Reviewer: adamnight Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

This adds to the first chapter. had lots of fun here, what a way to go having a mouth of of sammys balls, lol. smaller shrinking sizes are so much better. you wrote it out totally best part was how the boy began to freak out of the radiadint heat and the balls not moving a slightest bit. really liked how Sammy moved his ass over his chair trying to get that annoying itch away. that was so hot and I had the picture in front of me, the guy screaming with a mouthful of ball skin, the cotton fiber of the material around him of the pants and jeans, smearing him into the skin.
A step even further would be someone having a mouthfull of wrinkled anus screaming. maybe make someone become transformed into a tiny butt lint lost on the wrinkled flesh inside Sammys ass, and him getting again an annoying itch sitting in class, thinking he didn't wipe properly before, contracting and rubbing his ass on his chair. a cruel twist plot could also be someone becoming literally a fart turning into a tiny gas cloud inside a boys ass, to just be passed away through the jeans, Sammy may even get embarrassed or try to pass it silently while sitting in class.Transform plots are the best for sure. This story already is arousing. love it

Reviewer: klyk78 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2016 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

Another great chapter :)

Keep up the nice work.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2016 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 2

I was waiting for this so much, yes!! This is now my new favorite story of yours and I hope it will continue a lot of chapters. I am just in love with Sammy, and how you make him, also his cute same as nice best friend Luke.

The writing style is just perfect, all fits so well, please continue like it. I mean how you make them talk, the thoughts of Sammy and going with him through his day, like classes, going to school, waking up, going home, the bus ride, doing homework, and doing some private tasks ha, all is awesome!

Some may say it was boring reading going throguh his school classes, but please continue like this, it's so good! I love longer and more detailed, but also realistic plots. And I think this is your best work so far compared to these topics of building up a plot and characters.

I absolutely loved the beginning of Sammy totally already forgot about yesterdays events and then even told himself it mostly was all just a dream. This makes such a fantastic unaware plot. I was actually hopinh for a more unaware parts, and please continue like this.
Here comes though two critism I have:

It would had been way more thrilling, if Sammy didn't find out at the end, and just casually jerked off into a tissue, wiping it away, and letting it casually fall to his rooms floor. And the semen just looking normal, not being blue. Hope you wont change directions, I would love to stay Sammy unaware about his powers. It's so much more thrilling, if he accidentially changes people without knowing it, and puts them in horrible nightmares.

The other is, I think it would be way more erotic to think about the transformed people not losing their consciousness, but they just can't move/talk of course. But still they had all their senses and even could see, but from outside no one would see them of course and just see the normal surface they melted into / becoming it.

I loved the bus ride so much of creating this plot, of Sammy be the typical twink who is laughed and bullied through school. Him being so skinny and seens as a wimp from lots of other boys. But there it even shines so much of his best friend Lucas, even wanting to help, I loved that conversation so much!

The bathroom part and later Sammy having "blue balls" was so hot. And how he didn't realize he had shrunk the boy outside who shotued that rude words to him, and then him having that itch during classes, even thought of "please don't let that boy be in my class", all was perfect writing style.

I think you read my previews reviews, and there is nothing more I would wish if you could use my ideas during future chapters, that would be like a dream coming true.

I hope you will let Sammy still stay most of the time unaware about his powers, and him just not really believing in them, or even yet thinking he had them, making it so much more thrilling to think about, he could always turn someone into anything, withouth even knowing.

I also would welcome it if you let some at least stay their consciousness and senses. Especially for turning people into flys, a boys anus, the tiny back area in someones cotton underpants, becoming normal cum and wiped away absorbed by an tissue or boxers, becoming the smelly stain in their while casually wearn again the next day during school and baking during classes under their skinny jeans, the honor or actually nightmare when someone becomes an anus and then having the first experience to vomit out a bowl movement. I would love to see maybe the gym teacher or Sammys math teacher become that, like the ideas I told in my review, with the boys speaking in a rude way about that "asshole" and the surprise exam, and the drawing of sucking the boys ass on the paper.

Would also love to see some boys becoming tiny flys and then try to get help from Sammy in his room, and end as a smear on a rolled up newspaper and the other ending with a turd on him in the bathroom.

Hope so much you will continue in this amazing innocent style. It was so nice to follow Sammy through his days, I can't get enough of this. It's such a thrilling idea of this twink boy going through his school life, and having no idea he turned people into objects or parts of bodys.

You totally deserve 10 out of 10 I wish I could give more. Thank you for writing, you made my day. Maybe if you like add your email or just a spam email on your profile, and if I see it I would love to mail you! You have so many ideas I loved in all your work, so similar to what I enjoy too. It would be awesome to meet a friend having the same fantasies.

