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Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2018 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great start into the new year, happy to see you write on. The story is one of my favorites and I enjoyed the sex scene a lot. So ironic how Sammy isnt aware it wasnt his best friend. And just Bobbys shitty gf ends like this. Wish to see way more chapters in the future, and you keep the mood, this was really well written and had better length than 99% of the usual plots on here. Could you maybe do more of the panties tf of the victim stay inside without fading to nothingness. That was so great. I would also enjoy some pure object tf too like the panties, or part of an object. Fleshlight would be a good one, another condom, toilet paper, little part of a boxers. Maybe get another teacher to "vanish", or some bullies. I liked the idea of the party and Sammys fear of it. Maybe have some bullies invite him but this time it goes horrible, at least at first for Sammy.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2018 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

I just read the ending again because it was soo good. I am a true assman hehe. Wished you had used her be the condom getting shoved in Sammys ass and then filled with cum and thrown away, that would have been so cruel. Please do more ass parts this was so good. Maybe turn one of the police guys into Sammys butt hole and Sammys is banged in the ass as him giving "oral" (the ass hole) and when Sammys takes a shit he vomits it up, and both times the guy is like please ki- buagh kill me- pleas no- buahg. I also liked the part where Bobby wishes away the cum and Sammy is sleeping. Really great chapter.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2018 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 7

damn good new chapter, yiiz : D I would had liked it WAAAY more though, if she had become that condom, and Boddy had used HER on his dick to bang Sammy in his ass, and then have some accident, like it poping in Sammys ass, or then Bobby just casually dropping the filled "condom" with a wet smack in the waste bin, and Rebecca still be herself inside. Not sure why oyu chose this directin, i tink this would have had been way better. Maybe do that in another chapter? Stll very very very good new chapter. enjoyeing it a lot.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2018 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 7

I just noticed this stupid site cut off my review, I had to re write it, damn... hope this one goes through.

Please let me first say, this is by FAR the best of all chapters so far. The length, the plot, everything is just the best of them all.

SOOO HAPPY the school started again! It was a bit of a downer the school was closed, and this makes it all just amazingly better again! Please let the school open for the upcoming plots aha!!!

You have just this fantastic talent. I dont know how to say it, but dude, youre like the best author on here, I MEAN it. All the other stories lack a proper logic background, characters, settings, and you just have them ALL. I just love your "High School" setting so much. And how you write, it is like one of these coming to age movies, having all in it what those moves are good for.

Then your realistic szene switches, mid plot. And suddenly, when the reader is DEEP in the plot, a very ironic and cruel transformation happens, youre mastring those moments than no one before.

'Sammy felt a knot in his gut as another person went missing. "Who would do such a thing..."Sammy couldn't agree more. Whoever was kidnapping people was twisted individual. He just hoped that someone found this creep and arrest him.'

This was so ironic haha, what a bad person, wish they arres that creep! I totally hope you WILL continue uanware, Sammy JUST has to never find out, it is 100times better this way. Please!!

I also got the idea, please make the two "pesky" police officers vanish. If they vanish, I am sure the police would forget about the school part and start to dig into their vanishing, thinking it would be a mafia thing. How would a kid like Sammy be beind it? He cant. How pesky the two are also would make such an irony, if they two change into two little fruit flys. Maybe Sammy says somehing about them being annoying and pesky like flys.

'As Bobby started to leave Sammy quickly said, "I might be able to go."Bobby turned around and gave him a warm smile, "Cool, I'll give you the address.""Trust me you're going to enjoy this party." With that Bobby headed off toward Rebecca.'

This was such a thrill. I really thought of, what if it was a cruel trap for some cocky jocks, to have some fun at a party with this fag or sissy boy. Then it totally came different. Maybe you coul still include a party plot like this.

I Just LOVE PARTIES. And during high school, they mostly happen every friday, so why not include them more. I would totally love to see at least one more party chapter, they make just the best and most interesting settings.

'Sammy wasn't sure what Doug was talking about, but he just smiled and nodded, "Yeah, Bobby is a cool dude." "Really? That was nice of you guys." !! Although it didn't make the brownie any less applying, it just made it interesting and unique. It must have been a family recipe.'

BEST IDEA EVER!! With the dope cakes!! LOOOVED IT! It is also sooo fitting of Sammy be so innocent and not know stuff like this!! FANTASTIC IDEA! Him getting drugged is also the best plot twist, I would love to see it again. Him getting drunk by some twisted way, maybe at another party of where he promised not to drink anymore, but he's somehow forced into it, maybe by a dare you to setting.

'Suddenly Sammy was looking at the condom and through his drug haze he was wondering why the condom was talking to him. Just as he was wondering why the condom hated him so much the sound stopped and it was quiet.'

BEST CHANGE SO FAR OF THE ENTIRE PLOT! This was soo funny and soo ironic. Like shes talking to him and Sammy just looks at the condom and in his hazed state is like, huh why is this condom speaking to me and so rude? !!!!!!!!!!!!

'What was supposed to be originally an insult by tossing a small size condom package at Sammy soon turned into a nightmare as Rebeca found that she, the condom now, was extremely small compared to Sammy's member. It all came to her as Sammy tried to roll her side down but couldn't make it roll over the top. Sammy didn't stop trying. Suddenly Rebeca let out a cry as Sammy pulled the condom a little outwards then down and to Sammy's delight and Rebeca's horror she started to roll down the length of Sammy's cock. Finally reaching the end of where the condom could go, Sammy let go of it and felt a very very snug firm grip. It was almost painful but in a pleasurable way. Sammy shivered from the new feeling. His member twitch in response to the ecstasy it's owner was having.

