Reviewer: arselover Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2017 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

update please? :) leaving it in my favorite chapter, with the toilet flush of Sammy having no idea of the cruel fate of the guy in his ass, just the best part, hope to see more in this again. Last chapter with the cumrag was also the best

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2017 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just got bored the other night and read this again and I cant say how good it is in words, it is totally my favorite ongoing story. Hope you continue it soon!! What I also noticed was just now the guy in the last chapter not fading away or dying I like this so much more because it is so mean, I imagine him suffering forever and screaming with no one care or to know. Hope you add some more nasty parts, maybe turn someone into a vessel Sammy takes a shit into, or Sammys ass h0le... the only point in life was to vomit up foul turds or belch forth the gas trapped deep within Sammys bowls, without him to know. Another food tf would be nice too. Or someone becoming a sperm stain, or piss stain maybe?

Reviewer: pete445 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2017 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

It would be unfair to just have left just one rating so I am leaving a second too on the second best chapter. Just so hot.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

Another look for Sammy with a annoyed facial expression:

http://i.imgur.com/ZK878LP.jpg

I could also see him wear a hair barrette like this adding to a girly look:

http://i.imgur.com/8LumW9k.png

Look at those hot wedgie pants! maybe turning a guy into bike pants with the face in the crack inside area, and Sammy using them in his free time at home, to sleep in like pyjamas, and to ride bike.

Would also like to see another tiny food tf again like the m&m, maybe a peanute tf adding inside a bag of lots of others, and it been swllowed whole, or a popcorn and literally ending semi half digested as a kernel in a turd.

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

Really good new chapter, no totally more. Sammy already forgot about the pair of soiled panties that were left to be picked up with the rest of pathetic trash that no one wanted. The last sentence was totally of my likings, and the whole plot twist of that boy turned into a girls underwear and then ending in a trash can soacked with male sperm. You're doing it much better than most authors of what I read in the past months on here. This story is totally one of my favorites at the time.

Reviewer: ILike Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2017 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

Hot you're going for Sammy stay unawre and also Joseph stayed aware of thngs happening to him, this was lit and a huge turn on, than them just losing it at some point. This chapter was truly hot chapter again. A more cruel ending would have been Sammy left the pantis on his floor and using it from then as a cum-rag, and it becoming really nasty smelling more and more, smell and dried cum building up in it, and Joseph suffering through evry day sammy jerking off in it, then after a week or two, Joseph just a shell of his former self, Sammy throwing away the nasty pants. Maybe doing something like that again in another chapter. Keep it up man, hot story always a pleasure reading a new piece. Maybe someone ending as a cum stain on his bed cover he doesn't change for months, or on a under pants of his, all with them keping their awareness. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

What a fantastic surprise to come back home for, Im lovin it, and chapter 6 is now my 2nd favorite chapter, right after 4. I still can hear Vince "scream" every time Sammy goes to the bathroom big, lol. Which actually brings up something amazing in this chapter! You finally did it keeping the transformed characters consciousness, this is soo much better, and adds so much more humiliation to the plot. Please do it again in upcoming chapters!! It was a bit of a down side of the road in the past chapters, that you always killed off the characters, and them driving into "darkness". But here, Joseph kept his consciousness, and mostly kept it forever, until the panties would be burned or destroyed otherwise.

This chapter did a lot of things even better than the past ones, for example Joseph totally being full of fear and desperation, you did such a good job on this one. And compare his screams and desperation, to the joy and unawareness of Sammy is just so good, thats why it's so much better keeping Sammy unaware, please keep it this way, this story is a blast so far, and mostly THE best tf story I ever read anywhere on the web, seriously.

The idea with the pink girly panties was amazing and didn't even come to be before, and reading the plot, I honestly was a bit disappointed. Because I was thinking, oh buh-huh, does he make Joesph become Jessica panties? Lame, would have been much better if he had became Sammys... and than THIS part happened!

" if he had to spend is life being tried on by hot women, that was a sacrifice he was willing to make."

LOL! What a fantastic idea, and it's even better! So much more humiliating of he thought of maybe bad turned into a girly panties, but at least he would spent his rest of his life on a hot girls ass... WRONG. Fantastic idea!! And it's so much fitting for Sammys character, really well done played, amazing idead.

I also loved Joesph saying things like "what a fag...", it's so much more humiliating thinking these straight guys some of them having homophobic ideas and then they literally be used by Sammy in a very gay to them mannar.

