Date: April 27 2021 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am glad to see another chapter. Keep going with the story, because it's really good. :)
As for who Marlin should interact with next, I'd like to see him with Spirit again. It's been a while, and she seemed like such a sweet girl. Maybe she'd treat him like a cute little brother at this point, despite his being much older. ;)
Date: October 19 2020 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see you continuing this story. Going good! :)
Date: September 10 2020 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Brother , your story may be a jewel in this site, because it's somehow profound and could be philosophic. Continue like that . Peace
Author's Response:
I appreiate you for saying this! glad you like it!! If you have any suggestions for what you'd like t see happen next, please let me know
Date: November 11 2019 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
Please continue this story.
Date: November 11 2019 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 3: Fixing it with Spririt (5'6")
Loving this story.
Date: February 20 2019 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Liking this story so far! The slow pacing is good. Like how all the women's perceptions of him change as his reality slowly shifts. :)
Date: December 25 2018 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story and great update! Hope you keep it rolling!
This story does remind me of "Money and Power", which is awesome because that's one of my favorite stories.
I love the unaware aspect of the shrinking/reality shifting.
Date: January 03 2018 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 3: Fixing it with Spririt (5'6")
Is this story continuing?
Date: June 08 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Definitely a theme I enjoy seeing play out. Look forward to more.
Date: June 08 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 3: Fixing it with Spririt (5'6")
Will he start answering with Yes Ma'am? I hope so.
Date: June 08 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 3: Fixing it with Spririt (5'6")
Nice chapter. Enjoying this.
Date: June 08 2017 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
Slow is great. It's good that he starts a new place in life though.
Date: June 08 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
A fine start in setting up the characters. Will he have a female boss at work?
[Report This]Date: January 08 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is great, the pace of shrinking is perfect, but i'm hopeing for more actions soon!
Date: December 28 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good slow shrinking start that eschews the need for an explanation and explores the characters relationship together and makes the husband unlikeable.
Author's Response:
I love actual feedback like this. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: December 26 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Have you heard of the giantess comic 'Money and Power?' It has a very similar start to this, I believe you would enjoy it. This is very well executed and I can't wait to see where this goes!
5 gold stars
DrumGuy
Author's Response:
I just checked it out! It was pretty awrsome! I wish I could do 3D like that. I think my story will be longer though, at least I hope. We'll see! Thanks!
Date: December 26 2016 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
God.
YES.
Please, please keep this going. This particular sub-genre is my lotus fruit.
Author's Response:
Mine too! And the lack of content out there motivated me to make my own. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 26 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice Start ! :)
=D Continue ! :) <3
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 26 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start. Hope she puts him underfoot!
Author's Response:
Eventually!