Date: August 07 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
I did not expect that. Good ending. The story was very entertaining throughout.
Date: August 07 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
Liz clearly took this thing way too far. I think Alex is right about people wondering what she is doing with that truck though. The government will come looking.
Date: August 07 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad Alex has some attention now. He can't be a loner for ever. Of course, they may only be his friends for as long as Andy stays shrunk but I can't be sure.
Date: August 07 2013 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh, a meteorite. Interesting. How will she transport all of that stuff and be able to take her Lamborghini back too? This story is full of steriotypes, but that's one of the reasons why it makes me chuckle.
Date: August 07 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
You'd think they'd do sufficient product testing before they allow a product to go the market that may ruin a businesses image, especially in a Western nation where they have guidelines and laws to stop harmful substances from entering the environment. Of course, some countries are more lenient than others. The story is getting rather intense and I like it!
Date: August 07 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
Alex is right about the Catholic Church and the neklace. I think maybe Liz is starting to like him? Strange. Although she could be pretending to like him since he is weird.
Date: August 07 2013 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think capitalism is bad too as it encourages greed and exploitation. Something between Communism and Capitalism must be found, although I also like elements of Anarchy. I should really read The Communist Manifesto sometime. It's one of the most influential books ever written, right up there with The Art Of War, On Origin Of The Species and the Bible.
Date: August 07 2013 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
This chapter was so funny. I am enjoy the story very much so far.
Date: August 07 2013 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
Zeith is so funny, and I knew I was right in saying in a previous review that there are worse people than Andy. He seems more annoying.
Date: August 07 2013 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think the coach should do som push-ups too, rather than just stand there. I saw a fat P.E. teacher yelling at his students once and it was a sad irony.
Date: August 07 2013 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
I never understood the point of cheerleading. Why can't they just play the game? In my country cheerleaders are rare, although I can't say that I take an interest in watching any sports.
Date: August 07 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow Andy really is stupid. And those pictures. I'd freak out too.
Date: August 07 2013 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
He must really hate geeks and nerds – and yet – it's thanks to them that we have all of the amenities that we do. From waht I've seen so far, Andy is very close minded, hence why he isn't that smart. I suppose there are worse people in this word than Andy although I'm still having trouble finding any sympathy for him.
Date: August 07 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
If I were her I would ignore him, not kill him because people (such as his family) would come looking for him, but I only say that because I dislike what I've seen of him as a character. He seems one of those really vain and big headed people I see when I go to the gym. I may change my mind as the story progresses of course.
Date: August 07 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, Andy is annoying in this chapter. He probably deserves to shrink,
Date: August 07 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
This looks as if it's a nice story. I feel like theirs a lot of emotion in this chapter and the description is much better than in a lot of stories. I'm surprised that nobody has left a review yet, however to be fair, you haven't tagged your story properly, adding only one tag for the age of the characters, which since Andy is described as being twenty, need to be updated with the "young adult" category because given the new giantessworld categories, teenager is listed as being from ages thirteen through to nineteen. Assuming parents and teachers play a role in the story too, other ages tags should be added as appropriate.