This was a great one, I feel you could keep the character's personality even while going on territory outside of the show, like the vore part. I felt pretty bad for Saikawa at that scene btw ;_; .

The relationship both of the girls had was shown in a cute way which turns lewd when looked through a certain angle. It was really adorable how they showed they care and thought about the another, aiming for the satisfaction of both. Really good job.

And with Lucoa's apparition at the end one wonders what will be Shouta's future...