[Report This]Date: February 25 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the chapter.
It was so cute when Eric kissed Tor on the neck. Though I would've expected him to say "it was for everything" rather than "I don't really know".
"that's off limit to humans" I wonder how long this is going to last :)
June looks interesting... And judging from her way of speaking, I suppose she's used to eating humans?
By the way, I know this is not feedback, but I have to say this : I hate roommates inconsiderate of others, exactly like June haha.
Author's Response:
All will be revealed in due time! And Eric only *thinks* he's suave and debonnaire and great with words. He's really not. ;) Haha Thanks for the review! Always appreciated.
[Report This]Date: February 24 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
Very interested in Auntie June and perhaps he'll finally get a little action...
Author's Response: Who knows what that voluptuous woman has in mind for our Eric. ;) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: February 24 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
"My people are peaceful." Almost every Elder up until this point has expressed the desire to eat a human. June isn't what I'd call an opposite. She is far more gregarious, true, but still kind of wants to murder a human on sight by eating them.
I don't understand what people see in Tor. She's kind of a cunt. I mean she's killed almost a dozen people in a month or so pretty brutally. She's also on a mission to kill her brothers. Why people like tsundere's is beyond me...
Tor gets sea sick? I wonder if she'll barf up anyone.
Bret has some GUTS to talk to Tor like that. He's the first person to do so successfully. Keep in mind a lot of women would have slapped him, but Tor leaves him be, whilst earlier she murdered a doctor for muttering under his breath. That seems fair.
So how does crime actually work in this country? Is there a limit to how humans are pets? Do people just look away from the stuff Tor has done? I mean, a hanging one thing, leaving a path of death like Tor is another. She is hot though, so I'm sure a jury would be willing to look past some stuff.
Author's Response: People don't know that Tor has eaten humans. It's not exactly obvious and she's not crowing about it. But most people would find eating humans to be abhorrent and disturbing. The whole "human pets" thing is going to be explained soon but there are rules to it. As for Bret, he's 6'2" and Tor is 5'8". There's a height/size disparity that she has learned not to get physically aggressive with. Her brothers aren't exactly angels and gentlemen. Thanks for your review! I always look forward to your perspective. It's refreshing and needed.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2017 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to reveal that her brothers frequently kidnap criminals from jails and either eat them or enslave them. Keep in mind, in this kind of time period, you could be jailed for being in debt, speaking out of turn, or some other ridiculous charge.
So this is not a medieval time period then if there are firearms. And well past the primitive stages of guns as well, as rifles came after muskets. Judging from the availability the time period would be equivalent to pre Civil War America. No revolvers, interesting.
Funny enough if giants actually existed they would be very vulnerable to guns and even bows. They would not be difficult to hit, even for a novice, and due to their size they would be hard pressed to remove an arrow or a bullet.
Author's Response: The time period I was aiming for was old west/pre-civil war. So glad I did well. As for being susceptible to human weaponry, I always figured a thicker layer of skin and clothes would be enough to prevent most things from affecting them. Also, I figured magnets could pull out embedded shards or bullets. Tor's brothers come into the scene within the next few chapters. Hope you're ready! And for an Elder who is Tor's opposite in demeanor. ;) Maybe he can sway your opinion just a bit. Thanks for the review! I always look forward to yours. They give me a whole different perspective. And one that I should try to keep in mind!
Date: February 20 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
> The princeling looked a little crestfallen at that. "Because I'm yours?" he tried.
Awwww <3
I got the feeling that since his kidnapping, Princeling is quickly accepting his place as her property, even if he doesn't want to admit it yet.
I also think he might secretly enjoy the fact that he has someone to protect him, and that's why he didn't want guns - just my interpretation though.
Also fun to see more of Princeling interacting with other Elders this chapter!
> "Being a lady isn't fun. Being a woman in a man's world is."
Weirdly, this made me realise how Tor rarely seems to get along with anyone - all the men she interacts with are described as either old or ugly, and women are weak or shrill.
I'm excited to see what Tor's brothers are like in person, and what their humans are like!
Author's Response: Good point! That is changing slightly in the next chapter. Interaction-wise, I mean. As for her brothers, within the next few they will show up! It won't be long now. As always, thank you for reviewing! It means a lot.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2017 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for the chapter!
I like how Tor likes Eric but treats him as a pet. Sometimes he tends to forget his position.
Indeed looking forward to what will happen with the brothers, and what's awaiting Eric. I hope we'll see Tor also dealing with their human pets in her own way... And that Eric won't need the gun^^
Author's Response: Well when you coddle and love on and occasionally give in to your pet, they tend to forget their place. As for dealing with the Posse... sometimes Eric might need the guns, sometimes he won't. ;) Tor is very protective, after all. Thanks for your review! It's always appreciated.
