[Report This]Date: August 18 2017 4:03 AM Title: Acerola
Hi hi.
A great chapter, the building up was enough to give the mc's friends reason to los his patience as well as have the mc get a contrast with Acerola before and after shrinking.
The girl's playfulness was really enjoyable to read through the whole chapter and added a good pack of humilliation to each interaction with the shrunken dude. I love how you could fit in so many different kind of not so usual interaction, as well as the description on each of Acerola's odorous games. Also, it fits a lot with my tastes, and made me enjoy some other stuff that I'm usually indifferent to, like the golden shower part.
The last part was also really good, having the mc feeling powerless without even touching him and punishing the other guy at the same time. About the not-so-mean guy, I wonder if he got to the "best outcome" one could get with Acelora, or if he's even alive...
So yeah, excellent chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you KentaRyu, I'm glad you liked it as well. You know I had some trepidation when attempting certain interactions but with what I added in and cut out, I figured the most I could add would be enough to give the readers a general idea of what to expect while letting them know the fear of being powerless. There's no greater fear than that one oneself unable to act, IMO that is.
^,^
[Report This]Date: August 17 2017 11:34 PM Title: Acerola
It was great to see this story continued, sorry to hear you're bogged down by life stuff. I start college this week so I might be going through that soon too.
I loved how you delved into some really neglected giantess interactions this chapter. Although some were kind of brief, like wirh the photographs, 99% of other stories don't even seem to consider armpits spit etc. so ot was really riveting to get that here.
I loved this chapters theme so much because I'm a degenerate, probably one of my all time favorite chapters from you.
Author's Response:
Let's be degenerate's together then my friend. ^,^
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, It really makes me happy to know I took the right approach with a girl like Acerola. Was worried for awhile but I've only gotten positive feedback so far so I hope the next one will have just as much love as this one got.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2017 4:49 PM Title: Acerola
Man, this was a roller coaster of a chapter! Really enjoy your stuff and as a fan of the series myself I've been following this with curiosity since the first instalment. This is certainly my favourite chapter of the three! You used the odour tag masterfully, though I do wish she had eaten him. Would have loved to see how awful her mouth actually was. Perhaps it could be explored with another S/M girl? Much as I'd love to see Mallow return, or an alternate ending to the Acerola chapter, I understand the want to cover new characters each time. Plumeria comes to mind; she hasn't been mentioned yet to my knowledge, and as a Poison-type enthusiast her own hygiene may be fairly poisonous itself, if you catch my drift.
Still, that's just my two pence; your story at the end of the day, and I'm sure whatever you do with it will be just as excellent.
Keep up the amazing work, my good man!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your thoughts Lord AJ, I will take them into account. I do have plans for all the girls. Some more thought out than others, but Plumeria has come to mind, along with some other grunts as well, don't you worry. What was seen here today will be repeated, but don't expect it to be as cheerful as it was for Acerola if you catch my drift.
I hope to please with the new chapters I install in the future, and I hope to be writing them sooner than later.
Date: February 10 2017 10:45 AM Title: Mallow's trial
Hey Franchise, glad to see you writing again. Hope your doing well! :D Lana is so cute! I like how you use blunette to describe Lana as well as verdette to describe Mallow in CH 1. That is a very unique play on words you did there. Hope you continue this and also I meant to give you five stars in my last review. If you got less its my tablets fault.
Author's Response:
It's alright Nothingness, i figured you were trying to rate my story as 10 :P
Thank you for taking your time to review, i appreciate it a lot, :)
Generally when i describe people in my stories i use hair colors as signalers for whom i'm speaking of and finding creative ways to do it is something i've a;ways enjoyed. ^.^
Date: February 07 2017 2:37 PM Title: Lana's Trial
I really liked this chapter, you captured Lana's timid nature very well. I really hope you continue this trend and get all the S&M girls (all best girls), especially Acerola.
Author's Response:
"Smiles darkly"
Of trust me, i have plans for Acerola, and i'm looking quite foward to her chapter.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2016 10:51 PM Title: Mallow's trial
Haven't played Pokémon much recently, but great story! Sad that the strawberry armpit scene didn't get to happen like feet scene haha looking forward to more chapters.
Author's Response:
I had planend it in, but i was dragging the feet a bit to long so i ended up cutting it. But don't worry, i'm saving it for someone else. ;)
[Report This]Date: December 28 2016 5:10 PM Title: Mallow's trial
This was excellent! Great to see another one of your stories! When playing through S&M I thought the Akala trial captains would be excellent giantesses, especially Mallow and Lana. I'd love some anal insertion with either of them. Lillie would also make for a great gts. Someone before suggested butt stuff with her and I think that'd be great. She should definitely be the most gentle but that doesn't make it any less sexy. Thanks again for taking the time to write such a nice story!
Author's Response: I will most certainly be using some Anal insertion, don't you worry! Thank you for reviewing, the reponces ive gotten so far far exceeded what I imagined. I'll try to have a new installment soon.
[Report This]Date: December 28 2016 9:48 AM Title: Mallow's trial
You portrayed Mallow's mischievousness perfectly and your writing is top-notch although I already knew this just from your editing skills with Sterben's work ;)
Date: December 27 2016 8:52 AM Title: Mallow's trial
Oh no you didn't! I'm...I'm speechless. A Pokemon S&M gts story involving the island trials. I'm also glad to see that your writing again, Franchise and that I could see your latest story in action.(I didn't read this yet but I sure as hell will.)
Author's Response:
Aww thank you Nothingness :D
I've been away far to long in my opinion, so i thought about writing the first thing that came to mind when i had a moment. This was at the top of my list. ^,^
Date: December 26 2016 11:56 AM Title: Mallow's trial
Only the first 2 episodes of S&M anime are out in English, but you can watch the first 9 episodes in Japanese with subtitles on YouTube right now.
Date: December 26 2016 2:25 AM Title: Mallow's trial
Ooh, a franchise I recognize! This ought to be even more fun than usual, because I won't have to do much Googling to figure out what everyone looks like lol.
Yeah, I enjoyed "The Fairies of Fairy Tail", and now I'm adding a review to something you've made. I really want to see how this goes on!
In terms of suggestions . . . vaginal insertion and footplay are favorites of mine, so maybe two girls challenge Olivia together and their Z-Rings go berserk and shrink them to 3 inches or so? Not picky on which girl, but I went for the first one I could think of that nobody mentioned yet lol
Author's Response:
Hmm, no one has asked for her yet, i think i could arrange something to do with a double battle. It's good to see your review Silent-One, i'll try to please with the next instalment. ^.^
Date: December 25 2016 9:10 PM Title: Mallow's trial
Have you ever considered doing stuff with the anime? Ash could shrink down in front of all 3 Lana, Lillie, and Mallow, and get passed between them. It would be more gentle given the nature of their established characters in the anime since they're all friends, but no less sexy.
Author's Response:
I haven't actually seen the Anime yet so no i hadn't considered it. I'll have to check it out, you raise a valid point. It could be an intresting interaction between the four of them. Thank you for pointing that out to me Foreignkanto. :)
[Report This]Date: December 25 2016 3:59 PM Title: Mallow's trial
Nice! I would really like to see Lusamine shrink down Gladion, Hau and Sun(main playable character) and toy with them in different ways, like she eats one, crushes another and keeps the last one as her pet/toy
Author's Response:
Hmm, i think i can try something like that. I haven't received any requests for her yet :)