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Reviewer: cixelsyd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2022 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

Slow inexorable shrinking & mischievous women are the best combination.

Reviewer: Ombligo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2019 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

One of the absolute hottest stories ever committed in this genre, I consider this one of the greats.



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And someday I'll finish it!

 

Thanks for the kind words!

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2017 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 19

Sorry you don't get many reviews (I know what *that's* like hehe), but I enjoy the story so far and hope you'll continue uploading ;)

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2017 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

Awesome story! I like how the girls are generally kind and protective of Neville. Sure, they have selfish desires for their own improvement, but not at the expense of Neville's comfort. That could be seen with the insertion in this chapter. It must've taken incredible willpower for Vivian to pace her movements, but she did, ensuring that she didn't harm him. Perhaps their psychic link aids with this.

I also noticed Neville eat a lot. Perhaps once he gets small enough, they'll give him time to rest and recouperate. At that point, he may be able to regain weight and size by eating.

Hopefully the girls don't get too powerful tho. Maybe their gains will fade until getting a recharge. Hmm, so many possibilities.

Thanks for sharing this story!

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