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Reviewer: Wholia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2017 12:06 AM Title: The Last Turn in Richfield

Nice ending, and nice story in general. Very cute, entertaining and easy to ready. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2017 10:07 PM Title: The End

A great plot twist; a wonderful conclusion; and a valuable life lesson for Zac.* Thanks for sharing.

* "Women never admit when they're wrong. Even when they are!"

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2017 12:48 PM Title: The Twins

The ghost girls must've been emanating the same kind of electro-cosmic energy that brought Frankie-quin back to life.

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Date: February 16 2017 12:43 PM Title: Playing Musical Monsters

This has got to be the first gts-tale, in history, featuring an unaware furry.

Reviewer: Wholia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 1:09 AM Title: The Last Turn in Richfield

I like Heket a lot. "Oh, my Ra!" and "I curse you with a thousand locusts!" were golden. Very likeable characters in general. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Really? I wouldn't have thought you would like her. I would have thought Frankie or Cerberina.

 

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Date: February 10 2017 8:16 AM Title: The Grandfather Clock

Just keeps getting better and better. :-)

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Date: February 06 2017 8:19 PM Title: The Monster and her Nurse

I wonder which of those 88 things will be the "key" to solving his problem?

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Date: February 04 2017 9:37 PM Title: The Pining

Much better! I especially liked your Harley Quinn version of the Bride of Frankenstein.

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2017 4:39 AM Title: The Pining

The haunted house aspect is abit interesting but the surrounding world is also interesting. From what I can tell giants and times coexist together and share laws. Does that mean if those girls had eaten the tiny they'd be charged for murder? It was really odd how they literally tried to kill a guy for no reason too, especially when the entrance giant was worried about the safety of the tiny.

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2017 10:50 PM Title: The Last Turn in Richfield

Cool concept. I'm interested to see more.

Author's Response:

I'm interested in writing more

Reviewer: Wholia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2017 2:21 AM Title: The Last Turn in Richfield

It just feels really cool to see this written into a story. I love how the first chapter ended up, and I can't wait to read the rest. Good job!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 02 2017 6:51 PM Title: The Last Turn in Richfield

Not a bad opener. But, a lot of the run-on sentences should be split up, with appropriate capitalization of the first letter of the first word of each new sentence. And the narrative text needs even more separation from the character dialogue!

Reviewer: Nodqfan Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2017 6:39 PM Title: The Last Turn in Richfield

Can't wait to see what happens next

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