Date: February 05 2017 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent work! I looked at some of your previous works and man, I love your giantesses! Violent, hungry, lustful, sexy, vengeful, these are the very attributes I love in a growing giantess. I also love how you make them use the tiny objects in their environment like the chimney in Rampaging Robyn and the sign Yasmin used on the cars. That's something I personally never saw yet in a good old giantess rampaging in a city store. Kudos to you for that :)The part with the world largest cake that Yasmin ate like it was nothing was so hot I had to stop reading the story for some minutes to catch my breath. It's a shame some of your work is under reviewed but I like how that doesn't stop you from writing something new. Guess giantess rampage stories aren't as popular as they use to be. Anyways, your writing is no doubt superb, your descriptions on top and more importantly(in my opinion)not at all hard to follow cuz I's stupids lol. Your an awesome writer and I hope to see more of your work. We need more writers like you to reopen the gates to giantess rampages. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the comment! lol the cake chapter was the first I wrote in this story and made the Yasmin thing up around it :)
Date: February 04 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Like is she turkish or something?
Author's Response:
No, she is a white Australian, from Brisbane.
Date: February 04 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Where is yasmin from
Date: February 04 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
There's something very endearing about the style of writing you have- it's simple and straight to the point. The reader knows exactly what the character is feeling, and the story is moving at a fine pace. I look forward to reading more tonight. Well done!