[Report This]Date: January 03 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Very good story!
I kind of liked this series, but as it progresses I begin to feel some pity for Jack.
While it is enjoyable to read, I still secretly hope Jack somehow gets out of this OK.
Thank you for writing this story and continuing it like clockwork.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. Glad to hear people are pulling for Jack.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2017 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Oh boy oh boy, time to see what kinds of lewd challenges our little hero will be facing this time around.
So glad to see your bring this series back. And certainly glad to see the title as well, I hope it implies Judy really gets hands on in this story.
This series is part of your extended universe, right? Seeing what happened in the Shrink Act Files, that must mean Judy's plans all come to fruition in the end. She wins, as she always does.
While the thought really doesn't bode well for poor Scott, I hope he'll fight until his last breath for his cause. He's a very admirable character and I can't wait to see how much further he developes with this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Yes, the title is referring to Judy in a more physical role for this story. And yes, this is in my extended universe. Shrink Act Files actually happens before this, though, so while there are hints in there about how things are going, it doesn't necessarily tell how this story will end.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2017 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Super glad to see Time out back! I'm looking forward to see how Scott and Maggie's relationship has changed, since it did seem like it was improving last time.
It will also be nice to learn how Scott has been doing. Also, to hear more about what he did to earn this recent punishment .
I also hope we see some shrunken women at this clinic too.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing! And actually, all 3 of those things you listed will be shown soon-ish.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Oh my God! How long have I been waiting for this part of the story.. I hope new chapters will be added frequently. Welcome back, Jack and thank you!
Author's Response:
I will do my best to make sure readers aren't kept waiting. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: December 31 2016 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Welcome back!
industry titan CEO
Fitting way to describe a Techilogic higher up.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Who doesn't love a good macro pun?
[Report This]Date: December 31 2016 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
if I were not so partial to dominant ladies with a tiny in their stockings, I'd say this is the best first chapter in the series; regardless, it's a wonderful way to close the year!
Author's Response:
Aw shucks. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: December 31 2016 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
You hide wery well your game! "I am working on TO7 but I don't know when I'll post it blahblahblah..." YEAH RIGHT. But I'm not the one who is unhappy. Great chapiter as New Year gift! I can't wait for next specially after readind about the girlfriend troubles in summary and Maggie's internship.
Author's Response:
Haha. I truly did not know for sure if I was going to post the story yesterday, but I had made progress in writing it and thought it would be a fun way to end the year.
Date: December 31 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Excellent! Love the first chapter! Maybe this will inspire me. I shall at least have a good reason to check this site often once again. I still do not know how to add stars. It's a pity. I hope you get a chance to read my stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks much. I did get a chance to read more of Tiny Dancer. I'll drop you a review soon.
Date: December 31 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Don't take to long. It's time to put those feministic bitches in their place with creative suffering. There unlikable and it's time that their souls got destoyed and Scotts escapes leaving these idiots.
Author's Response:
Hmmm. Well, it won't be all-bad for Scott this time around, but you're probably reading the wrong series if this is what you're waiting for... hehe.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Naked and Unafraid
Glad to see you continuing with this series, this is one of my favorites by you. Great first chapter, love the foot/shoe related stuff in this chapter between Judy and Scott. Looking forward to reading more, thanks for updating this series.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. There will be more soon.