[Report This]Date: January 19 2023 8:23 PM Title: Jo
Can Jo make protagonist invincible and trap him in her stomach without worrying about digestion?
Date: January 19 2023 8:16 PM Title: Jo
That was one heck of a story. I am amazed our protagonist didn't blew his load in all this situation. Certainly don't think i will be able to hold.
[Report This]Date: January 25 2022 8:54 AM Title: Jo
I discovered this story with a quick Google search, thinking I was getting to a regular horny story. I was wrong
I quickly became hooked, I wanted to know how it would end. I really liked this mature style of writing, for example, to me, Jo is a great character, it had subtle foreshadowing about her inner good self
I specifically really loved the ending, it was the harvest of the seeds that were planted, taking in count the whole story and giving it the ending it deserves
Maybe it's a bit silly to review a 5 years old story, but I needed to do it. I had to stayed up until 6 AM because I needed to read the next chapter, and yes, I created an account for this.
I hope you'll get to read this because I would love you to know that someone else really enjoyed your story
[Report This]Date: June 24 2017 3:13 AM Title: Epilogue
The last two chapters in particular were very well written with great dialogue. Thanks for having published this story!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2017 8:10 PM Title: Jo's Judgement
Sigh, what a ride. We've reached the end of an epic. Sure we've got more bits would can explore but this is how it ends. Love it, glad we had a happy ending and some more info from Jo. Seems she's at least somewhat self aware. Bit surprized that he loved every part of it. Guess he's a bit more of a massicist than we thought if he can look back on the singing, gum chewiong, and smoking as favorable. Hey, we've all got our kinks lol. So what's on the horizon? New long story? Some short ones like the others? More alternate chapters for this tale or some of the past exploits? Or maybe You'll take me up on that RP invite ;)
You are a terrific author!
Author's Response: Oh, when he said he loved everything, he was more than certainly exaggerating to help his argument. The good outweighs the bad, sure, but the bad is still pretty bad. xD It certainly has been a wild ride, and while this is ending the world I've created is still open for more stories. I'm gonna take a good break for a while, collect my thoughts on what next, maybe write a few more shorties, and then we'll perhaps return to the world of Jo and our unnamed hero. No idea is off the table for what I could do with this world... so stay tuned. ;) Thank you for all your kind words over the course of this tale, my friend. It warms my heart to know that someone else out there has the same sort of niche fantasies as me, and gets enjoyment out of my humble works. :')
Date: June 11 2017 9:54 PM Title: Jo's Hangover
Honestly, having Jo find him then slightly get attached to our wonderful protagonist. Then she starts teasing him and asks how it was in her stomach. Maybe with all he's went through, he starts to feel himself being drawn into it. Experiencing it first hand, and he seems to still yearn for his fantasies. Maybe he tells Jo after a day out of her mouth that he wishes to go into her mouth again and says he knows he's crazy, but maybe he is a perv. She smiles or something and obviously teases him. Ending with him becoming the food he so struggled to attain a way not to become. Though of course, any ending to this won't sour what was an amazing story. It will always be one of my favorites :3
Author's Response: You know, that's an interesting way of looking at it, and I certainly like elements of it. The balance our tired hero has between fearing and loving Jo's mouth will certainly need to be addressed in their discussion; and I think I know how to work it in there, but we'll see, we'll certainly see. Either way, I can't divulge too much; it could ruin the storyline! Glad to hear this has been a favourite of yours; I hope to continue writing such tales for yours and others pleasure. :)
[Report This]Date: June 11 2017 6:17 PM Title: Jo's Hangover
MORNING BREATH YAY! It's been a long time coming this story, last chapters have been amazing, more stories need to be like this one. Will we find out why Jo shrank him? She said she has some good reason for shrinking and torturing folks so was it all really just because he fantasised about her gross mouth? Hoping for good amount of dialouge, a chapter for the end of this challange and one for epilogue would fit. Here's hoping for a passing grade from Jo and some leiniency on the whole slave thing. He accidently almost kills her, her friend intentionally almost kills him he could argue that eye for an eye assuming Jo doesn't count entering the stomach as auto failure.
