Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2017 12:07 AM Title: Prologue

Anna(her mother) had to kill those terrible people after finding out they killed her beloved husband. Anna and Alison had to go into hiding.

Anna had broken all the limbs of Ashley. A action she surely regrets and Alison had enough time to think about it. A screaming Asley in pain most of the time will cut to the bone. Alison's behaviour is very realistic, AdamX.

All four of them are hurt bad. It will be interesting how they will pick up life again and what they did and said the past 1,5 years.

I look foward too this one and how you develop the characters.

 

Author's Response:

We will hear about Anna in the next chapter

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2017 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Losing Touch

Interesting interaction. Feels real. The best you can do as a shrunken person is to stay calm and just go with it so that it doesn't bother you anymore and keep yourself sane and rest well.
The only thing that would really bother me is the family and friends that worry about me. For the rest I try to adapt to the situation which is possible if the owners are reasonable.

Interesting is that you see the hardships of both parties, the shrunken and the not-shrunken. For all four there is an uncertain future with danger.

 

 

Author's Response:

Thanks. And yeah, that's basically where the characters are, just trying to live with one another

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 10:09 PM Title: Prologue

I find myself strangely angry that the circumstances for the shrinking in the original story is actually legitimized just from the other shrinkings in this universe.

Goddammit

Author's Response:

Hehe. There are multiple ways to shrink in this universe, as some of the stories have hinted. Most characters just aren't aware of them all yet

Reviewer: muammar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 6:53 PM Title: Prologue

I have read all your stories! They are gorgeous. Always look forward to continuing

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 12:40 PM Title: Prologue

I found "family reunion" good. Something was accomplished there and it didn't get stuck to long in fetish mode. Characters were interesting.

I wonder how those 4 are doing and where this second one leads too. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm hoping to repeat that with this one.