[Report This]Date: November 06 2022 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh man. I just discovered your stuff, and I feel like a kid in a candy store. Just a shame I had to find you during November. at the time of writing this, you have 94 stories published and I can’t wait to read every single one.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you found my stuff and like it so much!
Happy reading, and sorry for making your November more difficult ^^;
[Report This]Date: January 01 2019 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was great and I loved it! Have you ever thought of making like a sequel chapter or a spin off story of Gladion's punishment?
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. No, not really... at least not until now. I'll have to seriously consider it :)
[Report This]Date: December 31 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty decent short you have here. You cracked me up when you mentioned how our protagonist is always smiling like they always do. I'm remember the wormhole scene and while everyone is startled (minus lusamine) I'm here yelling at my character (luna) to stop smiling! The hell, girl do enjoy destruction or something!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I figured I had to put that in.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hmm, not bad at all my friend. I like how you tried to keep the characters to their proper roles as best you could along with giving off a familier feel for the readers who play both Sun and or Moon.The plot while similar to the games actions did take on a new take for the ending as well and i think that was a nice choice of progression. It made reading it much more enjoyable.
On thoughts of grammer, you made a few mistakes here and there but nothing to bad or noticable unless you were looking for them. On thoughts of escalation i think it went a bit to fast but with the way you had it set up I can see why it was the way it was.
All and all i think you've made a lovely addition to GTS World and i'm glad your adding onto the Games catagory here.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, there's so much I can gain from your analysis! As far as pacing at the end, I have a habit of dragging tangents on for too long and wanted to avoid doing that. I hope to here from you again.
[Report This]Date: December 28 2016 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was great! Could you write more Wickextrainer stories, please? Not necessarily tied to this one
Author's Response:
Thanks, this was just something I randomly thought of but if I come up with something else I be sure to post it.