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Reviewer: ozoris Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2017 11:01 AM Title: Should this story continue?

ys of course countinue this intersting story

i have some ideas

make alot of idea about how hell this tiny man life became

make him cry for mercy

make him try to escape from her panties prinson

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2017 7:09 PM Title: Should this story continue?

Lol! What kind of question is that? Everyone wants this story to continue. People desire content and want a good story. I would be happy if you continue this.

I'm still rooting for that idea for Jasmine to give Percy to her mom as a gift since she lost her own son.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2017 9:41 AM Title: Kidnapped

I want to know what happens, if you choose not to write an ending then could you please just summerize it.

Reviewer: Always Love Me Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2017 1:55 AM Title: Kidnapped

Yea at least go through the majority of fetishes before you end the story.  I'm an ass man myself.  You have a talent for POV

Reviewer: allwaysman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2017 10:36 PM Title: Should this story continue?

Please keep it going it's a great story and to not finish it would be a waste! It has a lot that can still happen 

Reviewer: NotThere Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2017 9:37 PM Title: Should this story continue?

Yes, I enjoyed this series very much and I would love if you would continue!

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 19 2017 6:49 PM Title: Should this story continue?

I'll be waiting to see if you do continue. No story worth it's telling should be left incomplete, even if you feel it necessary to change the occasional bit.

GO FOR IT!

Reviewer: matrix2590117 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 8:13 PM Title: Oh brother, i what?

This is the most interesting story i have ever read

Please continue 

 

I have some point u can add

...*this girl keeping her slave inside her panties forever even she know he is inisint cuz she never let him go and her plesure will end

**she know her brother also shrink and also living inside her friend panties 

 

**the girl start make her tiny slave lick her pussy while he inside her panties 

Also she can be gassy and fart on him 

 

 

Reviewer: matrix2590117 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 5:39 PM Title: Lush imprisonment

Sooo fantastic 

Continue plzzz

Reviewer: matrix2590117 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 5:27 PM Title: Why me Pt.2

Woow

Great story 

I love it when women prison tiny men inside their panties 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2017 9:05 PM Title: Oh brother, i what?

Wow! It seems like Jasmine is trying to justify what she is doing by attaching a crime to Percy.

We first learn that Jasmine felt sort of sorry for Percy, but now she is using her anger toward him. Interesting twist.

I'm still rooting for Jasmine to give Percy to her mom as a gift. Her mom can love Percy in a new (sexual) way that's a bit different from her love to her own son. (Just an idea if you run out).

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Cactusjeff1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 9:58 PM Title: History class

Please post a few more chapters and finish the story in some way. It is getting interesting but tiresome to like a story on this site and it never have an ending. You are doing great and I can't wait to see what you write next.

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 2:25 PM Title: History class

great chapter
super-described everything as if I was there
Please more

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 1:40 PM Title: History class

Paragraphs! What hapenede to your paragraphs? Those are huge! Did you have formatting issues?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 10:04 AM Title: History class

Sorry for my delayed review. I'm currently traveling and internet isn't as plentiful as I thought. I really hope you do continue.

You could have Jasmine finish her classes and then she goes home and she gives Percy to her mom so she can enjoy him. Jasmine said that the teaching sucks, so I think it could work.

Also, I love the artwork that Stubbornstain posted. Makes me want to check out his deviantart profile. Loved the image.

If I was Percy, I would jump right into that "cavern". Haha. If only he appreciates the sweetness of fresh vagina. I like Percy fearing it. Makes it more fun.

I hope you continue. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: seanpatty Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 5:18 AM Title: History class

Great chapter... Please please continue.  At least take us up to Jasmine's cycle :P..

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2017 1:01 PM Title: Lush imprisonment

I actually liked this chapter. The ending made me smile.

The mother is sad at the loss of her son. The girl wants to share the joy she has with Percy with her mom. If I'm connecting the dots correctly, Percy will be given to her mom.

This is fantastic if that's true. This time, the mom will definitely keep this guy with her at all times becuase now she doesn't want to lose another boy.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

thank you for the lengthy review as always! you continue to spark my ideas with your persistent want for the mother! i indeed do have ideas for her...ill tell you that..

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2017 11:38 AM Title: Lush imprisonment

I don't know about lush, but that is some prison. I'd hate it in there. Too clammy. But another nice chapter.



Author's Response:

haha! thank you! yes i agree maybe not lush to him, but she finds it a lush imprisonment for him!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2017 5:47 AM Title: Kidnapped

it was cool.
I can not wait for the next chapter
Please more.



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying ^_^

Reviewer: HuzToru Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 11:26 PM Title: Kidnapped

I been reading this story ever since you posted this and all I can say is that I like this story. The interaction between the characters are so unpredictable and mysterious, it keeps me coming back for more. Overall, keep up the good work :)



Author's Response:

thank you very much :)

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