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Reviewer: billyevil Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2007 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Discovery.

Did you really need to break that into two chapters?

Author's Response: I don't know I was in the middle of fixing ideas. There was a preface which explained everything but when I tried to put it into the story but the action I wanted didn't work so I have to continue the story.

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