[Report This]Date: June 30 2017 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 26: Mother-Daughter Tag-Teaming
The Stevens woman rides again! I always forget what Scott did at times, which is the mark of a good writer making you feel pity for those who are not totally innocent.. However Kyle seems really screwed over in this entire ordeal. Also one day your iconic bratty little sisters need to have a big sister to torment along with the bros. ;)
Author's Response:
Kyle's definitely the loser in this particular scenario. There've been times before in other stories when I planned to have some little sisters tormenting older ones, but it just didn't happen.
Date: June 27 2017 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Sorry for the triple post!
Author's Response:
No worries
Date: June 27 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds
I've read the 3 last chapters because i was away from gtsworld. Good to see kyle to taste of shrunken life. Just curious to see what maggie do next!!! I wonder what is the second person to be safe from punishement from Judy apart Maggie. And I hope that the father will make his entry soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for checking back in. Hopefully this newest chapter answers your questions about Maggie. The father isn't quite "soon" but he will still have an important role in this story.
Date: June 27 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds
I've read the 3 last chapters because i was away from gtsworld. Good to see kyle to taste of shrunken life. Just curious to see what maggie do next!!! I wonder what is the second person to be safe from punishement from Judy apart Maggie. And I hope that the father will make his entry soon!
Date: June 27 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds
I've read the 3 last chapters because i was away from gtsworld. Good to see kyle to taste of shrunken life. Just curious to see what maggie do next!!! I wonder what is the second person to be safe from punishement from Judy apart Maggie. And I hope that the father will make his entry soon!
Date: June 18 2017 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds
Wait wait wait wait wait, so Judy is possibly about to learn some tricks from Maggie? Now THAT was unexpected!
Author's Response:
Teacher becomes the student
[Report This]Date: June 17 2017 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds
...aaannnnddddd THERE she is!! Good ole Maggie.. Can't Wait for next chapter!!! Keep it up, this stuff is AWESOME! Still my favorite writer on here!
Author's Response:
Thanks. There will be more to come in a little while.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2017 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 25: From the Foot That Feeds
Maggie's evil/bratty side is coming back again, I do wonder how Judy's story will end one day.
Author's Response:
Nobody can do a full 180 in just one story
[Report This]Date: June 13 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
Wow! I seriously did not see that coming! I bet Judy is going to come up with an excuse to keep Kyles height down there with Scott... And it's nice to see Kyle acting more brotherly towards Scott finally. It's about time the poor guy got a friend!
Author's Response:
Judy tends to be more of an endurance runner than a sprinter when it comes to punishments
[Report This]Date: June 13 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
I kinda wonder what would have happened if it was Maggie that had stood up to Judy. Judy might give her more leeway, but i'm sure even that has limits.
Though i'm also sure Maggie probably would have found a way to have Scott talking with his girlfriend without alerting Judy, she has before if i'm remembering correctly.
Author's Response:
I'm glad somebody's thinking about this. Maggie's specific power relationship with her parent will be further explored in this story, especially nearer to the end. Hold that thought. ;)
Date: June 13 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
I forgot in the heat of the moment - the way I pictured it in my head, Judy is in front of them, slippers ready to be worn, and somehow Kyle doesn't need to ask "which left, my left or the left slipper?"
But i guess they must be between Judy and the slippers - for some reason I couldn't get this silly thoughts out of my mind.
Author's Response:
Hehe. A fair point. Maybe Kyle just lucked out and the left slipper was also on his left.
Date: June 13 2017 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
Letting Kyle go wouldn't have been fair towards Scott, I see :)
Still I wonder if Maggie will be unaffected when she finds out what happened to Kyle and why
Author's Response:
All I'll say is that Maggie's reaction to seeing Kyle shrunk may be slightly different than it usually is for Scott, even if we don't see it all on the surface
Date: June 13 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
Excellent!
I like the level of detail here. I have been hoping you expand on what happens underneath of Judy a few more times. Over the course of the story arc you get a good idea and it never hurts to add to that evidence a little from time to time.
I still have a soft spot for Scott underneath her big toe at an inch in height, which was something done in the first story of this series. I always found that iconic, since it is a theme repeated through several old and lost to us authors of yesteryear.
The more you write in this series the more I add to my wishlist for it. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks much. There will be several opportunities for Scott to be at his smallest and underfoot in later chapters.
Date: June 13 2017 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Interesting to see what Kyle's reactiom will be once he's full sized again. Will he still be so nice to his brother? I'll admit I'm curious to see if he ever goes after Scott when he's small like Judy and Maggie do...
Author's Response:
Time will tell. Luckily for Scott, Kyle tends to be a bit more rational of a person than his mother and sister seem
Date: June 12 2017 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
The last sentence definitely made me wonder what's going on through Kyle's head right now. That's some real motherly love she's giving him.
Author's Response:
We'll see how Kyle's feeling about this soon once Judy gives them a break
[Report This]Date: June 12 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
omg, please tell me we'll get Kyle's perspective too
Author's Response:
We won't necessarily get a full-on Kyle POV like we usually do for Scott, but we'll indeed get a better idea of how he feels about all this later
[Report This]Date: June 12 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 24: Two Sons, Two Shoes
She's tough but fair.
Author's Response:
Like any good mother should be
Date: June 08 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
It's brave of Kyle to stand up to Judy, but there's going to be complications, since she owns the house he lives in.
Author's Response:
You're definitely right about that. In this case, Kyle is going more on principle than future planning.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2017 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
Got around to reading this.
Still think Judy is the greatest milf of all time.
The first impression I had of the shrink club was like some sort of pseudo alcoholics anonymous. I still some what feel that way and it make me smile. Was also great to see a few tiny daughters there and even I think one giant dad(who didn't speak thank god lol).
Maggie's character has matured perfectly but I'm most surprised about Kyle's character arc. He went from this apathetic kid to actually being Scott's greatest ally in the house. Which seems to have been his downfall. I cannot wait to see what Judy does with two tiny kids. Hope they are both down to her favorite height.
Took a bit but you've given I little more info on Scott's dad. That would seriously be the ultimate scenario for me because Judy could finally shove a tiny inside her(hopefully bushy) vagina.
Anyways, fantastic story and series. I'm really looking forward to what the future holds for the Stevens household.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks. AA was definitely a small inspiration for the style of the shrink therapy meetings. Kyle's journey has been slow the last couple of stories, but things are finally coming to a head. We'll see Judy's reaction in the next chapter. Scott's dad will be making an appearance later on in the story, and not just as a quick "here he is, now the story's over" role.
Date: June 08 2017 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 23: Boys Will Be Boys
Wow... I expected Scott to get out of it by admitting that they were talking about their father,
instead for the first time since the big bang I'm happy to see Kyle in a chapter!
Now you really have me wondering what she's going to do next
- if it becomes known she shrunk him for what he did, and how she found out, that will be *bad* PR
- otoh, she might find a way to use it to her advantage, showing she understands Kyle's concern for his brother,
and maybe finding a way to use this and who-knows-what-else to keep him shrunken some more
or make a good story for the public ("Kyle is guilty of being kind-hearted, but Scott,
he needs more time to rehab...")
Author's Response:
Admitting they were talking about their father might not be a great move, either, as Judy tends to dodge that subject. We'll begin to unravel Judy's machinations for this scenario in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!