As always, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I think I'm almost as glad to be writing about Jo's horrible morning breath as you are to be reading it! :D Essentially, if Jo's Inebriation was the climax to the action side of the story, this should finish up the plot; which, admittedly, has taken at least some sideline to the action. I'll probably read through it a tad more thoroughly to ensure I get in everything I want to, and give this the satisfactory ending it deserves. I must keep the veil of mystery up for at least one more chapter, I'm afraid... but I'll be working hard on it, trust me, Thank you as always for your kind words and support!
[Report This]Date: June 06 2017 6:34 PM Title: Jo's Stupor
"No negotiation, you're just a snack, you go back to my belly" game over for tiny man :D
Author's Response: Easy to see which way you want this story to end, huh? You'll just have to wait and see... ;)
Date: June 05 2017 8:59 PM Title: Jo's Stupor
I am so happy how you have this going. Although I do believe he's going to end up getting eaten for good though. Which is sad, but it's how most stories will end. I do hope Jo might be like, "He survived all this, he deserves to live. " but she seems like the person who would just swallow him and be like, "Try doing it again. I wanna be sober to experience your grand escape! " in any event, I'm throughly pleased and glad you are a writer. Phenomenal work.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're liking the progression! There definitely seem to be two rival sides building up here, though; suppose there have been for quite a while. Does our courageous hero live, or does he end up getting gobbled up again by Jo? It's an interesting conundrum, to say the least, and having the power to decide which way it goes is tantalising; even though I'm fairly certain on the ending, What I may do, if the demand is great enough, is write the alternative ending as a separate chapter or story, just so nobody's disappointed. At the sane time, though, that does leave the ending a tad open to which side you believe... we'll see, we'll see. All will be revealed, my friend; and my utmost thanks for your continued kind words. :)
[Report This]Date: May 26 2017 2:16 AM Title: Jo's Inebriation
First of all, this was one of the few real good stomach in-depth chapters I've read from any story. It's so good that it inspires me to add that type of scenery to my next stories (you may have kick-started a whole new subgenre / subtag for this site with these chapters)
And I'm glad it didn't end here. It would be really anti-climactic to me if it ended then and there. I don't know if you've already written the other chapters, but maybe add in a little butt/VG stuff for good measure? :)
Also, I'd love to see a prequel of her doing this to someone else haha. I think you may have a series on your hand there.
Keep up the amazing work, man!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! You're right, I never see enough in-depth stomach chapters on this site, especially not ones that cover a whole chapter. I'm honoured that I've inspired your own works in the future, though; and that you think I've started a trend here! I don't know whether it'd come under endosoma or not, but I'd certainly be somewhat interested in seeing it possibly become a vore sub genre. I do have some body exploration planned next chapter, but I can't guarantee you'll be seeing any of that... but I'll see if I can fit it in. A prequel's also been on the cards for a good while, as I have some good ideas for Jo doing other things to other people in her past; including some I've teased in the story itself. We'll see... ;)
[Report This]Date: May 25 2017 9:13 PM Title: Jo's Inebriation
Knew it and personally happy c: Amazing details as always. Somehow this stomach chapter is evenn better than the one dedicated to it?! Really love the portrayal of food rafts, churning, and a moving host. Here's hoping he doesn't stay knocked out for long, ever minute unconcious in a minute less experiencing that maw. The question is, will she brush her teeth before bed or go to sleep with sick in her mouth XP
Still a number of ways this could go but I'll save my predictions unless you want feedback for things yet to be written :x
Prequel, sequel, alternate chapters, I need more Jo's Mouth! <3
Author's Response: Glad you liked it as always, my good man! Yeah, I sorta split the chapters into stomach-description (because there was just so much of it) and stomach-action, and as a result I think the latter turned out better, or at least more exciting, than the former. Trust me, he'll wake up soon... and no, do you really think someone as drunk as Jo is gonna remember dental hygiene? ;) There will most likely be a prequel, but it won't be mouth-centred; though don't fret, it'll still appear as much as possible. Until then, though, there's still three chapters to go.... so stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2017 2:20 PM Title: Jo's Stomach
Very nicely worked out, this story seems to be heading into a fitting ending. And I'm excited for the new story you're cooking up man
Author's Response:
Oho, I might surprise you yet!
