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Reviewer: Poe00069 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2018 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi, 

Excellent story so far! Fantasic size fetish porn for people that are well read lol

I'm dying to see if or how you will leverage the tension between Abigail and her boss Ariel. Abigail seems to be too soft for this, but I suspect that maybe the reason why she so wanted this career, and her dark side, just hasn't been expressed.

Please continue!

Thanks!

po



Author's Response:

Why thank you. Glad you like it. There isn't exactly an end to this story because this is a slowly expanding universe, so no end, just hiatuses of inactivity. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2018 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 7: New beginnings

Another great chapter! Abigail seems like my kind of character, so I’m eager to see the rest of her day with Mikal. I’ve gotta say it was really cool to see two chapters back to back.

Author's Response:

I thank you for your continued support. I'm glad you enjoyed them. I hope to try and post more regularly but college and work don't allow it. so weekend writing it is. :| Thank you again for sticking with the story. I do appreciate all the reviews you've left :D

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2018 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 6 Phoenix

Cool idea to go with Stephanie dreaming of sitting on herself, it seemed to put things more in perspective for her. I’ll be looking forward to tomorrow and seeing what happens with Mikal.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2017 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awesome as always. I'm interested to see what kind of shape Stephanie is in after this. As for bringing a consort back to life, I think as long as the idea is interesting, go for it.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2017 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 4: Jasper

Awesome chapters, and it was great to see 2 in one day. I actually just recently reread the first story, so it was cool to see Jasper back and looking for revenge. I hope you're not gone as long between chapters this time, but I know life can get hectic, so I understand.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2017 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 4: Jasper

Great stuff! Little confused though. I thought I remembered during Keylas test with Steph that she could do what she wanted, even kill her? And that she most likely wouldnt survive? Which of course, she didn't. I may need to go reread that anyway, the flash back scene reminded me how great that chapter was *weg*

Looking forward to more of this!

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Date: June 10 2017 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 2:Word Choice

Wow, a sequal to this awesome tale! Glad to see you keeping this going. Off to an excellent start!

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Date: June 10 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 2:Word Choice

Damn, Dick really had it rough there. Very nice chapter. You really captured the difference between how Dick felt about his situation, and how Alexis felt about it. Also, nice touch with the unintended torture by Julia.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like the setup for the story, you've definitely got me interested. I look forward to seeing all of the different models and how they are treated.

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