Date: October 11 2007 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
How would this story of progressed if they finished reading the end user license agreement?
Date: July 05 2007 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
a good story... bur there wasnt really any crushing.. feet.. vore.. ass crushing.. like any of those... but it still is a great story.. THEY SHOULD MAKE A MOVIE OUT OF THIS xD it'll make millions of dollars.. lol
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm not really into those things, but a movie would be a cool idea. I wonder who would play Isabella...
[Report This]Date: June 03 2007 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 103
Incredible. I just found this story yesterday and spent much of this evening and the last reading through it all. "Logging out has never been this hard" is an appropriate tagline for the story in more ways than one, because that's how I feel when I'm reading it.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2007 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is very similar to J.R.R Tolkien's line of books....
explain! (Very Very Very good story though)
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Zalrus IX
[Report This]Date: May 01 2007 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 83
This is just an amazing story Cassadria. It has a feel of an Alice in Wonderland with a bit of Tolkien and Tron. While having minor similiarities, it is in a class of it's own and just blows me away with how well you just pull me into it and let me lose myself in Neverquest.
I really hope there is more to come and soon, as I really would like to see how they manage to save those people who are stuck in the game. If they save them at all. I wonder if disconnecting their physical bodies from the game may also leave their minds trapped in the server. Whatever happens needs to happen soon, as a body can only go a short time without food and water, and I don't even want to think about the release of wastes.
You have a brilliant mind for writing and your sense of humor is always you, which is both funny and insane at the same time. You are one of the great authors that create worlds people like me can fall into and enjoy being lost in for a short time. It is quite an experience seeing your Neverquest in my mind and feeling for these people you created.
I consider myself lucky to both know you as a friend and to have read and lost myself in this story, because both experiences have been wonderful.
[Report This]Date: April 25 2007 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Simply amazing story that sometimes allows you to forget you're reading a story at all.
[Report This]Date: April 21 2007 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 83
Well, I certainly hope it's not over! Again, as I said before, it's a great story, and you were able to keep up that level of greatness and the quality of your humor throughout 83 freaking chapters. Nice work. I only hope you continue this soon. I look forward to reading more of the adventures of these characters. And I really want this game.
Author's Response:
You're halfway there! Oh, and there's a sequel to the book, so you may want to check that out sometime. :)
[Report This]Date: April 20 2007 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well, I'm not exactly far into this, er, epic, but I already love it. It has that lovely style of humor that's just so appealing to us nerds. I really enjoy all the various jokes about MMORPGs and breaking the fourth wall. You really do have quite the gift for humor.
The story itself is also very well-written. I don't find myself halted by grammar errors or lost in a single massive paragraph (although if this entire story were a single paragraph, I would have given up a loooong time ago). I've always loved stories that you can just lose yourself in and be content with reading them, and it's great that I've found yet another story to do that in with yours. I look forward to reading the next, oh...*counts*...69 chapters.
Whew.