[Report This]Date: August 01 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 30: Punishment Period Increased
Olivia is a special kind of bitch, one that fits in well in your universe.
Author's Response:
Statistically speaking, since she exists at all in my stories, she was bound to be like that at least a little.
Date: August 01 2017 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 30: Punishment Period Increased
Maybe it's the temperature, but I'm having trouble linking the title of this chapter to what happens inside it...
On the other hand, toying with the idea of extending a tiny's punishment is something
I've loved since (iirc) LittleLee's pictures, but Maggie has a hard time limit.
Author's Response:
You're right to take the time limit into account. The chapter title is meant more as a callback to the idea that maybe Maggie is being even more indoctrinated into the mindset of this program than Scott thought.
Date: July 21 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Ok umm I think i need a picture for illustration to know what is this machine or what does it look like? otherwise it's good chapiter.
Author's Response: That's probably my fault for focusing so much on what Scott was feeling rather than what was actually happening. Maggie is using a horizontal leg press exercise machine, the kind you could find in most gyms or weight rooms.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie
Another great chapter.
So Maggie has a never been shrunken? I thought a previous story had implied that she had, just not as often as Scott or even Kyle.
I also can't tell if Maggie is being harder on Kyle here or not. Though part of it is because Kyle keeps talking back, something Scott doesn't do or at least hasn't done in awhile.
Author's Response: There may have been hints that she almost was, but as far as this story is concerned, Maggie's never shrunk. So just cough if you happen across any plot holes. We'll see more later, but Maggie's still not quite sure how to feel about Kyle in his new position. Either way, she's much more conflicted than she is with Scott, who she's had plenty of years to adjust her attitude toward.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie
Poor Kyle, he got mixed up in the wrong brats world.
Author's Response: He did indeed
[Report This]Date: July 20 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie
"Life lessons"...right. This is all happening because why again? A phone call or a skype or something?..."Life lessons" I think it'll be fun and fair to literally start hating almost every woman in this story......5 stars!
Author's Response: Hehe. Part of the fun for me in writing this series is making characters it's easy to hate but also difficult to want them gone. Ideally, Scott is easy to feel for.
Date: July 17 2017 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Slightly of topic, but have you thought of using June Young in another story? I'm still curious to see what happened to her after the events of Toy teacher. Especially since Claire took her to the same place she took Carly in shrinking pains, but we never saw her.
Author's Response:
There's a very messy analytic web of previous story threads in my head which does indeed contain a followup to the ending of Toy Teacher, not necessarily a story about June, but definitely a better idea of what happened. I have no idea when/how that would appear, but know it does exist in the canon somewhere.
[Report This]Date: July 16 2017 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 20: Professional Guinea Pig
Amazing
[Report This]Date: July 15 2017 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 6: Houseboy at Work
Judy is awesome
Author's Response:
She thinks so too
[Report This]Date: July 15 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 4: Shrinkaholics Anonymous
This is great! It's so cool to see the rest of society bend around Judy's machinations.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: July 13 2017 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 28: Large and In Charge
The last thing was a new level of twisted, and if that's any indication, then B3A2 will be really something.
Author's Response:
Without spoiling, I'll say: there's more than meets the eye to it, beyond what we're about to see in the next chapter
[Report This]Date: July 13 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 28: Large and In Charge
OMG so excited for the next chapter! Can't wait to see what Maggie has in store for them and the rehab gym is an exciting setting. Good to see her embracing her wild side again.
Author's Response:
I'm sure a lot of people are glad to see she hasn't forgotten some of her tricks
Date: July 13 2017 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 28: Large and In Charge
I hate you... I mean, I would hate you, but luckily it's the 21st century and we have google! Yet how exactly you can pair the shrunken bros and B3A2 is still a mistery to me...
(eventually this story will take over search engines)
Author's Response:
Hehe. Just for the record, B3A2, in the story's universe, doesn't mean anything other than a designation for this punishment protocol
[Report This]Date: July 12 2017 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 28: Large and In Charge
B3A2 is people!
Author's Response:
Should've stuck to soylent red
Date: July 05 2017 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 27: Special Privileges
yet more surprises... just a quick question if you can answer - does Maggie know why Kyle was shrunken/is still tiny? (anything more precise than "miscommunication")
Author's Response:
She has a rough idea. Judy has a way of embellishing events when she needs to
Date: July 05 2017 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 27: Special Privileges
I forgot to ask : any hints for Family Reunion 2?
Author's Response:
There will be more of that one soon
Date: July 05 2017 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Wel, I may be wrong but I think I approve Scott's gamble : better to be Maggie than Judy. Even if the upcoming weekend is going to be active for boys!
Author's Response:
Hopefully, you and Scott are right that Maggie was the better choice
[Report This]Date: July 04 2017 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 27: Special Privileges
Maggie is a confusing flower but her old buds are blooming at least for the next few chapters.
Author's Response:
All the best flowers can bud in different shades.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2017 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 27: Special Privileges
I'm getting mix messages from Maggie, considering how much nicer she was towards Scott lately, least relatively to how she treated him before.
Author's Response:
Scott is feeling some pretty mixed messages, too.
Date: June 30 2017 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 26: Mother-Daughter Tag-Teaming
It's not about "completely" changing the way she works, the real question is about "permanently" changing it...
(not sure about anyone else, but when I was wondering about what the "tools" might be, I never thought about balls)
Author's Response:
No one ever thinks about balls