Have a great day man!! Looking forward for lots of more chapters in this story.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2016 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

And then the boys talk about the exam outside on the floor, and them casually talking, eating chips, gulping down soda, one yawning, one popping some flips in his mouth, making fun and all talk in a rude way about the poor teacher, and then be like "what a prick", "told ya he was a douchbag", "yeah, what a shit head", "talking about shit, see ya next class, I need to take a dump". And then maybe they see an "ant" on the floor or step on it without even noticing, it being stuck half squished to one of their wearn out Converse shoes.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Your tf stories are the best. Could see lots of different transformations in this story. Maybe some unaware food tf? Someone ends as a small single peanut puff / Curly thrown into a bag with others, mixed and eaten by a boy totally unaware which one he snacks away wasn't an ordianry peanut puff.

Reviewer: redcars Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2016 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is already hot, glad to see you're doing another of this stories. What would I give to be in Sammys place. That would be fun to have those powers. Wonder what he would do, or maybe even accidentally send some people through hell he didn't even wanted to. Some accidtental transformation would be cool.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2016 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

AH! What a great surprise :] YES!! I was hoping you would write another story like Bully for you and seeing you want to add lots of chapters to this is AWESOME! Loved the first chapter already, especially I am in love already with Sammy, and the intro was bomb with the bullies taking away his clothes and he was just in his underpants. Would love to see the following tags happening: scat, nano, shrinking, vore, of course other body tf like anus would be awesome, other object tf (for example a single leaf of toilet paper) maybe food or animals or insects (tiny bug or fly). And I would love to see Sammy getting over some of his also skinny twink friends and them having no idea about Sammys new power, and Sammy actually having some fun or evenis unaware too, with some bullies "giving" to his unaware friend.

Here are some plot ideas I would love to see:

- some innocent people getting tfed/shrunk by Sammy, maybe without him even knowing about it, like school teachers or random people or kids, who never bullied him. It would be so ironic if some teacher ended as a bug, toilet paper, or food, and then exterminated or used or ate by one of the scools boys.

- Sammy could prepare the school toilet taking away the roll of toilet paper and lay his one leaf or two left on there, one of the leafs is a person he tfed before.

- An insect or more tf would be awesome. I thought of two bullies becoming tiny flys, and even Sammy had no idea about he turned them into flys. Maybe he thought of something like or said something ironic and this turnes them into tiny house flys, mostly happening in front of Sammys house. The two fly boys now need to get help, and they fly into Sammys house and room. Annoyed by some buzzing while making homework, Sammy uses a rolled up newspaper to squish one of the bug while pin pointing it down for a while in his room. The other fly, actually the bug brain turned over, flew into the bathroom, caused by the smell and landed in the toilet. Totally grossed out and screaming in his head, the fly took over and licked away urin and even worse, a shit stain. Then a dorplet of water or urin would stick him in place, can't fly away anymore. And the worst happens when Sammy comes in and takes a shit on him, the gigantic turd slowly hovering over him and PLOP, the wet goo just gently plopping on him.

- Underpants tf, or anus tf would be awesome. Mostly Sammy being unaware about where the guy went to, ahving no idea he became his anus. This could be epic combined with the tf toilet part, also a part of of course telling it from the POV of the "anus".

- Friend being over playing console with Sammy, and him asking for a condom because he had a date later, and the condom was actually one person Sammy turned into. Also he wished one person to become his friends underpants would be cool, or another turned into a single m&m or peanute, being eating by the boys or swallowed whole, having the fun of digested alive and turned into poo.

- Someone becomes a tiny bug on the ground in school or a few people, one being sat on in school classes by a skinny boys ass jeans, one stepped on. Most ironic would be a bully becomes a bug and then being cruely stepped on by his friends in class, or just smeared in half like stepped on his bugs feet and smearing them into a paste, him screaming in nightmarish sounds, the teens above him having no idea a half crushed bug was glued to one of their sneakers on the side, and walking casually through school, the bug fell off in the cafeteria and stepped on again by a shy skinny twink, looking down and be like, poor little guy, let me take you out of your misery, pivoting his shoe even from side to side giving it a twist over the floor then smiling as he did something good and walking to his place to eat.

- I loved the blue goo idea with its being the guys soul. What if Sammy turns someine into a tiny amount of blue goo and gives it to his friend saying it was lube, then being used smearing on the boys anus and inserting a pen in his ass to try how anal feels. The poor guy merges with the boys anus.

- There could be a school party and Sammy turns a bully into a female sex doll and leaves it behind, then being used by the boys during the party.

And so many more ideas :] Thank you for writing another m/m story again, this is already awesome!! Would love to hear back from you again. Keep it up man!!

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2016 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!! Hoping he gets to some of the female students soon ;)