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Date: April 13 2018 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2017 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 6

And, I rest my case. Olivia may be the lesser of two evils, compared to this Ms. Roland. But, being cruel to be kind is still being cruel.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

Unfortunately, Olivia, the truth can hurt twice as much as any discovered lie. And, it always hurts _more_ than once...because a reopened old wound is more dangerous than a newly inflicted one.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2017 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 5

Aww, enjoyed this chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad to hear it :3

Reviewer: gdj Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2017 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

really enjoyable! bu i dont get why she, err, washed him while he was fully dressed?

Author's Response:

Thanks.

I hesitate to call him "dressed". He's essentially wearing a skintight, wetsuit type thing that shrinks with its wearer, and it's been covered with just as much sweat and grime as whatever parts of him are exposed (head, hands and forearms, and a few inches above the knees on down). There's no real point in removing it because he's essentially clean underneath it. So it's essentially one part Olivia doing Daniel a favor cleaning the thing for him as she cleans him up in general, one part cleaning him off so neither has to deal with the smell, and one part just fucking with him :)

Reviewer: burrito Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2017 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is really good. Glad it's not too gentle.

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was an interesting start. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Nice to see that you're back.

Reviewer: wwebby Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

You are not dead! :)  I very much liked this beginning, though there is little 'happening' to start off, the speech of the characters is very enjoyable and believable! I would hope to read more.