Date: February 08 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
good going...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: February 05 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well I'm glad you went with the age you did, because him being a teenager has really changed my view on his character.
As I originally though he was maybe 22-26, I just thought he was a selfish, lecherous idiot... but now i see he's just a normal teenager!
It makes me re-think his backstory - He's not a man who can't be bothered to face his problems, but a scarred and broken boy who sees Tor as a symbol of safety and stability.
No wonder he became so attached to her so quickly, even though he thought she didn't care for him at all!
Date: February 05 2017 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
Honestly! Tiny teenage boys just don't know how to talk to giant women respectfully! In all honesty, I'm surprised by how young Eric is, I had thought he was in his early 20's. I'm guessing Tor might be in her late 20's/Early 30's, but it's definitely cute how much she's taking her role as guardian of this little boy seriously - as well as how he so accepts his place as her pet!
Author's Response:
Eric's age is something I went back and forth on as I tried to decide what was best. But I decided that he just now ran away, his father's pressure to marry can't have been going on for too long. As for Tor's age, you aren't too far off! I plan to swing her age into the story here soon. Thank you so much for your review! It's always appreciated.
[Report This]Date: February 05 2017 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
"Like you were going to condemning the humans to your gut" Look who's talking haha!
"Julia gained boldness in Tor's absence and sat beside Eric" I think I might have an idea where this is going next... looking forward to it.
I wonder if Tor would have made the giant spit the people up had she known Eric was safe beforehand... Too bad she didn't know I guess. Well it does seem she is willing to help the group of people get to their destination at least, is she getting softer due to Eric's influence?
Anyways, thanks for the chapter !
Author's Response: And thank you for the review! Is it softness? Or is it she doesn't want Eric pestering her the whole time and trying to guilt trip her? Only she knows for sure!
Date: February 05 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
That's supposed to be "do you hate", sorry.
[Report This]Date: February 05 2017 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
"My people are peaceful." An Elder attempts to devour an entire camp of humans, tries to run, and fails miserably. And despite what would have been mass murder, aforementioned Elder is allowed to go loose.
Well this time is wasn't Tor. But I am hoping that every single one of my reviews begins the same way.
Eric: "My dad only cares about himself! He wanted to arrange a marriage for me!"
Doctor: "I wanna arrange a marriage between you and this girl."
Eric: "I don't care about her personality, I'll IMMEDIATELY state how hot she is like a lecher!"
Doctor: "So why do you like arranged marriages?"
Eric: "Because I'd have no independence!"
Doctor: "... Arent you a slave?"
Eric: "I'm a pet! I have no independence, rights, or ability to stop my master from wanton acts of murder and violence."
Doctor: "..."
Author's Response: I always look forward to your reviews, just because they crack me up and summarize character thoughts/actions in a way that I may not see when looking at the story. Thanks for your thoughts!
Date: February 02 2017 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love the asside of the young man feeling insignificant under the giant horse's balls! I wonder if Idiot makes Eric feel insignificant, seeing as we haven't had any real interaction between them
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks for seeing that. I love when readers notice the tiny things like that. As for Eric, he's almost always been at Tor's level when around Idiot. We'll get to more interaction with them later. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 31 2017 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love Tor's grumpy personality. She doesn't seem to be honest to herself about her true feelings.
Julia huh? I get the feeling something's soon going to happen involving her. Otherwise why bother state her name?
As for the number of reviews, don't let that discourage you. I know plenty of authors get discouraged from the little amount of reviews they get. But honestly I think that once you hit a certain cap, you will get a lot more since people don't bother to read stories with few reviews but jump on ones that have a lot of them... it's a vicious circle. That's how some stories hit 100+ reviews.
Author's Response: It's for readers like you, who leave comments that tell me exactly what they like about the story, that keep me going. Thanks so much!
Date: January 31 2017 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey Coal, Do you have a personal website where you upload your stories too? There's rumors giantessworld isn't going to have it's domain renewed. Just curious and i'd love to see how your story ends.
Author's Response: I publish on deviant art under the same username as well as aryion.com under the name JinxedMyself. Glad you like my stories!
[Report This]Date: January 29 2017 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to kidnap a doctor from his family and belligerently demand his service... presumably with out the monetary compensation required to not only pay for the business he is losing by not being where he is supposed to be, the cost of repairing two crippled legs, and the trauma his children most likely will never recover from.
Loved the chapter.
How tall is Idiot? Is he a huge draft horse that even Tor finds large? Or a pony since giant horses are already giant enough?
Oh! And I forgot.
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to desire to murder her own kin, even the one who clearly isn't at fault. I love this trend...
Author's Response:
She seems like such a contradiction, doesn't she? Just remember the other half of that statement. "but our anger is fierce when roused." Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! It means quite a lot to me. <3
Date: January 29 2017 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love these kinds of stories - the ones with extreme kindness and cruelty in equal measure.
