[Report This]Date: April 10 2021 6:20 PM Title: Stocking
Love chapter 2 and unaware moment with Beth.
Date: August 31 2018 11:33 PM Title: Minimizer
I'm really enjoying the start to this one, you are really good at making a character feel worthless. When are you gonna finish it though?
[Report This]Date: August 02 2017 1:13 AM Title: Stocking
Don't be afraid to waffle on or repeat yourself, I find your writing style conducive for suspense and immersion.
I hope that you manage to get back to this story, I see such potential for an amazing experience.
I commend your mastery of the unaware genre!
[Report This]Date: June 14 2017 6:43 PM Title: Minimizer
great story so far, excited to see where it heads, any plans on finishing weekend at home? cos its been left in a cliffhangera86;a039;
[Report This]Date: January 30 2017 9:47 PM Title: Stocking
Amazing! Just amazing! I can honstley say you are my favorite writer on this site. Keep up the amazing work!!
Date: January 29 2017 9:10 PM Title: Minimizer
Woo, you're back! Of all the authors on this site, you're the one who writes exactly what I'm into.
A good first chapter. Established the characters, the situation, and the conflict without boring the reader. I'm excited for whatever comes next, because with you I know it'll be great.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Yes, there's not much of what I write on the internet, which is precisely why I write it. I hope Chapter 2 is up to par because that's basically how the story will be written!
Date: January 28 2017 5:46 PM Title: Minimizer
Loved this first chapter!! Will be hopeing for more! I would love to see more scenes with Beth and Mom. Oh and Beth standing at the door reminded me of Honey I shrunk the Kids a little. Would love to see a Mom sweeping the floor scene in this story as well. Maybe a beth one too. But good start! Hope the next chapter comes out soon! like soon soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes, there will be more. A lot more. I have most of this planned out and believe me, it's going to be really long. Chapter 2 will show you how detailed I'm getting with this story, so it'll be a long one. Which is good.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2017 4:35 PM Title: Minimizer
Okay, 1st things 1st WELCOME BACK! Okay I'm loving where this story is going and can't wait for more chapters to come. Unaware is my absolute favorite! Here's to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you. It feels nice to be writing here again. I'm looking forward to where the story is going as well, and I think once I get Chapter 2 up you'll see how I'm doing it. I'll just say I've turned what some people would make a sentence or two into several paragraphs.