Date: May 29 2017 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
Hope that this will be continued some day
Date: May 13 2017 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
hope it aint a gawner
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, I've managed to somehow make writing take far longer than it should, but the story will continue.
[Report This]Date: May 04 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Dark Side of the Moon
hope to see it continued soon
[Report This]Date: April 14 2017 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Dark Side of the Moon
nice. butt and farting are onf of my favorite tags. would love to see more of them in future chapters
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting. I think I can safely say that those tags will see continued use, as they will naturally accompany the tags that have yet to make an appearance.
[Report This]Date: April 14 2017 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Into the Void
wish the chapters are longer, maybe try to put two or three together into one
Author's Response:
I think if the story gets longer I'll have no problem condensing the number of chapters; however, I believe that short chapters possess a number of advantages. For instance, they make it easier to segment content categories, so that those who might not be receptive to all tags within a story can read on without too much trouble (or more easily access the content they are interested in). Ultimately, I had hoped the short chapters would make the story more approachable, rather than annoy the reader. In spite of that grievance, I hope you're enjoying the story, and I appreciate your feedback.
Date: April 08 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
What happened to this story? I hope it can continue...
Author's Response:
I had to take a break due to work schedule complications, but I should be able to add to the story soon.
Date: April 04 2017 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
i hope this story isnt abandoned. i think its the best type of shrinking story. revenge with lust with the tags of butt and scat. please continue!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the hiatus, my work schedule became briefly hectic so I was unable to find time for writing. Things have settled down now though, which means I should be able to resume without trouble.
Date: March 23 2017 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
I personally favor less shrinking than this (think 5 to 7 inch) but despite that, the story has really intrigued me so far. Keep it up man!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you've found the story enjoyable despite it deviating from your preference, that's really encouraging, as I had feared the story was becoming too niche. Stick around to see how things progress, and thanks for commenting.
Date: March 22 2017 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
That yellow dust is awesome. I really like the small nano scale and extreme shrinking. Good depth and description given from both perspectives in the story. Hope you plan to keep writing and don't stop while it's hot
Author's Response:
Thank you for commenting, and I'm glad you appreciate the nano scale. Sometimes I see people dismissing such content due to the perceived lack of "interaction" on the giantess' end, but I feel as though it opens up avenues of exploration for those that are shrunken (or comparably tiny). Also, I will continue to keep writing at a steady pace, so don't fret too much.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Love Canal
One of the best GTS stories that I have red.
So well described from the tinies' perspective.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the high praise. Although, it's actually fairly fun trying to write from the viewpoint of an incredibly tiny person, so definitely expect more of said content.
Date: March 21 2017 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
Just get Political and bring that Point home; I really Love that kind of "Rivalry/eridicating sworn-Enemies" thing?
Author's Response:
I'll probably touch on another, and seemingly controversial, environmental sentiment that I feel will satisfy the goal of further defining the two parties as enemies, while still keeping the environmentalist angle.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2017 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
I'm going to Read it further, but if you haven't done so already, have the Hipster, trendy, SJW Girls humilating, and just utterly Destroying the corporate, Conservative men, in the WORST possible ways. Thanks! =D
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting. When you read further you'll find that the story has already delved into fairly cruel content, but have no fear, things are going to get worse for the men. If there is a particular, maybe even obscure, method that you had in mind, feel free to share.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2017 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
@Tigernash I think you mistook '5' for 5 stars, mate. I'll give this 5 stars to rebalance the rating until you edit the review
Author's Response:
Thanks for the assist. I replied to the substance of his review rather than the rating itself, because I didn't want to assume the rating was a fluke, but there was a bit of a disconnect between his comments and score.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2017 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
Having lived many years in neighboring British Columbia, I understand where this story comes from. And in many ways, I strongly sympathize with the attitudes of typical environmentalists. I look forward to see how this story develops. You have a novel way of carrying out your 'shrink' technique. Should be good.
Carry on, and good luck in your tale.
Author's Response:
I hope my story doesn't betray my personal feelings on the environmentalist movement, as I actually have quite a lot of respect for activists that can rally for a cause without resorting to vandalism, let alone violence. As an aside, chapter eight's title 'Love Canal' is actually a reference to a famous waste incident in New York State, but doubles as a relevant chapter moniker. Also, thank you for commenting, and I hope you enjoy the story as it unfolds.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2017 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Spitting Image of a Goddess
Splendid ending!!
Author's Response:
It says this review was made in reference to chapter 7, but at the time listed, only 6 were available. Either way, I'm glad you're liking the new content, as you did ask for graphic material (not that I mind whatsoever).
Date: March 17 2017 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
Also; I like it that you upload short chapters, or rather my short concentration span likes it
Date: March 17 2017 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Judge, Jury, and Executioner
I think we can all agree that the more frequent you update your story, the better. But just a little advice from a fellow author, it might be better to spread them over every few days, since you'll want to take the per chapter the most advantage of having it on the Most Recent page. I usually just write chapters every few days, but don't upload them until I have lost my position on the Most Recent.
But it's good to see you're dedicated
Author's Response:
I appreciate the advice, I'll probably continue to write a little each night but hold off on the frequency of re-submissions.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2017 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Sizing Things Up
I have to say, from what I've read until now, this story is a unique one. And it has a very interesting start. I love that the Giantesses are actually doing this out of prinicple - other than 90% of the other Giantesses from the stories on this site.
I hope you stick with your formula, and don't be afraid to make it very graphical
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting. My intention is to craft the giantesses' motive for cruelty around their sense of duty and lust, so I'm glad you're liking it so far. As for the potential appearance of graphic violence, I can safely say your patience will be rewarded.
Date: March 15 2017 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Business As Usual?
this story is great. u dont see this type of gts story much, please continue! i hope they are nasty to the tiny men, and i hope one or more or all the giantesses have huge bubble butts, donks, hell yes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting, and I assure you that I will continue writing. As for the treatment of our story's characters, things will become quite grim fairly soon, so stick around.