Date: April 02 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
I wasn't expecting an entire 2 paragraphs from Idiot's point of view! It didn't reveal much that we don't already know, but it's very interesting to see how he bears grudges (quite like his owner, I guess)
It's quite sad that Mick is obviously the meekest of the siblings, yet even he gets more respect from his brothers than his sister. It's nice to see that at least he does care for her, in his own submissive way. I hope good things happen for the little wuss.
I find it a little odd that Tor is so defensive towards her oldest brothers, even telling them to stay away from her, yet she still seems to follow them? I realise they're at a show (I think?) but maybe she'll ditch them after it's all done. Or maybe she stays for her twin, IDK.
I'm glad you liked my fanart over on Deviantart. I have plans for another one, but work is a priority, after all!
Author's Response:
Cowards rarely have happy endings in westerns, just remember that. ;) Only the bold thrive. As for Tor, all her reasons for staying will be revealed. We've just about reached the halfway point in the story. There is going to be a lot more fun to come in chapters ahead!
Thanks for your review. I eagerly await more fanart from you.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2017 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm still with you, enjoying every word... There are so few writers who can turn a GTS story into a western, demonstrating a knowledge of the old west traditions and life, while mixing it with another genre completely, and making it all work. The lack of respect for women, in the case of some men, (her oldest brother, among others) and the resulting aggressive defense on Tor's part help to make the story more real to me.
Keep up the good work... I'll be here following along.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Your reviews are always flattering. I'm glad you're enjoying my story so much.
Date: March 29 2017 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope she catches and eats the little humans!!
Date: March 29 2017 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
Very good so far!!!
Date: March 29 2017 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
She should have laid the little man on her stomach to sleep for the night, They both can feel the 2 men in her stomach. :)
[Report This]Date: March 28 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
"My people are peaceful". Proceeds to allow a massive stallion to bite people. Not that they did anything to deserve her anger like her brothers. Also assails her twin, her only good brother thus far. And placed Eric in her mouth, him knowing she has killed about a dozen people in a month with it.
I think that little joke Tor pulled was good for Eric, however. He needs to keep himself grounded. Her male protection, how pompous. He has to understand what he is now, and consider it.
I do hope Tor gives Eric a good view of the brawl.
Author's Response:
To be fair, she did warn everyone except her brothers' stablehands. And she sees them, rightly or wrongly, as accomplices to their attempt at getting rid of her. As for teasing Eric, there will be more to come. ;) I've got some ideas I'll be employing. She'll give some things and others will do things and you will enjoy it all, I'm sure.
And Tor won't physically fight her brothers. They're too big for her to do so, she's learned. So she'll use Idiot as a sheild/weapon and let his bad temper do all the work.
Thanks for your review! I always look forward to your thoughts.
Date: March 28 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
I like these chapters where we get little peaks into Eric's mind and history! It's good to see he's starting to admit he enjoys his place as Tor's pet, even if he's still fighting it!
Also, I had assumed he wanted to be Tor's "friend" as a sort of power/pride-thing, but seeing he's never had a friend adds a bit of tragedy to that insistence.
Although I usually like to ask lots of silly questions, I really need to go to bed now - So just know you're doing a really good job and your skill and dedication is really appreciated! :)
[Report This]Date: March 28 2017 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
It is too bad of me that I want Tor´s brothers to interact with Eric and not exactly in a gentle way?Idk why, but I just really want to xD it should put some things in perspective for him... not to mention I REALLY like giant male content and is lacking in this site. The reason is obvious, is a giantess site, but none the less I enjoy every bit I can have of male interaction.
I still love Tor btw. She is not entirely good, but she isnt evil either, and that makes her realistic. People want her to either be a gentle and perfect giantess or to see as some nasty person that eats humans, but honestly, just let her be something in between. Someone that has rage moments, that makes mistakes, that takes bad choices, but that tries to do her best, and that doesnt regret anything she has ever done and that´s just awesome. Let her be real. Not good, not bad, just real.
And kudos for mick not being a total asshole ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for loving Tor! Someone has to. haha She is a very "real" character. Just hang on for the next swing of her character arc. I'm about to add some stuff to it. ;)
As for Mick, he's not an asshle. Very much the opposite. He's a pansy. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: March 28 2017 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Eric felt like he had achieved some sort of grand thing by not letting the giant man get any closer to Tor.
Mmmh. I think Eric could have been slightly more grateful to the person who saved his "precious friend' from drowning. Not even a single word of thanks.
After what felt like an eternity, she pulled him out. His hair was soaked; saliva dripped from his face. He was pale and shaking, she noticed.
