[Report This]Date: November 14 2019 1:35 PM Title: 1: Heart-to-heart
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[Report This]Date: January 14 2017 12:08 PM Title: 3: Written Agreement
What en ending, I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2017 9:50 PM Title: 2: Lily's confidence
This is really great! You do a really good job of making the larger characters feel really in control and powerful. The part with Rick getting sucked into Lily's mouth is a really good example of that.
Going by the chapters here so far and your profile description, I think we have pretty similar tastes, so I'll definitely be following this!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2017 1:40 AM Title: 1: Heart-to-heart
Sorry I forgot to rate! No problem! & thank you, I do have a story I've recently started on this site, however, I find it hard to enjoy my own writing when reading it rather than others. It removes the unknown that your story holds as I already know what'll happen in mine.
Date: January 08 2017 5:08 AM Title: 1: Heart-to-heart
Very interesting story! Has me on the ropes at times with what is going to happen to some characters, poor school commitment leads to shrinking with the potential for a death sentence by a teacher or any student if they choose to do so? Quite scary, one of the hardest things to do is create fear within writing, it's hard to visualise. Yet using an inspired theme, you've managed to show the kinds of dread characters experience and fear some characters can inspire much like the girl in the most recent chapter! well writen! i envy your skills!
Author's Response: Oh gosh that means a lot to me ;U; thank you so much! You could do it too with a little effort, I think. I'm barely a writer, I just read a lot of good ones!
Date: January 08 2017 12:09 AM Title: 3: Written Agreement
Oooh. Very, very nice, Madame Sugarfrost. I almost want you to just discuss things with me via email, because I'm sure that I could help make wonderful chapters centered around little miss Lo.
As for which professor is featured . . . I want someone to feature Professor Chase's love of puns for once. Like, not reacting at all to one of her puns is grounds for losing points, and making some of your own is worth grade points, but for some reason nobody has gone over that.
Author's Response: Madame Sugarfrost hahaha, I'm not that grand, I'm not old enough to be classified that, especially from someone as lovely as you, I look up to you ^^. Lily, or any similar nickname as humiliating or respectful as you like, will do! I've PM'd you my email, I'd love to work closer with you~ I've been hesitant to touch all professor other than my favourite (Inaban), but I'll do my best to bring professor Chase's pun-ishment to life!
[Report This]Date: January 04 2017 8:56 PM Title: 1: Heart-to-heart
Jon Striker also approves :)
[Report This]Date: January 04 2017 12:32 PM Title: 1: Heart-to-heart
Well written with such realistic dialogue from the characters. Keep up the good work. ;)
Date: December 10 2016 7:02 AM Title: 1: Heart-to-heart
That was really, truly, very good. Your descriptors and conveyance of imagery is spot-on. I liked your use of tildes to convey the upward inflection in Michelle's voice. Do you mind if I make use of your characters in my own CoG works? Lily herself is of particular interest to me because one of my stories is told from Dr. Northend's perspective.
Author's Response: I can't believe I missed this review. Please! By all means use my characters, I'd like nothing more than for you all to use my characters, especially Lily! I'm super happy you like my writing? And I hope you enjoy it more from now on!
Date: November 26 2016 7:58 PM Title: 1: Heart-to-heart
What a great short read, I really like the depiction of the characters involved.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2016 8:53 PM Title: 1: Heart-to-heart
I don't know, I liked it. It was good at introducing us to a character. I'd like to see more.
Author's Response: And there will be more, when I whip out my phone at midnight and am a rare mix of bored and horny (oops). More to come for sure.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2016 10:30 AM Title: 1: Heart-to-heart
For a first story, its amazing! For a story that could have been one of many, its just as good. Keep up the good work little sis~
That being said literally the premise of just. Everything being tied to grades really can set in that intense fear of failure.
The pacing was perfect for a story of this length, the detailing was great, and overall, I loved it~
Author's Response: Thanks sis! The fear is real~I'll try to keep writing like this!
Date: November 22 2016 9:43 PM Title: 1: Heart-to-heart
Very nice, very nice. I've been waiting on your take, and honestly I like what you've made. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I liked what you did in your last chapter as well, it's just that, Lily seemed so openly masochistic and lesbian, I would imagine Lily would be really shy and almost never admit these things out loud. And anyway wait till you see her sadistic streak~ I'll dabble in other characters, and I'll probably pinch Madeline. Hope things go well!