What a wild ride that was.

Poor Dave, what a depressing end to his life's story... He finally accepted life as Sydney's slave only to soon after have his life snuffed out in a horrible fashion. I love Vanessa making a return at the end, in hindsight, I wonder if Dave would have been better off staying with her. I can't help but wonder what was going through Judy's mind as well, as she watched the shrunken man she saw all that time ago executed like that in front of her, when they were just conversing hours before.

I love this writing style, this long-haul narrative writing of tinies from their perspectives as slaves in a cruel, uncaring world that seems intent on torturing them mercilessly. I've now read all of It's a Sorority Thing (Except for Homecoming, that's next!) and now this, I can't wait to experience more of your stories. You are truly a master at getting me, as the reader, invested in a long narrative, something that's not easy to do with giantess stories.

Amazing

Judy doesn't even get any meaningful screentime in the finale, you jerk!

Great to see 'Nessa again though and always good to read another of your stories through to the end.

Who knew well off teenage girls could be so cruel...everyone who's read you or Jacksmith's stories did but still wonderful to read.

I am curious to see where this all ends for Dave, little guys been on quite the rollercoaster of emotions.

Well maybe Haley didn't use him as a toy but Sydney did so can't say this guy has the best luck. I mean most people here would LOVE to be in his position but it's obvious that Dave the character doesn't like what's happening to him. And in real life would this be pleasurable for the tiny man?

I think it would be mostly pain and struggling for breath, I don't think in real life this would be sexy. Anyway, is there ever gonna be a nice person that is immune? I notice that not only are the immune people terrible to tiny people they are just douches in general. Is this inhenrent to the gene that makes them immune?

I'm interested in this universe itself but I recognize that WE the readers are basically limited to whatever bubble Dave finds himself in. So the chances of getting any kind of backstory or world building are slim.

Anyway I do REALLY like this story. Even tho the big people are terrible I haven't yet seen someone I consider EVIL. In other words someone who kills tinies for no reason. So far it's just a bunch of pricks that see tinies as commodities and treat them worse than hamsters.

Pretty good chapter. Despite his fears Haley didn't use him as a toy to get off so that's something good eh?

I think you accidently added this chapter to the previous one, it's a combination of the two.

Every tiny in your universe must be in a living nightmare every moment of their existence.

Haley is amazing still.

I thought we'd see a softer, guard lowered version of Haley as the chapter began...she didn't wait long to prove us wrong.

Great to see this back.