Date: October 03 2021 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
It is sad that this series came to an end I think you could have still done some other scenarios but I get the issue with making him aware of his powers. I more just really enjoy the characters and love to see them get into more silly adventures.
[Report This]Date: March 05 2018 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
mostly the best chapter, incrdible and dark ending, really good. I liked the underpants tf chapter also a lot. you totally should write more male male stories and transformation and unaware. its like my favorite coupling of tags, and I enjoy scat and vore too a lot. hope to see more from you again in the future.
[Report This]Date: March 05 2018 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
enjoyed this a lot with the condom tf, really hot
[Report This]Date: March 05 2018 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
too bad the story is over, but reading the last chapters I have missed so far it was incredible plot and a hell of a story.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2018 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 9
Too bad you decided to close the story : [ It was by far my favorite on here I come on hre to look it was updated. Wll you do another? That would be th ebest news ever. Not sure if you did not like your story, but I did. It was one of the best I read on here, and i just enjoy TF but also stuff like unaware, vore, scat, and it was just so great with the m/m how humiliating it was, for Sammy had no clue and Sammy was a fantastic character. I would love to see him again or a spin off in a concept of it. The ending was ok, it was not what I saw coming, but Sammy is blissfully unaware to the end and that made it great.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2018 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
What a great ending of Sammy never found out and still had these weird dreams, never told anyone about them hahaha Especially the one with Vince ooops. Vince was still my favorite ending, and the popcorn one too. I liked the ending, so dont worry about it. Will you write another transformation story like this?? Please!! You have no idea, how rare tf stories are, you are like the master mind of tf plots, seriously. AND I am a huge fan of mm stories too. And just gay "weak" characters as the unaware people. Sammy had but also this friendly, sweet charactrstics. He was totally like a hero of a story you wish to be happy and have a nice ending in the plot. It was so ironic, how he had during the whole plot a crush on Lucas, and when there was the chance to get his wish, he avoided it because he was jsut a nice person, knowing Lucas wasnt gay. SO SWEET!! I would like to see another story with Sammy, and his powers maybe return, OR some totally different high school story again with some other gay boy, and bullies transform around him. I liked this teddy bear story of yours also so much.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2018 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh noes the story is finished! ha. it was a great one. I have totally put it on my fav list and you should write a sequel or something else with Sammy maybe, he was so cute and how he acted and all just made the plot so great. But also the bullies and bad guys ending as his waste or worse was totally deserved and also made the plot great of him being unaware. The ending was a bit disapointing but still, overall, amazing story.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
Tthe 'curse' is now over, Sammy never noticed, and that made the story so amazing. glad you stayed with it. and please write another by time, would ya? just if you want to of course. I am happy to see this story had an ending. it was fun to go with Sammy through the story. I liked a lot.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2018 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am honest, I am really upset now... seeing the story end like this, or just in general end. To be honst, there could have been tons of awesome transformations happening still. I see you wanted to end the story, so this was more of a forced chapter, not really fitting in the plot. But still, this is the best story ever written on here. And I mean it! I wish to give it 99 out of 100 stars, just one star missing because I am really upset now, ha. But dont worry. every good story has to end one day. I had so much fun reading this story, seriously. And if I could wish for one just one thing... I would LOVE more than anything, you have no idea... to see you start a new story, in the same style, with Sammy or at least, someone who is "similiar" like him. Your other story Bully for You is my 2nd favorite of yours. And if there is a little chance, you will write a story like Bully for You and this one again, with m/m, and some really unfortunate transformations arcs, like someone turn into a gay boys penis, part of his ass, vore, and even more like this, it would be amazing. Thank you a billion times for this story. I would totally commission a story from you if you want, just give me a shout out ha (: You are my favorite author on here. And this story is the best I ever read, anywhere, it just worked for me, and I was in love with Sammy. Thank you for this story was written!!!! *LOVE* *LOVE* *LOVE*
[Report This]Date: February 25 2018 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
how are you !! are you in exam phase right now? hope all are going well! and you have some time again soon to continue writing!! I just loved the two chapter you pumped out, they were incredible. especially the popcorn one and the kernel ending, was mostly the best so far. I love it when the transformed guys keep their memories and spirit, you should do that more, it is totally the best, especially if they end in a very cruel fate like this.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2018 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
condom totally great idea, doing a 2nd maybe or even more cruel. but 8 was the best so far, totally.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2018 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
YOU BACK!! enjoyed the two chapters more than any else so far, so happy your back and how you are. the last one was the best, the popcorn kernel idea, the best so far. would enjoy another vore and or scat tf, totally the best becazse the most cruel. the party one was also good.
