Date: December 13 2017 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
Its crazy how he actually misses Vanessa, THATS how bad hes been treated here! If he escapea again and gers recaptured by someone is this person gonna be even worse!? With this guys shitty luck I wouldnt doubt it although it seems like all Immune people in this world are complete assholes so maybe theres no luck involved!
Date: December 12 2017 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
The prodigal daughter has returned, welcome back Goddess Haley!
Date: October 05 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
Man, such FUN chapters! Power Couples are very Sexy, especially when Degrading the Hell out of Tinies, making them feel incredibly Insignificant. PLEASE, do write more about Haley and her real Man, as They continue with Tormenting poor, lil' Dave, sexually also! THANX so much.
Date: October 04 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Why would anyone want to leave Haley's happy home?
Date: September 11 2017 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
I don't understand how these idiots could keep asking WHY the shrinkies would want to escape? They realize they were human people once, with dreams, hopes, wanting of freedom, etc, and when they get treated worse than a dog and they decide to leave they act like it's the oddest thing ever. Who wouldn't want to leave!?
Date: September 11 2017 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love the new power couple and Haley will set him straight.
Date: August 19 2017 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
Nice, hes getting his chance! I hope he escapes because Sydney isnt very intetesting to me. Shes just the bratty, entitled teenaged character, par for the course. Vanessa was meaner to him but far more intetesting of a chatacter imo.
Date: August 17 2017 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Naughty, naughty David.
Don't bite the hand that rules you.
Date: August 17 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I made an account just to say that as a long-time lurker (5 years or so at least), this is probably the best story I have ever read on this site (or anywhere).
Date: August 03 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hayley is a true goddess.
Date: July 12 2017 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
This story both depresses and arouses me, it's weird. This story depresses me more than the gts violent gore stories out there, probably because instead of just killing people they are humiliated in such brutal ways, both physically and emotionally. And in this story these were people once with lives, hopes and dreams, and everyone knows it but they are treated so poorly and their past lives used to torment them. It hits hard. But it's arousing at the same time. Anyway, here's hoping for more updates soon!
Date: July 12 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
Beautiful!
Her plight is incredibly crafted.
Date: July 10 2017 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter! Sydney is shaping up to be a great mistress and the private school makes for a great setting. Its also great to see how to parents and teachers interact with the student's shrunken pets. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: July 03 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love this story! I like how he keeps going from the frying pan and into the fire. he was much better off with Vanessa, I dont think Sydney cares much about his well being, he’s just a trinket and now apparently Ms Holloway is bad enough to make people tremble in fear.
On a side note, this is the second time I have seen a dickhead review in two separate stories. All the themes in this genre has been explored to death. This story is well written with good characters and not dull as shit, you know, actually has action in it.
Date: July 01 2017 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
As messed up as this situation is, this might be a good chance for Dave to escape, hes proven himself resourceful before!
Date: July 01 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
Ok the teacher confiscating tinies is hotter than I ever expecting it to be. Still curious to see Judy at Hannah's barefeet but you craft an amazing story. Also nice homage/callback to Jacksmith's "Toy Teacher" with Hannah's pets name.
Date: June 19 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love this story, it's my favorite of the still regularly updated stories on this site and so hope you update again soon! Now onto my chapter overview. Basically, this guy has the worst luck, probably because the story itself needs him to go from scenario to scenario but what are the odds the mom walks in JUST as he makes his escape and happens to see him in near pitch darkness? And it again, what are the odds he gets recaptured on the first day of his escape from Vanessa when he's under a pound of snow? Story convenience I guess. Also I'm noticing small tidbits in this and other chapters that people not immune to the shrink disease are actually kind of rare. The majority IS immune right? Or am I misinterpreting things? Anyway, I liked the chapter and hope you update again soon!
Date: May 24 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great update! Worth the wait! If he gets much smaller, they may consider doing a shot with him *gulp*