Reviews For Eastern Suprise
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Reviewer: Vito Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: December 10 2008 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

It Stinks, if you are into vore.

Reviewer: dietz Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2007 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

I hate to nitpick like this but I can't read this atm b/c it has what I like to call "Wall o' Text Syndrome"  Please  separate and put paragraphs.  Paragraphs should be placed every new time someone speaks or at the beginning of every new idea. 

Once again, sorry to nitpick but i just can't read like that

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