The idea of Josephs mouth literally ben penetrated with the hardened boner into his "mouth" was THE BESSST, what a great idea. But then also the back coming, of Joseph thinking it was all over... WRONG! And Sammy picking him up and rub his penis head against the fabric, because of the nice feeling of the soft fabirc, what a good idea!!

The ending was a masterpeice, and I am so in love with it, the idea with Joseph ending as trash, and How you made Sammy do it:

" Joseph looked up and watched in horror as Sammy reached to the sides of the can. Slowly as if to tease him even more, Sammy lifted the sides of the bag."

" He was garbage like everything else left in there..."

"Sammy already forgot about the pair of soiled panties that were left to be picked up with the rest of pathetic trash that no one wanted."

Those sentences are GOLD! What a shocking torture, I can imagine Joseph not even registering what was about to happen there, literally his "eyes" twisting, the smell around him getting to him, maybe the cum dropping over him, making a wet BLOB noise, something of a former waste plopping onto him, and then from outside:

"Hey mom I'm taking out the trash,".

PLOP... silence. EPIC!!! ANd how Sammy even already forgot about the panties, he just jerked into, SOOO GOOD!!

The idea of this jerk, you also called him such before, literally getting a mouth full of Sammys penis and cum, and then just getting "trashed", used, abused, ending as waste, is FANTASTIC!

And the best? him keeping his consciousness!! Please I am begging you, do it again or always from now it is so much better them keeping their consciousness!! But unable to move, or do anything, but they kept thei senses, like taste, smell, can see, listen, but are just objects, or body parts, withouth no one ever to know about.

I would love to see the two annoying police cops maybe ending as two flys, like in my idea mail before. Also another panties tf, but this time the guys face ending in the back area of Sammys underpants, and literally getting a mout full of ass.

And of course the guy becoming a "pain in the arse" idea, of someone ending as Sammys Anus, also keeping his consciousness, senses, taste, smell, everything, of having the honor to experience a soft long turd being pressed out of his "throat" and out of his "mouth", him screaming, choking, and it always feeling like him throwing up, throwing up the most horrible tasting thing you could imagine.

The part of where Sammy also said "lucas" was so humiliating for Josep,

"Was he really thinking of a guy? Joseph couldn't help but get more disgusted as he felt something wet touch him."

Please more of these disgusting parts for these boys turned into objects then used by Sammy, it' the best parts...

"Joseph gagged as he watched that kid... Tammy? Randy? No it was Sammy. Yeah Sammy, that' right. Sammy came walking into the room. " <3

"Joseph watched as Sammy stood over him. He already had his legs in between Joseph. Joseph watched as Sammy's ass and junk hung over him awaiting what was coming next. Sammy bent down and picked up Joseph. Joseph let out one more cry of protest before he started to rise up."

The chapter is just full of these fantastic parts, and it is literally now my 2nd fav chapter. Would have been even better of Joseph getting a mouthfull of ass.

Here is another picture how I imagine Sammy:

http://i.imgur.com/yRaLeeo.png

I love this skinny, "wimp" like concept so much, and I could even se ehim dress like his for Halloween, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you liked my ideas with the other tf parts, would love to see them eventually. This story is just the best!!

Reviewer: camehere2 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 6

   i think this is the best so far of going for horror.horror elements are one of my favorites. I mean how you made Jospeh suffer, desribe hoe he was gagging, nearly vomitting (literally), feeling sick, disgusted, screaming in his head... and no one would hear him scream, ever more. ican't imagine something more horrific, for than for these straight jocks become literally raped by a gay boy, how humiliating would that be, and then literally turning into ... waste. niceto see more of this horror elements, i already liked very much in the boy became sammys intestinal walls,more of these horror aspects would be nice.

Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

Did not like this chapter very much because of the testicle vore, which I said before is just not a thing for me and I want it to work out, which can't because testicles arent hollow... they are a solid object, and most of the fluids of cum also doesn't get produced in them... they arent hollow, so something like this could never happen. But I said it before in a comment.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

Just found THE PERFECT look of Sammy and wanted to share it too:

http://i.imgur.com/KzK7UWl.png (maybe a bit shorter hair)

http://i.imgur.com/0ii6hQ7.png (I imagine him wearing boxers like though maybe some more girly ones with hearts on them or tiddle teady bears)