Kind of sad she didn't take the play further :(
Well I look forward to what she has in store for the other brothers... and their slave human pets :)
Good luck on your job fair and date :)
Author's Response:
She may yet play more with him in the future. ;) As for Eric, he seems a bit ungrateful doesn't he? Such a stinker... Thank you for your continued love of my story. :D
Date: March 28 2017 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Is it me or does Tor care for her horses more than she cares for other people?
Honestly I think I'm starting to find it difficult to like Tor, cultural conditioning or not, I don't view her upbringing as an excuse to abuse (or in some cases murder) other sentient species (human beings). I think people should be aware, and responsible enough to be able to question the faults in their society's paradigms.
(I think that means I need a girlfriend more than I thought, all this time being alone makes me get too invested in inconsequential things...)
Author's Response:
Haha. No, it's not just you. Tor definitely cares for her horses more than she cares for people. Except Eric. Eric has priority above all. As for questioning society, I agree. I question a lot of our society's "norms" today myself. However, my college friends were the ones to get me to think outside my societal norms. For Tor, she is just beginning to question things. And that is due in large part to Eric. So give her a little more time. I've built her up to be this big, bad bitch. Now I/Eric have to work on humanizing her. Thanks for your interest in my story!
Date: March 28 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Nice chapter! Good to see Tor lightened up a bit, although her "light" mood might be more dangerous for Eric methinks. Anyway, good luck on your job fair and date!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I always appreciate reviews and well-wishes. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: March 16 2017 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for the chapter! Thought you had dropped the story.
Honestly to see someone acting so tough unable to swim... is slightly ridiculous ^^ but yeah yeah I get it, her difficult childhood's to blame. Looks like her hate for her brothers is justified...
Also Eric won't just acknowledge he's lucky with Tor and shut up will he? He keeps bragging to other tinies about his relationship with her. Apart from shocking them or making them envious, what good could it possibly do? Well Eric's not the considerate type, and just a teenager after all.
Will we have more interaction between Tor and new tinies for the rest of their adventure? I'd love to see more of this.. But it's up to you^^
Btw #taxationIsHowSocietyRunsHoweverUnfair
Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughts! And yeah, it is a bit comical to see someone so tough unable to swim. That's why I included that in there, for some comic relief. As for Eric... he might think that he can be a hero and free all enslaved humans. We did see a hero complex earlier with the free humans that Tor saved from being eaten, remember? But he's just a teenager, so what does he know of being a hero and saving people? Lol Yes! Tor will interact with more humans. That bit of fun is far from over. ;) Thanks for your time and interest in my story. It's always appreciated.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I concur with Intheliar. I do prefer gentle giantesses, but there is something intoxicating about being dominated by a giantess, having that illusion of equality shattered that exhilarates so many macrophiles. There's just something about the absolute power of a giantess, the incomparable disparity between tiny and giantess that is indescribably alluring.
As such a lot of stories involve a gentle giantess who in the bedroom is a sexual beast. Often losing themselves with their own euphoria. Which brings up our counterparts, the microphiles. I've come across both on this site and Giantessbooru a considerable amount of girls who want to dominate as a giantess. And it's interesting seeing their perspective in their stories. Microphilic girls often write from the giantess' pov, while macrophilic guys write from the tinies pov. It gives me hope for the fetish. What with VR being a thing...
Anyway sorry for my temerity. But thank you, I love this story and look forward to your new chapters and responses
Author's Response:
I am definitely a microphile girl, based on your descriptions. I can easily switch between POVs but my prefence is to write the from giantess' perspective. However, I love reading from the tiny's perspective just to see their experiences and how they may/may not survive the giantess' amorous actions. ;)
Thank you for your continued support of this story! I always appreciate my steadfast readers.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2017 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
Whew, that was quite a wait for Ch 16! I understand life can make things difficult someti--... frequently. But I'm glad you are well and gave us another update!
I enjoy the way the story is going. And I like how protective Tor is of her princeling, he is surely lucky to have a friend like her taking care of him. She makes sure he's always taken care of, but never lets things get too mushy-- whether it be her ignoring him, eating other humans, etc.
There's always that subtle nagging feeling, that they are not equals, but at the same time, that maybe it doesn't matter that much. I like gentle gts fictions mainly. But other stories make the characters TOO equal sometimes and the thrill of being intimidated is effectively pushed to the back burner. Being reminded of the difference in power, the sheer futility of resistance, and the grace of being spared by such a being, that's what tickles my fancy, for lack of a better term.
I've prattle on long enough. #No taxation without respresentation
Author's Response:
Life can be such a bummer sometimes. But writing is theraputic. ;)
As for Tor, she is very protective of Eric. We'll delve into the "why" of that a little later. And she's not a mushy-gushy sort of woman. She shows her affection in other ways. And no, they're not equals. They probably never will be in Tor's eyes, but she isn't going to treat Eric like shit just because (in her mind) she's better than him. He hasn't pissed her off, so she won't be a bitch to him haha. There is a lot more interactions between them to come. Thanks for sticking around!
