah

Wow. Didn't see that coming at all. I'm kind of mad at you for doing that. WTF bro. He was finally getting adopted. Why????? Ugh. Hope Lee comes back soon.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2017 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 10: Let Down By Leah

What ever you do, have him shrink NOW with his face in Rose's crotch.  She should notice too, perhaps with her hand on the back of his head holding him in place Rose can feel his head shrink in her hand and his body come off the ground.

It 's would be nice if Rose told James she would adopt him, especially if he keeps getting smaller, like a tiny baby boy or as a little living doll for her to "play" with and take care of.

Reviewer: Johndoe19410 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2017 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lusting for Leah

Would be awesome if there was some facesitting.

Love it so far, keep up the great writing.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2017 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 9: Goodnight, James

It would be nice if the next morning, still wearing the same shoes she had on the afternoon before, James gives Rose a hug and doesn't quite reach her upper thighs as he did the night before.  Later when Rose marks his height they notice it's lower than last year and now Teresa is 10 inches taller than James rather than only 6 inches.  And what would cause such a loss in height after getting off on Leah??? 

Just a thought; but still.....  Especially if Rose decides to play detective-researcher and figures out James attraction to and fantisizing about her and Leah affect his height loss, maybe even make him pliable right after getting off to the point of being folded into a bikinie bottom. {yes, I still like that idea you had}

Reviewer: SinisterDeviant Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2017 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 8: Ruthless Rose

Fantastic. It sucks that it was just a dream because this chapter was hot! I hope Rose has her way with james for real!