Date: January 21 2021 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good story.
And it's "vagina" if you want to get technical.
Date: May 13 2019 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
First three chapters were amazing, hope you decide to continue the story and I hope Alice comes back soon!
Date: September 19 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
I like gentle mouth play, so this story really appeals to me. It would be interesting to add some tension in John and Alice's relationship, like having John's mom find them out.
Date: September 18 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
Woooo can't wait for the next chapter! This is such an amazing story. Keep up the great work!
Date: June 14 2017 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is an amazing story and I can't wait to see what happens next X3 keep up the good work!
Date: May 23 2017 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is honestly a great story. I absolutely love it so far and it's so well written! Great job!! I'd love to see more chapters and more content from you :)
Date: May 21 2017 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
very nicely done so far! I like that you've introduced a few different characters, and I hope we get to see him interact with all of them! your prose is A+ on the second chapter too
Date: May 20 2017 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Its nice to see non fatal, consensual vore, as well as gentle giantess stuff. My only complaint would be a typo here or there, such as when you typed "virgina" instead of vagina.
Date: May 19 2017 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Very good second chapter! hope that it will end in vore unwilling, kind john who is spit out, but at the end of the story, he gets swallowed against his will after a fight with alice or for some other reason :-) The happy end is for the marvel film:D