[Report This]Date: May 21 2017 10:52 AM Title: Road safety is important
I loved this chapter, I am so glad to see you writing again. The size scale was so amazing and brought a great vivid image to my mind. This tiny truck driver was nothing compared to Susan who was basically a goddess compared to him. YOu do so great with these size scales, continue with more like this.
Date: May 20 2017 3:51 AM Title: Road safety is important
Greatly enjoyed the added paragraphs. It shows how small and terrified he is and large and powerful she is. Great perspective.
Author's Response: Thanks, man
Date: May 20 2017 3:28 AM Title: Road safety is important
Signing Diesel is a habit. I am not listed as Diesel everywhere. Like on Deviant Art. So I just sign Diesel as a habit.
Author's Response: Fair point.
Date: May 20 2017 3:24 AM Title: Jocks in deep
Great story with the bus.
Maybe a teacher, Mrs. Nelson, a redhead, shrinks a mouthy student. She wears tan pumps.
Great stuff,
Diesel
Author's Response: Thanks. I added those paragraphs in the first story so hopefully it has a better flow and feel to it. I have been throwing around some ideas for a school setting and a teacher punishing a student is definitely near the top of my list of those scenarios.
Date: May 20 2017 3:13 AM Title: Road safety is important
Nice story. Loved Susan. She's a great lady. Love when she got the tiny truck. Maybe add a paragraph of her looking in at the truck and his view from inside the truck.
I have seen the pictures on deviant art and they are great. M shrinker is brilliant.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response: Thanks. I might add a paragraph or two later since it doesn't seem like it would take much. Thanks for checking out MShrinker's work, I think they should get more exposure for the work they do. Also, out of curiosity, I've seen you on other websites and you always sign you name "Diesel". Is there a point to that? After all, your your signature is already in your username.
Date: May 19 2017 4:31 PM Title: Road safety is important
Just been a really long time since the last update. Would love to see more of it. And this story is also amazing!
Author's Response: It is one of my greatest faults. Almost none of my stories get finished since I get bored with them. With DATP, I just ran out of ideas and the main idea of unaware giantesses at a pool didn't interest me anymore. But I still hope to keep people entertained with future stories filled with interesting scenarios.
Date: May 19 2017 4:04 PM Title: Road safety is important
Hey christiawi9 do you ever plan on finishing "Day At The Pool"?
Author's Response: Do I plan on finishing it? No. Will I? Maybe. The problem is that there is no actual story. I have no plan for how it will end. Hell, I could end it in a single chapter. I don't write stories with endings in mind, just ideas. I thought the pool idea was good so I wrote some scenarios based around that idea and then got bored. Same with all of my stories. All of them have a single idea that I expanded on but no actual story line that I've planned. Why do you ask?
[Report This]Date: May 19 2017 12:48 PM Title: Jocks in deep
Really hot story!!
Author's Response: Thanks. Don't forget to check out the original creator of the idea.
Date: May 19 2017 10:53 AM Title: Road safety is important
I would had loved it way more, if the boy had accidentally stepped on the car reducing it to a thin paper flat foil under his sneaker.. oops. Or him had swallowed it. I like male interactions same as much, so would be nice seeing this maybe in a future plot? Maybe some older character some teenagers around 16 step on a car or think it's a bug or it ends in a candy bag with colorful m&m and gets swallowed. that would be hot
Author's Response: Yeah, but then the story would be super short =)