Date: November 09 2017 12:55 PM Title: Hangover
I really enjoyed the story, great work.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: April 20 2017 4:28 PM Title: Hangover
me ha gustado esta historia,pero me siento mas enamorado con Su personaje de la historia llamada Power y de la mujer bbw Megan,es impresionante como describias sus perversidades,Un abrazo
Date: April 20 2017 6:28 AM Title: Hangover
Love the visuals and the odors. You've properly inhabited this sloppy narcissist, so we can see how all this proceeds, but I miss the cruelty and terror that comes from the tinies' perspective. All the bitter recriminations as each of them tries to escape by betraying the others. She's too drunk to really enjoy her domination, and too shameless to regret it later.
Author's Response:
I was trying to get the feel of a giantess who's both aware and... not entirely that. And also from her perspective. One of my favorite stories on here is Nightmare Alley, just because I love the use of an unintelligent giantess's perspective as she tortures a tiny with her "love."
I tried my best to show what was going on in the minds of the tinies without shifting perspectives or giving Tammy more powers of observation than she could handle. Right up until the end when any survivors try to get her attention while the agents are right there, but, in response, she crushes them to death between her thighs. I'll include more tiny perspective in whatever I end up doing next. ;)
Date: April 19 2017 5:15 PM Title: Hangover
Hm, that's just about the nastiest story that I've ever read! I assume that Tammy never really sobered up enough to fully realize what she'd actually done? Lol! Had to keep reading this, though, I almost stopped a few times, (It was like when you're passing a bad automobile accident, you just have to look at it - you can't help yourself) Nasty!
Excellent writing though, ...but, I'm glad that you wrapped this one up! ;`)
Nice Job!
Author's Response:
There's a joke in here about nasty women, I can feel it.
Thanks for the review!