Date: March 14 2017 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh thank god - I thought you'd died!
I liked this chapter! It may have been short, but between the little revelations about Tor's upbringing and the boob adventure, it was certainly worth the wait!
Very interesting to hear from a human that not only accepts their place as an Elder's pet, but relishes in it! I wonder if June's other pets might feel the same way though.
I know how annoying it is when your characters don't do as they're told. You gotta give them tough love - remind them that you can destroy them just as easily as you created them!
Also #CorporateProfitingFromTheMeansOfProductionIsTheft ! ;)
Author's Response:
See, that's the thing, Tor would rather have been destroyed than to have her flaws shown to the world. So that didn't work. And Eric held out until I promised him he wouldn't die and was going to get a surprise. Now he's huffy that he didn't get to personally know the human girl. xD Thanks for your review. It's always much appreciated.
As for my disappearance, I had to do a lot of adulting, then got sick this past weekend (don't trust shrimp from a very-much-inland Mexican restaurant!), took care of personal business. and now it's Spring Break for me. I plan to get at least one more chapter out this week, in the midst of applying for new jobs. Thanks for your patience!
[Report This]Date: March 14 2017 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Tor's childhood sounds like it was really fucked... It's a shame Eric wasn't able to hear what she confessed to the man who pulled her from the river. That sounds like something that they could build their relationship on a bit more. It's always nice when Tor sincerely opens up to Eric.
I'll be honest the begining of ch14 had some of my favorite writing, I've got a think for giant breasts, after all why are we all here. And there's a reference to her making Eric orgasm..? I don't remember that.
I really do hope she winds up looking past him being a human and falls in love with him. Screw finding her brothers who are obviously terrible people, just go on your own and be happy together :(
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I am glad you are liking my story. There will be more breasts in the future. And even other fun tags. ;) Keep reading to find out.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to crush a man's toes because he offended her.
Tor had a rough childhood it would seem. No wonder she's so abrasive. Most bullies grow up in environments where they are usually bullied by either their parents or their siblings. I guess Tor fits that description. It doesn't even begin to excuse her reprehensible actions, but it contextualizes it.
Eric just assumed every man is heterosexual. Yeah, that's not a thing. He's also in denial about being owned. I don't think he can even think that he traded one oppressor for another. But this one has big tits and is a giantess, so that is certainly preferable.
#taxationisneccesary
Author's Response: Yes, Tor's childhood was very rough, indeed. And no, it doesn't excuse her actions in the least. But now itheyre not out of the blue, so to speak. And Eric is very much in denial. His current "oppressor" is physically preferable to the last, and so is the attitude, in his opinion. He doesn't see Tor as an oppressor, though, so that makes a world of difference to him. As always, thanks for your review! I look forward to yours every time.
Date: March 14 2017 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was looking at your DA profile.. you should totally finish the borrower story you started. That looked like a sweet story :)!
Author's Response: I would love to. And I plan to. It will just be a while. ACL comes first right now. When it's finished, I'll turn to something a little more lighthearted and less technical. What did you think of this chapter of ACL?
Date: February 26 2017 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
really wish you could post your other stories on this site, dA is a mess. Society Unbroken has tremendous promise as well; i would really like to see it continued
Author's Response: I left the link there because of the rumors of this site shutting down. If this site continues to live, then I'll consider posting my other work here. But I've been with dA for over ten years now. So that's my main site. As for Society Broken, thanks! Glad you liked it.
Date: February 25 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
All hands on deck! The Aww-factor is reaching critical levels!
In all seriousness, I was surprised and excited to see you managed to crank out a chapter today! I'm totally jealous of your writing abilities!
Interesting to see two new Elders - who I assume will be recuring for the next chapter or more! I think these are the first attractive Elders other than Tor we've seen too! The conflicts they've presented sound like they could be taken in dangerous and sexy directions (or both!)
Also, I'm interested to know why Tor specifies that's a no-go area for humans (I mean, I can guess, but I'm interested in if I've guessed correctly!)
Author's Response:
That's an area for Elders only. As of right now, she is not sexually attracted to Eric. Now that may or may not change in the future. No spoilers from me. ;)
Thanks for the compliment on my writing abilities! It helps that I'm focusing all my spare attention (outside of work and grading) on this. I put all my other stories on the backburner. I really want to finish this one. Next week's chapter will be a lot of fun. I can guarantee that! I have an old friend and writing partner that has started pitching me ideas for this book. And some of the ones she's coming up with have me in stitches. And possibly characters from the book. ;) I'm going to spend the weekend with her next weekend, so there may even be more than one chapter. But no promises!
As always, thanks a million for being such a faithful reader and reviewer! I always appreciate it and look forward to the comments from my dedicated fans.