Reviewer: vgiv Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2017 9:01 PM Title: Nausea

A shockingly strong start considering this is a first story. And a good start at any level. Keep writing. A few more chapters and your set. Your much stronger than I was when I first started writing. 

I always appreciate this formatting. So many new authors end up propping forth giant, unreadable blocks of text. It's nice to be able to read this with ease.

As far as criticism there isn't anything major thus far. A couple of spelling mistakes, such as 'slips' of juice. One too many uses of the word 'bored' two, among other things. But yeah nothing really glaring. 

All in all a very promising first chapter. Welcome to Giantess World!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the advice! I do admit I often make some spelling mistakes, because English is not my first language, (spoilers: my first language is Spanish), so that's another one for the pile, first story and not even on my native tounge :'c 

Also thanks for the support! You got me motivated to write more of this!