Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 10

Aw man, is it possible that this guy's luck is so bad he ended up in the hands of someone worse? From what I could tell about this world in general most people just see little people as commodities. Maybe the average person is like Vanessa and these girls, cruel and controlling to their little people. The nice ones would be rare...In which case surviving on your own as Dave was doing is the smart thing to do.

Reviewer: methodman Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2017 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 9

Phenomenal chapter!  You always strike the perfect mix between descriptive writing, plot progression, and a healthy dose of action.  I'm gonna miss Vanessa and Trevor but am excited for the next giantess.  Keep it up

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2017 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

Nice so he finally escaped! Quite the adventure for our little hero! Although did someone notice him at the end there? Maybe? If so it kinda sucks that he went through hell to escape and gets caught so quickly again.

Reviewer: Spncr_09 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2017 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

One of my all time favorite stories already. Written with excellence. Great story

Reviewer: mr pink Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2017 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 9

Very good. I'm excited to see where this goes next. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

Will we hear more about the wife at some point?

 

And amazing chapter.

Reviewer: LilBeni Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

Alright, Chapter 6 Was Great!! Just Keeps Getting Better & Better....

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Not a bad story! I'm not sure why this never landed on my radar before but I'm glad I gave it a chance! The world itself is interesting, the writting is solid, and the characters stand out from eachother. Vanessa definitely isn't the most evil giantess on this site but she certainly isn't gentle, and seems to care very little about the wellbeing of her captive.

On the other hand Dave and his silent rage and protest keeps the story going, and his tidbits about his past life or what he would do was he normal sized make him more interesting than the typical shrinkie protag. I kinda hope he'll escape tho so we can get other characters into the mix, so far there have been only two major players with other characters being relagated to background only. I'll be keeping up with this one!

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow, I thought that he was going to get to shower w/ her, when they were in the bathroom; that would have been awesome.  Based on the way that you've discribed the other events taking place - I would have liked to experience that...

 ...you're detailing is simply incredible!  And, you know when to back off and let the readers imagination fill in the blanks.  Although, I would like to see a bit more of your own, ...your writing is fantastic!  ;`)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2017 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Dave but this wouldn't be one of your stories without some peril for our little hero.