Date: February 20 2017 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I hope Tors brothers appear soon cause im DYING to know them. You have foreshadowed them so many times that you got me all excited about them. Tor has a twin right?the one who left her the note. Is he any better than the others?
Author's Response: They do come soon! In the next few chapters. I'm so glad all my foreshadowing is hyping people up. It means I'm doing something right. As for her twin, Mick, you'll have to wait and see! He did leave her clothes and supplies, after all. So he can't be too horrible. Right? ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: February 19 2017 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
Dude LOVE your work, the vore was spot on. Loving the story build and progress, would like to see more body exploration and some explicit scenes. But overall I'm really enjoying it, been a long time since I've read a good story :D
Author's Response:
Thank you! As for BE and explicit scenes, we'll get there. ;) I've got a few things in mind. I appreciate the review!
Date: February 19 2017 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
love your content cant wait to see more
Author's Response:
Thanks! Check back soon.
Date: February 13 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't tend to write reviews unless they pretain to something first such as other series or shows i might like but this story surprised me. The interactions are a little rugged but i like how the story is progressing with Tor as she see's Eric differently with each chapter. How it ends is still up in the air but i think i'll be back to continue reading this. It's sure to be an entertaining story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I appreciate each and every one.
[Report This]Date: February 13 2017 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
I loved the amount of vore in this chapter!
But I'm at work and I didn't need an erection. So, screw you. Thank you, but screw you ;)
Author's Response: Hahaha!!! Next time, don't read a chapter where Tor will be pissed at a human other than Eric while you're at work. Problem solved. ;) Thanks for the review and a chuckle to start my day.
[Report This]Date: February 13 2017 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thanks for the quick update! Nice chapter indeed. I feel kind of sorry for the watch captain. It seems odd that they had no real backup plan, because they should have definitely expected Tor to give chase. Or maybe the watch captain was just that desperate to get Eric back after what he endured.
I love the vore part and was looking forward to it, though I was expecting to hear the kidnappers beg for their lives before being mercilessly eaten alive. They didn't even get to say a single word. I would've liked that part to be a little longer truthfully.
I'm looking forward to what happens next!
Author's Response: I admit, I rushed that sequence a bit. It was right before supper and I was trying to get it finished so I could eat. I may go back and tweak that later. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review. It's always appreciated.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2017 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to brutally execute several people, who in their defense had no choice in the matter as they would have been killed either way by Fletcher. Not that Tor cared to actually ask before committing another mass murder.
People are okay with becoming pets? Stockholm syndrome is confusing.
I wonder why eating peope seems to be Elders preferred method of execution. I mean, humans developed many methods of execution designed to bring about death quickly and painlessly. The guillotine, the shortened hangmans noose, the curved headman's ax. Mostly because it isn't in human nature to want to torture someone to death. If someone has to die, let it be quick. Elders seem to have a penchant for both mass slaughter and mass pain. A rather brutal race.
But I cannot wait to see how Tor deals with her brothers.
Author's Response:
Well, eating people is Tor's preferred method of execution. Not necessarily all Elders. And if you do some research on being put to death by boats, Fletcher makes Tor look saintly. Frankly, he makes her look like a saint period. His character will be explored in upcoming chapters. He's not a nice guy. At all.
As for Tor dealing with her brothers, that's coming soon! Thanks for reviewing! I always look forward to your thoughts on a chapter. :)
Date: February 12 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'd be on the fence regarding romance as well. Their relationship seems more maternal than outright loving.
At the same time, romance doesn't have to be... um... romantic. It can just be two friends helping each other out with a purely practical need - seeing as Eric is already a Casanova, and Tor is so pragmatic, that dynamic might work with these characters' personalities.
Of course, whether you have it or not, I'll still love this story!
Date: February 12 2017 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
MFW Tor and Eric are reunited: https://imgur.com/kQyhwAc
MFW Tor bites off a guy's arm: https://media.giphy.com/media/QSMBLRAHZTLkQ/giphy.gif
I don't like gore myself, but it's interesting how you dealt with it - a lot of gore fans tend to treat blood as if it were juice, so it's interesting to read about how disgusting and hard-to-remove it is for once
Again, I'm surprised by how young a character is... when I said I thought she was either late 20's or early 30's, I was leaning toward the 29-33 age-range. Then again, I have a thing for much older women and much younger gys, so that's probably just my bias showing.
Also can I ask, how the hell do you write so fast??? I've been trying to write smut myself and I always spend weeks or even months on a single chapter!
Finally, just because it bears repeating; Tor + Eric = hella cute this chapter!
