Reviews For The Souvenir
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Reviewer: emshoshoshe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2021 7:38 PM Title: Prologue


very good


Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 4:44 AM Title: Back Home

You're doing a good job and is love to read more. Keep it up

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 2:03 AM Title: Back Home

Bossy asian giantesses, love it.

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2017 4:52 AM Title: Good and Bad

Enjoyable action so far. I hope you maintain her personality similarly in the rest of the story, with this mixture of sweetness and control.

Author's Response:

Hey sorry this is late, but I just realised who left this review! I am stoked that you enjoyed it, you are a bit of a legend in my eyes.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2017 4:43 AM Title: Good and Bad

Lucky little guy.

Reviewer: Frosty1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2017 1:51 AM Title: Prologue

I really like the Asian woman dominates white guy setting. Maybe she could emphasize more that she sees white guys as way beneath her? Also hope she will stay "dirty" and make him worship more than just her feet in the future.;)

You may check some of the spelling though. There were a couple of very noticeable mistakes; e.g. "here" instead of "hear".

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2017 2:28 AM Title: Training

Such a kind giantess.

Reviewer: KindaEmbarassed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 13 2017 12:26 AM Title: Training

For a machine translation it's still one of the best foreign stories I've seen.  Great work from America!  



Author's Response:

This story was written in English. I translated the english words to Mandarin.

Reviewer: Medrinisoc Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 1:52 PM Title: Prologue

I love this story, especially the aspect of a cute Asian girl kidnapping and forcing you to submit to her will. I love the details, especially the repulsive realism, and am looking forward to more sensory descriptions. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

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Reviewer: LilBeni Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 2:38 AM Title: Prologue

Good stuff! Could you make it more Racial, and Political (emphasizing "Capitalist versus Communist"), please, plus adding 'Big Couple' elements? THANKS.

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 9:59 PM Title: Introduction to a new life

Interesting, I look forward to reading more 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 7:25 PM Title: Prologue

Looking good from here.

Reviewer: noneaccount Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 2:54 PM Title: Prologue

Not bad, so far. 

Chapters are a bit short and jumpy, but it works out on getting to the point. 

Looking forward to more.

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