Date: December 04 2020 5:36 AM Title: What's Next?
Recently came across the story and thoroghly enjoyed it. Wholesome with some lewdness sprinkled here and there.
Author's Response:
I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it! :D
[Report This]Date: January 01 2018 3:35 AM Title: What Luck!?
Happy 1st Anniversary of the beginning!!!
This is a story I love and genuinely enjoyed reading. It waspersonally something to look forward to and kept me excited each week. Thanks for writing this amazing story. I would've reviewed 1 year ago, but I didn't start my account until now. Don't know why I waited. Anyways, I also love your newer works. Keep it up.
Happy New Year!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much and Happy New Year to you as well!
This is also one of my favorite stories I've written, so I'm glad you hold it in such high regard :)
Thank you for a great start of a new year!
[Report This]Date: March 15 2017 12:59 PM Title: What's Next?
I don't think I ever read this! Oh maaaan. Dude, this was great. It was pretty much a solid read from top to bottom, and while I dislike the whole broken fourth wall thing, I think the ending was exactly what it needed to be. So, so, so well done, Nrawk!
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much for the praise! I wasn't sure how the ending would be received but I'm glad it seemed appropriate. I'm happy you like it and again, thank you.
Date: March 08 2017 5:58 PM Title: Sirus' Geas
Geeeeeettin close. I like the face Sirus tries to put on for the camera. A good and fairly believable story. I can't wait for the sweet little reunion! Also, maybe Eris isn't too bad... Maybe.
Author's Response:
Yes, well if he told the world that a random homeless girl shrunk him down at the order of an interdimensional being no one would have believed him.
And Eris, she is complex... and bored... mostly bored
Date: March 06 2017 7:46 AM Title: What Comes After
Finally caught up. Man, this is a GREAT story! Kinda sad it'll end soon, but a wonderful little piece you have.
Author's Response:
Yes, while I am also sad to end Eri and Sirus' story I also do not want to drag it on. I have a couple of side stories that I may explore sometime in the future, but I want to get to work on some other things first. Thank you for reading up to this point and I hope I can finish just as strong.
Date: March 03 2017 5:43 PM Title: At the Starting Line
Haaaaa, Andy grammer! My wife and I were actually in that crowd at that Holi festival he filmed the music video for the song at. Anyhow, excellent and very sentimental story. Well done.
Author's Response:
That's so cool! Yeah, I wasn't really a fan of that song before I wrote that chapter, but after listening to it so much it grew on me.
Date: March 03 2017 1:12 PM Title: What Comes After
Dammit Eri! Why didn't you shrink those guys earlier. You were clearly in danger, it would have been perfectly morally acceptable. You could have saved so much pain.
Author's Response:
Hesitation and her timid personality. Eri never wanted to shrink another person ever again.
Date: March 03 2017 7:50 AM Title: What Luck!?
Two chapters in, already soooo enjoyable! Loving this so far. Gonna keep a close eye on this one. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I hope the rest of the chapters are just as enjoyable.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2017 6:28 PM Title: At the Starting Line
Hi NRawkGTS I extremely pleased you took an opportunity to check out some of my work and that something in my meandering narrative encouraged you to share your voice with us. Consider me a fan :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! You feel like a big part of this community so it feels really good to list you amoung my fans :)
Date: February 25 2017 7:41 PM Title: What Luck!?
Oh god it went from zero to oen hundred really fast!
Author's Response:
Yeah, but Chad is exactly a patient guy and don't forget the complusion Sirus emits because he's tiny.
Date: February 25 2017 3:38 PM Title: What Luck!?
Also Canadian, enjoyed seeing Eri wrestle with the moral implications of shrinking Sirus for selfish reasons and the dialogue between the two. :)
Author's Response:
First and foremost, high-five Canadian pride!
Secondly, HOLY CRAP DUGGERNAUT! My first reply I had just woken up so I didn't register the name but holy crap I love your work! I've read Anna's Awakening, Botched and Tom's Story, all great, all insperations for my own stuff. Thank you for all you do.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2017 12:30 PM Title: What Luck!?
I really like the way you've started this story and am eager to see where you take it! Loved the loonies, toonies reference. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. Am Canadian, will Canada :)
[Report This]Date: February 19 2017 9:34 AM Title: What Luck!?
Terrific story so far. Great writing skills. Absolutely love gentle stories with a slight but harmless sadistic twist. You definitely succeeded with the latter in the form of Sarah! The last chapter and the building up to it was splendid! Look forward to the next one, hombre!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I felt like the story needed a little spice but I didn't want to change Eri's character too much. Sarah is most definitely fun to write.
I'm glad the payoff was worth the build up. I am working on the next chapter now, should be up (hopefully) in less than a week.
Date: February 18 2017 11:04 AM Title: Her and His(tory)
Please more
great chapter
Author's Response:
More is on the way. Thanks for the praise!
Date: February 09 2017 10:39 AM Title: What Luck!?
Hey there, great story here !
I've read all chapters at once, can't wait to see what's next !
Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much. To binge 11 chapters shows me how much you must have liked it. I hope all future chapters continue to meet you expectations.
[Report This]Date: February 08 2017 12:57 PM Title: The Verdict
You should totally do a viginate with a muti-sized 3way. That would be awesome!
Author's Response:
While not out of the question, I will have to see where this story takes me :)
Date: February 04 2017 10:29 PM Title: Big Ass Problem
I really like the current chapter, but I am not a writer so I unfortuanatly can't say anything else, but you are doing well!
Author's Response:
One does not necessarily have to point out writing error to be of a great help to a writer. Just knowing the content of a chapter is favorable over another let writers know what their readers enjoy, so thank you for voicing your approval.
Date: February 04 2017 6:12 PM Title: Big Ass Problem
Yup, just what I thought Sarah would do. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks, she's a fun character to write.
Date: February 04 2017 10:43 AM Title: Big Ass Problem
Sarah sure moves fast. 5 minutes alone and she puts Sirius fully up her ass. I wonder what Sirius wil say once he comes to.
Author's Response:
I know right, it was super quick right?
[Report This]Date: February 03 2017 7:10 PM Title: What Luck!?
I'm really enjoying the story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks, at the very least I've been able to upload a chapter once a week.