[Report This]Date: April 21 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey hey Kenta :D
Sorry for not getting to your story until now. I just read it tonight and I loved the final chapter! I'm a bit sad to see it end, but I'm hoping to see more of your work soon. :D
The scenes in this one were really great. Especially the parts where Mio talked down to Tarou. You portrayed it really nicely and made it immersive to me. :P
I hope you plan on doing more demeaning stuff like that later on. It's nice on occation. I do like the cutesy side as well though, so you have lots of well rounded corners!
The ending to was really nice. I like how all the girls began to fight over him in their own unique ways xD It really made it feel like he was covited amongst them each in their own way, and that for me is a personal favorite.
All and all, you have a really great story, and I hope my review made you happy. Just like I was reading it. :)
P.S...
I forgot the stars again, but I deleted and tried again. Now you have stars! :P
Author's Response:
Hi hi
Oh no need to be sorry, I'm just glad you read it and enjoyed it, it makes me really happy. And yes, I'm advacing bit by bit on the other story I mentioned, so hopefully I can get it done with a better rhythm than this one, which took me ages to finish...
Is good that you liked those parts, I was insecure about them since it was the first time I wrote something like that. I'm not sure if I'll write some more of it but, going full cutesy all the time could be a bit boring so it could happen. And thanks for the compliment!
I fills me with joy to hear that it ended on a good note. And yes, it makes me really happy so read the reviews so thanks a lot for taking your time so submit one.
[Report This]Date: April 12 2017 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry!
I didn't realize I had to rate it at the bottom. :(
Sorry, I wanted to rate it to. My bad. 5 stars! or... 10 for some reason that equals 5... this site is weird.
Author's Response:
It's okay. Actually, the same happened to me a couple of times with your stories and I had to delete the review and then send it again with the rating xD
Thanks for the stars.
Date: April 12 2017 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't think I ever leave reviews before, but i'll try for this story. You've certainly done the same for me. xD
When I saw you wrote a story and then read it was from an Anime, I knew it would be fun to read. But, I didn't know this Anime so thats why I haven't reviewed till now. But, I wasn't going to brush it off either. So I watched the Anime XD
I like MM! it's a really funny one with some exceptional art work. I don't see art as good from a lot of shows honestly. Not to mention the fact the main character has Sadomasochism. XD
But, i'm not leaving a review for the show, sorry! Just wanted to let you know I liked the show that you showed me with your story. :D
Your story read just like the anime in my opinion. I could see all the events happen just like in the show. It was really funny from the begining with Tarou being trampled and sat on by Noa, to cute with him being loved on by Yuuno in such a cruelish and demeaning way, knowing he not so secretly loved every moment of it.
I'm hoping you have more for this story, I really do like it. Your work was really easy to get into :D
Well, I hope this review was all right. Sorry if it's to long. I know I love the long ones personally, but if you wanted something short and sweet my bad. Thank you for writing this story Kenta.
Author's Response:
It's a honor to have you review my story = )
Wow, it makes me happy to hear that someone watched the anime because of my story, I really wasn't expecting such a thing. I'm glad you liked it, I would've feel kind of awkward otherwise, even if it wasn't as if I recommended it directly. And true, I might've seen some other anime with masochists as their main character but not really another one with that being the focus of the story.
It's been quite some time since I watched MM so it being similar to the original work is something that worried me a lot, it takes a load off my shoulders to read that I haven't strayed far from it. Thanks.
I... I'm sorry not being able to deliver but I was planning to end it on chapter 4, so while there's more for this is not really much more ;_; I might come back to this some time in the future but not really soon. If it helps I already have some base for my next story, based on Anne Happy also known as Unhappy Go Lucky, which just as MM is not really that popular but since is way more recent you might know about it? It'll be F/f so it could be different from this one but I hope is still enjoyable. Again, sorry for not being able to live up to expectations. And as for it easy to get into, is also something that was worrying my mind. I think I've enough knowledge of english to write at least decently but since I don't use it that much colloquially I was worried my choice of words could be strange.
And all reviews are welcome, there's no need to apologize. Just as I like writing all my thoughts while reviewing, reading what people think about my story, long or short, it just makes my day.
Date: April 12 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey! Congrats on posting your first story. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! It feels nice to finally have some chapters done.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
never heard of that anime, but good story
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot. It makes me happy that it can be enjoyed by people that don't know about the series.
[Report This]Date: January 25 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good anime for some size shenanigans. Like it so far and can't wait for Mio!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. It might be a bit more until she appears but it surely will happen.