The new story most likely is just gonna be a one chapter affair, like Cut Short and The Morning After. I'll write it at some point soon, but I'm focusing on warpping up this first, I think.
Next chapter is up now, so perhaps some of your questions can be answered...:)
Date: May 20 2017 9:51 PM Title: Jo
That moment you wish you were this guy lol. Awesome work man. I freaking LOVE this story.
Author's Response: I've heard from people who love this story, but thus far no-one's loved it so much they gave the same stellar review twice! :P Heh, I think we all wish we were our little protagonist, tortured as he may be. All jokes aside, glad to hear you like my story, and thank you for your kind words. Stay tuned for more! :D
[Report This]Date: May 17 2017 1:35 AM Title: Jo's Gullet
Amazing chapter, man! So is the next chapter going to be the final?
Author's Response: Thank you! I couldn't possibly say; surely, that'd spoil what his fate was. ;) But I will tell you at least that the end is in sight. Watch this space!
Date: May 16 2017 8:30 PM Title: Jo's Gullet
And there it is. Our new aquentance turns out to be even more evil than Jo, who'd have guessed?! Great work on the multi-mouth perspective, during and after the kiss. Next chapter will be a doozy and I'm thinking it and the next will set the tone for the way this will end. I see 3 ways this can go. Can not wait!!!
Author's Response: Well, like I said in response to Yiur last review, certainly not me! Trying actively to kill the little dude is evil, I suppose, but who knows what her intentions were for it? It could easily have been jealousy rather than just gleeful sadden, and I tried to keep that ambiguous for a bit of mystery. Thing is, 'evil' can be completely subjective, so... who knows? :P Glad you liked the use of Melissa's mouth; I'd been itching to describe something a little different after I felt like it was getting a little same-y. As for the next few chapters...the end is indeed in sight, but as I said to Shaman, how soon will it come? I couldn't possibly say, for fear of spoiling it. You'll just have to wait and see,,, and God, I can tell its gonna be a hell of a lot of fun to write, Until then, you'll just ha d to imagine.... ;P
[Report This]Date: May 16 2017 7:26 PM Title: Jo's Gullet
I just love this story <3
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Stay tuned for more soon! :D
[Report This]Date: May 11 2017 5:33 PM Title: Jo's Kiss
Been a while since I put a review up on this story. Did NOT expect another girl to be brought into the mix, let alone another sadist. Love that she is able to be frank about her experiences with Jo though XD
Kiss was well writen, clear that Melissa wanted a piece of our hero. Seems the myth about British teeth is still the law of the land ;P
Looking forward to what is certain to be a gnarly few next chapters and an ending that can go in any direction!
Author's Response: I'll be honest with you- neither did I! Originally Jo's Kiss was gonna be a standalone chapter, with Jo just snogging some randomer, but it didn't quite feel right. So, in trying to search for a way to make it work, I thought up Melissa. As I write the chapter, she developed a backstory to make her more credible, which overall became more plot... and thus, Jo's Friend was born out of my desire to keep my chapters at refular length. xD I'm not gonna lie, I'm exaggerating a reedy bit when it comes to the dental of most Brits.. there's certainly a few people like that, but trust me, it's a minority! Always glad to see you review, my friend. It certainly is going to be a hell of a ride these next few chapters... after twenty-one chapters, I'm finally filling my promise on one of my tags. I'll let you figure out which one. ;)
[Report This]Date: April 06 2017 8:42 PM Title: Jo's Breath
have just started this story and enjoying it a lot so far
Author's Response: Glad to hear it! I hope you'll keep enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: April 02 2017 7:12 PM Title: Jo's Wrath
Very good chapter! I hope that he will voluntarily end his life in the bowels of jo to his great satisfaction ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! You'll have to stay tuned see what happens in the depth's of Jo's body... ;)
[Report This]Date: March 30 2017 9:46 PM Title: Jo's Wrath
Damn, now I want a paraell universe Chapter 18 where he says "Oh screw this - I'm taking her out!" and chokes her to death.
Perhaps a special edition after you wrap up?
Author's Response: How ruthless! I have actually been toying with the idea of a separate story for alternate conclusions after I wrap this son of a bitch up, but I'll see what sort of feedback for it later closer to the time. Thanks for reviewing! :)