... shot skyward only to be blocked by Rebeca's body. The liquid burned her body and caused her to stretch even more than she already was.'

BEST PART OF THIS CHAPTER!!! I just loved the cruel irony, how she was a too small size of a condom for Sammys penis. LOOOOL! And how the cum made her burn and everything, fantastic. The only things I missed were here gaging and feeling to vomit inside her of it. Then I also wished she was disgusted later on and screaming and stuff. Also it was a bit short plot change of how fast she realized she was a condom.

10 out of 10 chapter. Seriously. And I have so many questions now. Because of the whole Bobby misunderstanding. LOL! I just loved Sammy thinking it was Lucas in his hazed state!! SOO GOOOD, and it may get soo ironic and embarrassing of plots later. I wonder will Sammy forget everything because of being drugged, totally I guess! I also just loved how Rebecca totally was trashed and wasted by her BF talking about her in a trashy way "up above", that part was soo good.

Please let me say, WELCOME BACK!! SOO HAPPY YOU ARE! AND THANK YOU FOR THIS CHAPTER!! It is now my favorite of them all! Seriously!

If I could wish for more to come, I would still LOVE to see a Math teacher become Sammys anus, mostly one of the boys be like him be a shitty person, what an asshole, of a surprise test. And please him not lose his consciousness.

Then I alsou got the idea of some rude guy or girl become the first little droplet of an anal bead, which breaks off, and is lost inside Sammys ass.

The two pesky police officers become tiny fruit flys, and both meet a horrible fate, mostly eaten by Sammys gold fish in his room, the other swatted by a rolled up news paper and still be half squished alive on it laying on Sammys PC desk, for a while. Sammy maybe playing Minecraft.

I also got the idea of someone turn into a bacteria, mostly inside someones ass cheecks, or so small inside a tiny little droplet of cum or sweat.

Someone turn into a single hair inside an ass, or into butt lint.

Someone ends as a cum stain in Sammys underpants or on his bed cover, and him keep is consciousness.

THIS STORY!!! Welcome BACK!! YOU ROCK!!! Happy 2018

Reviewer: adamnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2018 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

Finally another update to this story and what kind, this is a damn enjoyable additing to an already outstanding story. I also find it good to know you work on more. Honestly I would enjoy this story have lots of more chapters to come, not just a few and have it end, there are so many still great ways to make people suffer without Sammy to know.

Reviewer: clubby88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2018 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 7

i never read a plot like this yet??? I never thought of humans transform into objects and stuff but it is kinky, i like it. i also enjoy the male male interaction. it is nice to see a male as main character, and i enjoy how all the bad things happen for people around him. he is like a anti super hero with super powers and isnt aware abot it. thats really kinky to think about. i like the scat part the most would enjoy more, but also the condom idea was kinky. the vore part too. AND the pantis one, especially the ending was one of the best of this boy ends in the trash, full of cum, and he is still himself in it. would you do another underwear chapter that was great. totally +fol

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2018 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 7

I read this entire story again this night. I first didn't remember. I love nasty plots. I enjoyed this a lot. Wish for more nasty stuff.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2018 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

I honestly dont know where or how to start. I wish I could show you my state of emotions right now. It is PURE HAPPINESS. Pure BLISS. Pure JOY. I was becoming so upset when this epic story wasnt continued anymore, and I was worried you were gone on here. And now this surprise... I dont care it took a long time since the last update, all I care about is this and that there was an update and what you wrote in the chapter end notes there is more to come

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2018 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

really hope youre still out there. I am worried but also upset. This story was the best ever written period. Wish there were more m/m authors out there. ope youre alright and will eventually write again. I miss your work a lot.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2017 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wish you will come back eventually. Hope you have some nice Christmas time <3

Reviewer: camehere2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2017 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 6

no update in so long hope you will continue this. the best story of the year for sure

Reviewer: pete445 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey you stil around? Totally wish you are and write again. This is still one of my favorite plots ever.

Reviewer: adamnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 6

still aroundd? I liked this chapter the most also the toilet one. maybe change some cocky boy into a fleshlight for him to use daily, maybe he ordered one from a sex shop. that would be hot. hope to see you write again soon.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2017 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

I hope so much you come back. You just have to. This story cant die. Please :(

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2017 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hope youre all safe and well. I miss your writing so much, more than anything. Hope yu come back! This site needs your addition.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

you still around? you have to, this story I come back every week and hope for an update. it has epic 35894 reads! If thats not a sign people loving it. I hope you come back if you find the time and write more chapters on this. the world needs more good m/m unaware plots like this one.

Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2017 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 6

got bored the other day and remembered I had bookmarke this story and read it again completly and I just remembered how great it was. please continue it!!!

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2017 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

totally still wish you come back maybe after the summer break, and if autumn begins or winter, and you may have write again. this story is just too awesome.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2017 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

Another Sammy version

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Miss your work more than anything.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2017 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

hope youre doing well. I miss your work so much. I hope youre not done writing, please... there is NO other author on here like you. youre my idoll, actually my favorite author I ever met on here. You can also mail me back if you want, I would just love to discuss about your stories more in detail, hear what you are fantasing about. You rock man. I hope youll continue this story, you just have to.

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