[Report This]Date: January 23 2018 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
liked chapter 8 even more, wow : o please go on like this. How sammy has not a clue he turned the two teens into his waste was so good, would enjoy more like this. Sammy totalyl blissfully unaware is the best about thie story.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2018 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
Another chapter totally to my taste. I like vore the most but also ass stuff. I cant imagine a more cruel ending for the two teens who acted so immature and mean. And it's so enjoable how Sammy took a morning dump and didnt give a shit quite literally about them. Him being unaware is so much better than aware. That line at the end totally said it right, not even thinking twice about his morning waste. Would enjoy another chapter like this. He does dumps every morning so its totally in the clear for it.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2018 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
I actually thought of a really funny and fitting plot, for this math exam maybe and a math teacher. Or some bully maybe too. Wo gave Lukas an unfair test result of an F... or for the bully part, who called Lukas or Sammy maybe a faggot. And then a bit later Lukas could be like in aconversation "That wasn't fair. What a shitty guy... what an ass-hole." And Sammy would think then, no one should call someone names like that, but in this case, Lukas was right, he really should be called an ass-hole. Even if that wasn't nice. But that just wasn't fair and rude. I read the chapter again it is just too good. I also liked the part with the gurgle and Mike wondering what that was. You should had added an ironic part of Sammy maybe farting or something as the preview of what will happen to him later haha. Oh and that would also such a great tf idea, someone becoming a fart for Sammy to pass!! lol!! And Sammy is totally getting red of it. What if the blue little gas bubble aka fart would then also not vanish but glue to his ass or in his boxers in the back area. I like those please kill me parts the most. Hope to see more of them too again.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2018 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
Are you kidding me!?? !!! AMAZING new chapter, and another so fast, this was so worth waiting, I am so happy you write more often now. No Truly the best chapter so far. And to make it fast, this is totally my favorite chapter now of the entire story.
And there was soo MUCH irony in here, I love irony more than anything. I will come back to what I mean with this in a bit.
How you write this story is just intense, and seriously, it is by far now one of the best stories ever written, period. On all platforms. I never read such a high quality story before, over time. And the last two chapters?? I loved so much how you put so much love and time in it. The lenght is incredible.
Can I please talk a little bit how a cute and fantastic character Sammy is? You created such a nice cute boy, and he has the most sweet character. I totally can put myself into him as a reader, how you make him have a heart brake over Lucas and how he struggles through his teenage time is fantastic. All the plots you included, the school hours, the afternoons, the free time, the at home time, the cnversations... with his mom, the parties, the bec over his head things, cinema... ALL is sooo fantastic. I would also love to see him maybe have morning woods, jerk off in his room sitting on his PC maybe just in tight boxers. I even could see him wear pink tight boxers, in skinny gray faded jeans like this: https://i.imgur.com/kV2ebv8.png
I also saw this pictured and it reminded me of Sammy of the bunny and colors: https://i.imgur.com/O4s7ulH.jpg
Jumping straight to the end of course I noticed this: Just as Sammy was about to go fall asleep he felt a weird tingling sensation run through his body. "I wish Lucas loved me," Sammy prayed drifting off to sleep.
I hope more than anything, that the next chapter isn't the end. Please don't end this story!! I would wish to read on "forever" honestly. There could still soo much happen and Sammy turn rude random people into goo... or in here, his waste.
Taking up the word, of course I noticed the incredible ironic word play you did here... first Sammy said this:
Sammy eyed him like he knew that it was him, "I don't want any of it to go to waste..."