When a giant is too kind, they come across as boring, when a giant is too cruel, they can be very off-putting.
So I love the ambiguity in this! As much as I'm here for the fetish-fuel, it's great to actually feel strong emotions of anger at Tor, and sadness for her victims.
I also read the side-story, and while it's not a happy ending, it's good to get that closure on their story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review my story! Tor is a very strong character and definitely has her off-putting moments, to say it lightly. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: January 28 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, I don't know what to say, aside that I'm GLAD you're continuing this old story. I had already read the original one a long time ago, which I appreciated a lot (especially the interaction between Tor and Eric). But I have to admit that the new version is even better !
I had always wanted to see some playful giantess protecting a tiny person, but without being kind to every tinies. So Tor actually not minding eating tinies who piss her off, even in Eric's presence, is exactly the kind of thing I've been longing to see on this site for a long time. Well, I do believe that her reasoning for eating them was a little childish and unfounded though... Haha. Btw your side story about the fate of the doctor and his assistant was really well done too (I'm skeptical about the fact of tinies being able to survive in a stomach for up to 3 days though...)
I'm glad that you're including new tinies in new chapters too, I was actually afraid that it would soon come to a point where the only tiny would be Eric, in a world of only giants/giantesses.
Aside from that, it's very well written, well, as expected from an english teacher I suppose. May I ask where you are from? Just curious. It's okay if you don't want to tell though.
Please keep this up.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for continuing to read the update! I am glad you're enjoying the story. That's always important. I'm from Texas, deep east Texas to be exact. ;) As for Eric being the only tiny/human, that won't happen. Not in the long-run, anyway. There may be a few chapters like that, but not the overall story.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to break another Elder's nose because that Elder was a tad childish. Then calls HIM petty. Tor really is a monster...
I'm really interested to learn more of the lore of this story. Not enough stories have a medieval/fantasy setting. Way too many high school stories. I'm guilty of that but still, keep writing please.
Author's Response: She isn't exactly the best representative of her race, is she? But I suppose all of us are guilty of that at one point or another. Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate it. :)
[Report This]Date: January 25 2017 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter! I think Tor is growing fond of him. Not enough boob stuff on this site, I especially appreciated that :p
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate the time you took. As for Tor, she's always a bit cagey with emotions. She shows rather than says. As for boob stuff, there's more to come in the future. Stay tuned!
Date: January 17 2017 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I am sorry I love Tor. I think she has a tsundere charm about her that I love. I kinda hopes she keeps eating people that angry her for two reasons. One, I hope it becomes something of a gage where Tor will have to hide her people diet from Eric, which I hope she fails at. Two, I hope as her feeling Eric grows she just starts eating women she thinks are trying to steal Eric away from her. I hope to read more and I hope to see more of this unlikely romance. Also, like pixis I to love the mythology debate and hatred two races have for each other. Great story.
Author's Response: Don't be sorry, I love Tor, too! She's so cagey with her emotions it makes it fun to write. There's more mythology to debate and more hatred between the two races to be seen. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: January 17 2017 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I actually love Tor, am I her only fan out here?lol and I really want to know her brothers and see how are they going to be with the little princeling. How are they anyway?cant imagine if they are more tough and ruthless than Tor. Im so excited to see how this is going to go.
Author's Response: Her brothers will actually be coming into the story fairly soon! I look forward to your reviews when they do! Thanks for taking the time to let me know your thoughts.
[Report This]Date: January 16 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Considering the leader of the guys sent to apprehend Eric had a brand on his face, but was still scared to the point he'd face an Elder, he must be Satan incarnate for Eric to become a pet rather than risk his father's wrath. That or the girl he was supposed to marry preferred to keep the toilet seat down or something unspeakably horrible like that.
[Report This]Date: January 16 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to swallow a innocent doctor and his assistant for showing concern to a patient. Either the girl Eric was betrothed to was a monster, or his father is an even bigger monster than Tor.
Author's Response:
Tor sounds rather hypocritical, doesn't she? Just remember the other half of that quote. As for who the bigger monster is, keep reading to find out! Thank you for your review. I'm flattered you took the time.
Date: January 15 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm very torn about this story. Fetish-wise, I find the descriptions of the doctor and assistant struggling within her as she eats the rest of her supper to be very hot. But story-wise, I now find Tor to be an utter bitch and I have no sympathy for her. I feel sorry for Eric and the fate he's stuck with as her pet.
Author's Response:
I love that you find her to be an utter bitch. I was hoping she came across that way but wasn't sure I had accomplished that. As for fetish, go read the side story I just posted. I think you'll enjoy it immensely. ;)
[Report This]Date: January 15 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love your knowledge of horses. I have only a basic knowledge and understanding, that went unused as I grew up, a long time ago. Instead, I learned about aircraft and their power plants.
Your writing style is great, and you tell the story well. I'm just waiting for more!
Author's Response:
While you wait, go have a look-see at the side-story I posted. Thanks again for your review!