Date: May 03 2007 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
You have transitioned into a great writer regarding these sorts of stories. I've only written one story, while you have obviously given several more. I'd like to put forth more work, but we'll see. Please continue with you writing, doing what you are most comfortable with. Keep it up.
Date: May 02 2007 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I forgot to ask whether or not you have read my story entitled "A Son's Demise," which is posted here and elsewhere. If you're looking for specific requests, the scenes an dialoge contained there are what I am most in favor of. Obviously, you are you own creator and have your own ideas. I just thought rather than give small descriptions of what I enjoy, I'd reference that story to you for what I like to see happen in these tales
Author's Response: yeah i read it, and when i did it was one of my favorites. that along with a few other stories on the site inspired me to write my own to not only show my views on the subject, but also give back to the comunity
[Report This]Date: May 02 2007 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
That ending was fantastically done! Thanks for taking my suggestion. I for one would enjoy you writing these sorts of stories indefinately. If you write another one, maybe you could focus on the son/brother being shrunk to an inch or so, and being torrtured by the smell of his tormentress's big feet. I liked this ending so much, that I would encourage a similar one using a mother/daughter duo on a son/brother!
Date: April 27 2007 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
While I'm usually not a fan of femal on female action in these kinds of stories, you're doing a good job on this one.
If you write another mother/son story, my hopes would be that the guy is shrunk to around half an inch or so, and is forced to endure the wrinkly undersides of her nylon-encased toes for a good long while, preferebly out her shoes. Also, it would be great to have her drag out his torture/death by slowly breaking parts of him by scrunching her toes around him.
For this story, I think the daughter's demise should come about from her being taped to her mother's sole and slowly smushed against the sole of her lesbian friend. Heck, in fact, that'd be a good finisher for a mother/daughter tag team on an disobedient son/brother! Good job and keep up the writing.
[Report This]Date: April 24 2007 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
im liking it so far, keep it going please ^^