[Report This]Date: March 06 2017 9:23 PM Title: Make America Big Again
A very cool concept of a story, it really gives me a love-hate sensation when reading it. On one hand I love the large and in charge Dianne, but she's at the same time completely corrupt and though exagerrated shows shades of stuff that goes on in real politics and media.
Date: March 06 2017 8:26 PM Title: This Week Today
Loved the interview. The fairness of shrink him, shrink him. Would have liked to have had him standing before her at 3 inches small, standing before her heels. Shaking in fear.
Awesome chapter, awesome story. Soooo great.
[Report This]Date: March 06 2017 7:14 PM Title: This Week Today
This might just be the best/worst thing ever lol. You've done a fantastic job and I cant wait to see where this goes.
Date: March 06 2017 6:00 PM Title: Make America Big Again
Your Sequel seriously NEEDS to be 'Make America Small Again',
where the Opposition have their REVENGE.. Please and thanks!
Date: March 06 2017 2:46 PM Title: Civil Disobedience
I love the increasing restrictions on men and their effects. Given the very real threat posed by these 3-inch tall criminals. I assume that President Trent is currently working on a revised "travel ban" to apply to all shrunken men. Eventually, no man will be allowed to "travel" in public, except under arrest or attached to the body of his legal female guardian. After all, Dianne Trent did promise her voters to Make America Big Again!
Date: March 04 2017 10:53 AM Title: Civil Disobedience
I second seeing the First Husband at whatever size he's at now.
Date: March 03 2017 9:18 PM Title: Make America Big Again
Oh mah gah I am deeply upset at myself for being so gleefully turned on by this scenario lol. I can't wait for a chapter w the President coming home to a night with the first husband (please tell me there is one!) Great stuff, really.
Author's Response:
I cannot confirm or deny the existence of said first gentleman or whether said theoretical gentleman may or may not be appearing.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2017 1:31 PM Title: Civil Disobedience
My 1st impression was that this chapter felt kind of rushed, but maybe it's only because the two previous chapters were going slower, or maybe it's only me, or just an impression :)
Anyway the issue of 4th strike is important - the fate of arrested tinies is still unknown, and sooner or later president Diane is going to realize that 3rd strikers can still commit crimes...
Date: March 02 2017 11:05 PM Title: Civil Disobedience
Another powerful chapter. Having the president talk to the protesters was great. Having her security gather them up as she walked through showed her power.
Will you continue some of the other plot lines?
Thanks,
Diesel
Date: February 28 2017 2:54 PM Title: Workplace Woes
Chapter 4 was great. It's tough when you screw up. Love following what happens to them. What will happen to Jerry?
Date: February 28 2017 2:01 PM Title: Workplace Woes
Technically Jenna never mentioned licking, it was all Kyle's idea; that leaves me wondering if she would accept his suggestion... :)
Date: February 27 2017 12:39 PM Title: Workplace Woes
The way things are going, it looks like all men are going to be three inches eventually, unless they decide to leave certain men alone.
This really is a lot of fun considering the subject matter.
And I think it would be great to see Dianne make herself taller.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2017 10:31 AM Title: Workplace Woes
Great story so far, very hot stuff. It's good to see someone making lemonade out of the lemons that is our current political situation.
Date: February 25 2017 10:24 AM Title: Make America Big Again
Not con Kent, it's convient.
Date: February 25 2017 7:12 AM Title: Highway to Hell
Loved the officer. Having the little people in a bag on her hip seems like a con Kent way for her to watch them. It's nice to know that a simple slap of her hand quiets them down. Love this story.
Date: February 25 2017 4:47 AM Title: Executive Decisions
Cool idea. So far a great story. Looking forward to more. It's a great concept.
Date: February 24 2017 11:50 AM Title: Highway to Hell
These Aside chapters are good. They will do a great job of showing the consequences, they make the story that much more sweeping in scope, and they'll be fun to read by themselves.
Date: February 24 2017 10:07 AM Title: Highway to Hell
I can't be the only one wasting my time on this:
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ArsonMurderAndJaywalking
Other than that, I love the quantity (and quality) of small details that can be seriously scary - fifteen minutes just for that... Can't wait to see if wifey is sympathetic or not!
[Report This]Date: February 24 2017 12:36 AM Title: Make America Big Again
Jesus Christ, I can't help it. I just keep cracking up at everything. Whenever Diane speaks I can't help but imagine a certain ... Someone else. I'm loving this just for the humor it brings me.
Date: February 21 2017 1:22 PM Title: Executive Decisions
I like where this is going (well, where it looks to me like this is going).
Hopefully I won't miss something important with not being American :)
Author's Response:
Maybe a few jokes, but not much else. Enjoy