And then in the stomach the two bullies were like: "Hang on Brandon, there's got to be a way out," Mike said HAA!! A way out of here... get it!? LOL!
And then... the ending, of them become Sammys WASTE! IS soo ironic and awesome, especially because Sammy said it before, he doesn't want his popcorn to "go to waste"... FANTASTIC!!
And now a few words about the best tf you did so far: How Mike was accidentally swallowed whole, and this leads to his outer shell just to melt away, and his inner self... the kernel... books a one way trip through Sammys digestive tract... with a very unfortunate ending, and HIM survive it, and mostly will even survive a horrible future ahead. This is the best thing ever! Please do it again. I would love to see some shitty person become Sammys or maybe Lukes anus, and stay alive, forever, and the cruel moments of him burping, vomitting up turds, and him scream in his mind, and is like please oh gooODD NO NONO -- GA- VOMI---
I loved this sentence so much: He would have vomited if he could, but as a popcorn kernel, one couldn't really throw up.
But also the best part?? This one:
Mike saw through the water above and saw where he just came out of, and things became clear where he was. He was in the bottom of a toilet, stuck in someone's waste. This couldn't possibly be happening, Mike thought to himself as he tried to move or dislodge himself form the heavy mass he was attached to but found he was just as stuck as he always had been. Before he knew it, another object came crashing down from the sky darkening his vision from the outside world. It was another mass of leftovers that the giant above him didn't need, as it collided with the water. Mike cried out as he watched the mass drop down near him.
You shuld have him literally scream at this part NO NONO ONNO GT MEET ME OOUT OFF HEEEERE... and him freak out... where Sammy, above, just casually sits, maybe txt on his phone, and then wipes.
The moment he realized he was just stuck in waste... and another creamy solid ploped near him down sinking into the water, was the best moment of horror ever in this story. Fantastic.... AWESOME!! My favorite part in this story to this point.
And then!? YOU even did it better! Of sammy standing up after wiping to piss. LOOOL!! You rock man!! This is totally plots I have waited for. And This is now my total favorite so far!!
I also loved so much how these rude teens spoke about chicks laughing and making rude jokes, and then also throwing popcorn at Sammy.... fantastic idea!!
I hope so much you wont end this story in the next.... please!! I would still love to see lots of unfortunate dark tf, anus, flies maybe and another like ant or bug, maybe another vore in the future, maybe someine turns into a peanute which also doesnt digest. A cum stain ending, a fleshlight would be amazing, and Sammy never cleans it. Or maybe it was Lukas because of him being straight.
But also... how you build up the chapters and how it suddenly turns into a nightmare is just YOUR own style like no one does on here, and you ROCK at it!!!
Can't wait for the next to come. Thank you so much for writing again. THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: January 19 2018 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
Damn... this was as good as the last one maybe evne better. The ending was even more cruel thats awesome. Please more cruel ones like this. How the teens friend was digested in front of his eyes but he stayed the kenel and than shat out, came on that, would like to see another toilet part. also another vore was really enjoyable.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2018 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Another gorgeous chapter. So good outplayed and well thought. I always liked the love struggles Sammy goes though, it is like a true story. And the cinema idea was a good one especially with the popcorn eating, and I even remember some teens did this to me too. Rude!!! And I can't get enough of bullies get what they deserve, this one literally had a shitty end in sight, eehh. I have to say i enjoy your chapters the most, where the transformed bad guys stay living, like in some eternal hell, that is soo much better. I also thought of for a second one ending as Lucas poo the other as Sammys ehh.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2018 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hot as fuck... hot as fuck vore and scat idea, love how this bully was because of some cruel twisted fate swallowed alove and this stayed unchanged... as a popkorn kernel, which are not digestable, fantastic idea, and he will stay like it. The ending was th best you made so far!!
[Report This]Date: January 18 2018 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
I forgot about this story and I feel terrible right now but at the same time amazing. Thank you for not having forgotten. Thank you, I came two times during this. So glad this isn't forgotten. Please continue. with lots of chapters to come.