Author's Response:
I have an outline I'm working off of. :) I have certain points I plan to hit and have them lined out. I even have the last two chapters written already. Now it's a matter of working my way there. As for the smut...hehe I may be a little messed up in the head so letting it out on paper is a release. I've been working on this chapter since around 11 this morning. I'm not a huge hard-vore/gore fan so that's why I chose to have Tor deal with bodily fluids in that way. Plus, like you said, it's different. I try not to be like every other writer and have the same formula for stories. I try to be unique and creative.
I'm glad you think that Tor and Eric are super cute. I think they are, too! I'm on the fence about romance between them. I'm currently leaning towards no romance. If they do develop such a relationship, it will be slower in coming. That's not to say there won't be tension. There would be tension galore. Just nothing acted on. I'm thankful for you taking the time to read and review my work. It always makes me smile when I see a review from one of my regular readers.
Date: February 12 2017 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
The next chapter will be so soon? You spoil us!
Also wanted to say I liked that he's so conscious of his weight - a lot of works assume that men don't worry about their weight, so it's nice to read something that subverts that! I'm surprised Tor can avoid the temptation of such a nice, plump snack though :P
Author's Response:
Haha! Well, when I can't do much and I refused to bring home papers to grade, what else is there but to write? ;) And I know men are concerned about their weight. I've watched my dad and brothers struggle with theirs for years. So a little bit of them is put into Eric in that way. Plus, I also think it lends a sense of vanity to his character. As for Tor resisting, she has strong willpower. And gets her kicks and cravings elsewhere. As shown in the next chapter. It will be coming soon!
Date: February 12 2017 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter! Can't wait to find out what happens next! And thank you to tingle01 for asking the currency question - I had imagined Tor sprinkling human currency into his hand like grains of sand!
Does Tor realise how young Eric is? I got the impression that since we the audience didn't learn of either characters' ages until relatively recently, that they must not know each other's either - yet this chapter she clearly knows that a human girl is "near his age"
Author's Response:
She's guessed by his facial features and body size as well as attitude his rough age. So, by looking at his face and the face of another, she can guess relative ages. But no, they have not talked explicit ages with each other. That will come up soon. I'm actually working on chapter 13 right now! I hope to have it up this afternoon/evening. Thank you for your review. I always appreciate it. :)
[Report This]Date: February 12 2017 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to reveal that the greatest possible threat to a couple of humans is not starvation, plague, or bandits, but instead Elders, who are "used" to eating humans, and refuses the prospect of defending them. Not only are Elders not peaceful, they are active, willing threats to human life.
I like how Eric's only issue with the arranged marriage is that he'd have no choice in the matter, but he himself is only concerned with the physical appearance of women, as well as is host to a personality so vile, a peasant whom he has helped rejects him.
Eric confuses me. He seems to help people or demand Tor help people but seems indifferent to their plight whilst he does so. He didn't do much for the Doctor or assistant she literally tortured to death for verbally offending her, he didn't do much beyond suggest Tor do something once when the prospect of the family dying is very real... i feel like thats intentional. It illustrates how Eric as a prince is blind to the importance of people's lives.
Author's Response: In Eric's defense, he was very "sheltered" and influenced by his father. That will come up in the next chapter or two. He tries, but just can't quite connect with problems that are not his own. Thank you so much for your review and continued support! It means a lot. :)
[Report This]Date: February 12 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
Nice chapter. I really do like the interaction between Tor and Eric.
I was a little shocked that Tor has human currency though. Or do humans and Elders use the same currency? The coins should be far too small for the Elders to handle though.
I'm definitely looking forward to what she has in store for Eric's kidnappers, and I hope Eric won't be asking such a foolish thing as 'sparing their lives' once rescued.
Author's Response: I'll explain it a little more in later chapters, but it is Elder currency. It's just the smallest, least valuable coin. To Eric, it would be the size of his chest. Big to him, but not incredibly small to an Elder. As for his rescue, you'll just have to wait and see! I'm aiming to have it posted before Monday. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: February 10 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hello! I love your story thus far! Keep it up, I'm eager for every update you make; just don't push yourself too hard.
The following are my own opinions about the setting, and that's all they are. Opinions. :)
I love it when the giantess is gentle towards a select chosen one, and indifferent to other humans. It's like gentle and cruel in one. Not a huge fan of giantesses who wouldn't harm a fly. Even though I'm primarily a gentle-gts lover. So the tsundere attitude rocks my socks.
I feel like Eric gets away with talking back to her too easily sometimes. It makes me wonder why she's so soft on him. I dunno. But I like it.
I'm a little sad that she ate the doctor and the other dude, but my other head wasn't. Oh well. Keep it up and have a good one!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review my story! I appreciate it. I plan to have an update this weekend sometime so keep an eye out. ;)